Age of Swords: Book Two of The Legends of the First Empire
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Age of Swords: Book Two of The Legends of the First Empire

Hardcover – July 25, 2017

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$28.00
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Hardcover
Pages
496
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Del Rey
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978-1101965368
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6.39 x 1.56 x 9.43 inches
Weight
1.6 pounds

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Praise for Michael J. Sullivan “If you enjoy epic fantasy, and are perhaps hungering for something with timeless appeal, then I highly recommend picking up Age of Myth .” —The BiblioSanctum , on Age of Myth “Hair-raising escapes, flashy sword fights, and faithful friendship complete the formula for good old-fashioned escapist fun.” —Publishers Weekly , on Theft of Swords “Filled with adventure and clever dialogue and featuring a pair of not-quite-heroes whose loyalties to each other provide them with their greatest strength, this epic fantasy showcases the arrival of a master storyteller.” —Library Journal , on Theft of Swords “With less gore and a smaller cast of characters than George R. R. Martin’s Song of Ice and Fire but equally satisfying, Sullivan’s epic fantasy will be gaining fans at exponential rates.” —Library Journal , on The Rose and the Thorn Michael J. Sullivan opened the first door to his imagination with typewriter keys found in a friend’s basement when he was just eight years old. Today he uses computer keys, writing classic fantasy with unlikely heroes, including the bestselling Riyria novels and his latest epic, The Legends of the First Empire. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Chapter OneThe StormMost people believe the first battle of the Great War occurred at Grandford in the early spring, but the first attack actually took place on a summer’s day in Dahl Rhen.—xadThe Book of Brin“Are we safe?” Perxadsephxadone shouted up at the oak.Magda was the oldest tree in the forest, massive and majestic. Standing before her was like staring at an ocean or mountain; each made Perxadsephxadone feel small. Realizing her three-xadword question might be too simple, too vague, she added, “Is there more that needs to be done to protect my people from the Fhrey?”Perxadsephxadone waited for an answer.Wind blew; the tree shook, and a massive branch fell.She jumped when it hit the ground. Falling from such a height, the limb would have killed her if it had landed a few inches closer. Broken branches suspended in the forest canopy were called widow-xadmakers. Since Perxadsephxadone had already lost her husband, the dead wood lying beside her must have been an overachiever.“What’s that about?” Perxadsephxadone asked Suri.The young mystic with the white wolf glanced at the fallen branch and shrugged. “Just the wind, I think. Feels like a storm is coming.”Once before, when Perxadsephxadone had sought the great tree’s counsel, Magda’s advice had saved her people. Now she was back, seeking answers again. Months had passed since her last visit, and life at Dahl Rhen had returned to a comfortable routine. The destruction created by the battle between two Miralyith had been cleaned up, but Perxadsephxadone knew that hadn’t ended the conflict. Questions remained—xadquestions no human or Fhrey could answer. And yetu2008.u2008.u2008.u2008u200bPerxadsephxadone looked at the fallen tree limb. It’s not a good sign when Magda starts a conversation by trying to crush me.“Something wrong?” Arion asked. The Fhrey was still learning their language and stood beside Suri and Minna watching the proceedings with great interest. She wore the green hat Padera had crocheted for her; its whimsical quality made the Miralyith appear more approachable, less divine, more—xadhuman. Arion had come along to witness the oracle in action, although Perxadsephxadone had expected more talk and less action.Suri looked up at the tree. “Don’t know.”“What’s Magda saying?” Perxadsephxadone shouted to Suri over the rising howl of wind.That was how it was supposed to work. Perxadsephxadone posed questions to the tree and the mystic revealed the answer after listening to the rustling of leaves and branches. But Arion was right about something being wrong. Suri had a perplexed look on her face—xadmore than merely puzzled; she looked concerned.“Not sure,” the girl replied.Perxadsephxadone clawed a lock of hair away from her mouth. “Why not? Is she talking in riddles or just ignoring you?”Suri’s face twisted in frustration. “Oh, she’s talking, all right, but so fast I can’t tell what she’s saying. Just babbling, really. Never seen her like this. She keeps repeating ‘Runu2008.u2008.u2008.u2008u200brun fastu2008.u2008.u2008.u2008u200brun far. They’re after you.’u2009”“They? Who? Is she talking to us? Is that the answer to my questions?”Suri shook her head, short hair whipping across the tattoos on her forehead. “Nope. She was yelling before you said anything. I don’t think she heard you. I’m not even sure how Magda knows the word run. I mean, seriously, how does a tree know what that is?”“Are you saying the tree is hysterical?”Suri nodded. “Scared to death. I know mice who have made more sense. She’s not even using words now, just making noises.” Suri’s brows jumped up, her face tensing, eyes squinting, mouth pulling tight.“What?” Perxadsephxadone asked.“It’s never good when a tree screams.”Tall grass slapped Perxadsephxadone’s legs, her dress whipping and snapping. Ripped from their branches, the oak’s leaves flew thick as snow in a blizzard. Under the dense canopy, Perxadsephxadone couldn’t see the sky, but the wind was stronger than ever. Stepping out, she discovered that what had been clear blue just moments before had turned a tumultuous gray. Dark clouds bubbled one upon another, turning midday into twilight. A strange green light cast everything in an eerie, unnatural hue.“What’s happening?” Arion asked.“Tree is panicking,” Suri answered.“Maybe we should return to the dahl,” Arion said, her head tilted up. “Yes?”Minna whined and drew closer to Suri, nearly knocking the girl down. The mystic knelt to comfort her wolf. “Not right, is it, Minna?”Looking more serious, Arion gave up speaking Rhunic and returned to her native tongue. “We need to—xad” She was cut off by a blinding flash and horrific crack.Minna yelped and bolted down the slope.Perxadsephxadone staggered. Blinded by the afterimage that left a bright, splotchy band across her vision, she vainly tried to blink it away. Her nostrils filled with wood smoke, and she felt the heat of a blaze.Magda is on fire!Arion lay on the ground at the base of the tree, both hands raised, shielding herself. The Miralyith shouted a single word—xadnothing Perxadsephxadone recognized—xadbut it sounded like a command. The fire engulfing the old oak vanished with a pop. In its place was a terrible hiss and smoke swirling in a malevolent wind. Magda was split down the center, cleaved in two. A horrible blackened gash with bright-xadred edges flared with each gust of wind. The ancient and wondrous mother of trees had taken a mortal blow from the gods.Perxadsephxadone helped Arion to her feet.“We need to run,” the Fhrey told them.“What? Why?”Arion grabbed her by the wrist and pulled. “Now!”Perxadsephxadone’s scalp tingled as Arion dragged her down the hill and out of the glade toward the thick shadow of the Crescent Forest. Suri and Minna were already ahead of them, sprinting.Crack!Lightning struck the ground somewhere behind them.Crack! Crack!Two more bolts rent the air close enough for her to feel their heat. Running together, Perxadsephxadone and Arion followed Suri and Minna as they plunged headlong into the forest through thickets, brambles, and thorns. Gasping for air, Perxadsephxadone glanced back. A series of scorch marks smoldered in a direct line between the oak and where they stood.Crack!They all jumped as the sound exploded directly overhead. Like the old oak, the trees above caught fire. One huge branch fell like a giant torch—xadanother widow-xadmaker wannabe.“Need shelter,” Arion said, and pulled again.“Rol nearby,” Suri shouted. “This way.” The girl dashed deeper into the wood, Minna bounding at her side.Perxadsephxadone might not understand the language of trees, but she understood anguish. The wood shrieked. Branches snapped; trunks groaned, and the forest cried out as the wind stripped away summer gowns of green. Then a new sound rose, a loud, all-xadencompassing roar from everywhere at once. At first, Perxadsephxadone thought it might be sheets of rain, but the noise was much too loud, far too violent. Balls of ice tore through leaves and branches. Fist-xadsized missiles assailed the canopy, ricocheting off limbs and trunks. With arms raised over her head, Perxadsephxadone screamed as two huge chunks of ice struck her back, glancing blows, but they carried the sting of a switch and the force of a punch.Ahead, Suri stopped at the foot of a sheer, rocky cliff and slapped the face of it with her palm. To Perxadsephxadone’s immense relief, a section of the stone’s face opened, revealing a little room neatly carved out of rock. The mystic leapt inside, followed closely by the wolf. From the doorway, Suri swung her arms in huge circles, waving the other women to safety. The chieftain of Dahl Rhen and the Miralyith crossed the threshold together, crouching to avoid hitting their heads. Once in, Perxadsephxadone turned to witness the destruction.Crack!Another bolt of lightning split the air, and for an instant, a dazzling array of translucent shades of green illuminated the leaves, a light brighter than the sun.Crack!A nearby cottonwood caught fire. Sheared in half, the tree fell in a rain of sparks and flame. The wind fanned the fires started by the strikes, spreading an inferno—xadice and fire, wind and debris. Perxadsephxadone stared, lost somewhere between horror and awe.Suri slapped the keystone, and the door closed.Outside, the lightning cracks and hammering hail continued, but from a safe, muffled distance. Panting from the run and realizing they’d escaped without significant injury, the three exchanged the stunned looks of survivors. Relief washed over Perxadsephxadoneu2008.u2008.u2008.u2008u200buntil she noticed they weren’t alone.Gifford would never win a footrace. Although he came to this realization late in life, everyone else knew it the day he was born. His left leg lacked feeling, couldn’t support his weight, and dragged. His back wasn’t much better. Severely twisted, it forced his hips in one direction and his shoulders in another. Most people pitied Gifford and a few even despised him. He never understood either.Roan was the exception. What everyone else saw as hopeless, she took as a challenge.The two were out in front of Gifford’s roundhouse, and Roan was lashing the wood-xadand-xadtin contraption to his left leg, tightening its leather straps. She knelt in the grass before him, wearing her work apron, a smudge of charcoal on the side of her nose. Her dark-xadbrown hair was pulled back in a short ponytail so high on her head that it looked like a rooster’s crest.Dozens of cuts from working with sharp metal marred her clever little hands. Gifford wanted to hold them, kiss the wounds, and take the pain away. He’d tried taking her hand once, and it hadn’t gone well. She’d pulled away, her eyes widened with fear, and a look of horror crossed her face. Roan had an aversion to being touched—xadGifford had known that—xadhe’d simply forgotten himself. Her reaction wasn’t limited to him. She couldn’t suffer anyone’s touch.Yanking hard on the ankle strap, Roan nodded with a firm, determined expression. “That should do it.” She rose and dusted her clean hands symbolically. Her voice was eager but serious. “Ready?”Gifford answered by pulling himself up with the aid of his crafting table. The device on his leg, constructed from wooden sticks and metal hinges, squeaked as he rose, a sound like the opening of a tiny door.“Do you have your weight on it? Try. See if it holds.”For Gifford, any attempt to support himself with his left leg was akin to leaning on water. But he’d gladly fall on his face for her. Perhaps he could manage a roll and make her grin. If he’d been born with two stout legs, strong and agile, he’d dance and twirl like a fool to amuse her. He might even make her laugh, something she rarely did. In her mind, she was still a slave, something less than nothing. Gifford longed for Roan to see herself the way he did, but damaged as he was, he made a poor mirror casting back a broken image.Gifford tilted his hips, shifting some weight to his lame leg. He didn’t fall. A strain tugged on the straps wrapped around his thigh and calf, but his leg held. His mouth dropped open, his eyes widened, and Roan actually did smile.By Mari, what an amazing sight.He couldn’t help grinning back. He was standing straight—xador as straight as his gnarled back allowed. Using magic armor fashioned by Roan, Gifford was winning an impossible battle.“Take a step,” she coaxed, hands clenched in fists of excitement.Gifford shifted weight back to his right side and lifted his left leg, swinging it forward. The hinges squeaked once more. He took a step the way normal people did a million times, and that’s when the brace collapsed.“Oh, no!” Roan gasped as Gifford fell, barely missing the newly glazed cups drying in the morning sun.His cheek and ear slammed into the hardened dirt, jarring his head. But his elbow, hand, and hip took the bulk of the punishment. To Roan, it must have looked painful, but Gifford knew how to fall. He’d been doing it his entire life.“I’m so, so, so sorry.” Roan was back on her knees, bent over him as he rolled to his side. Her grin was gone, the world less bright.“I’m okay, no pwoblem. I missed the cups.”“The metal failed.” She struggled to hold back tears as her injured hands ran over the brace.“The tin just isn’t strong enough. I’m so sorry.”“It held fo’ a while,” he said to cheer her up. “Keep at it. You’ll make it wuk. I know you will.”“There’s an added force when walking. I should have accounted for the additional weight when your other leg is raised.” She slapped the side of her head several times, flinching with each strike. “I should have realized that. I should have. How could I not—xad”He instinctively grabbed her wrist to prevent additional blows. “Don’t do—xad”Roan screamed and jerked away, drawing back in terror. When she recovered, they exchanged embarrassed looks, mirroring each other. The moment dragged unpleasantly until Gifford forced a smile. Not one of his best, but it was all he could manage.To ease past the uncomfortable pause, he picked up the conversation where they’d left off, pretending nothing had happened. “Woan, you can’t know ev-xadwe-xadthing when doing something new. It’ll be betta next time.”She blinked at him twice, then shifted her focus. She wasn’t looking at anything in particular; she was thinking. Sometimes Roan thought so intently that he could almost hear it. She blinked again and emerged from the stupor. Walking over to Gifford’s crafting table, she picked up one of his cups. The awkward moment vanished as if it had never happened.“This design is new, isn’t it?” she asked. “Do you think it could hold its shape at a much larger size? If we could find a way to—xad”Gifford’s smile turned genuine. “Yew a genius, Woan. Has anyone told you that?”She nodded, her little rooster crest whipping. “You have.”“Because it’s twue,” he said.She looked embarrassed again, the way she always did when he complimented her, the way she looked when anyone said something nice, a familiar unease. Her eyes shifted back to the brace, and she sighed. “I need something stronger. Can’t make it out of stone; can’t make it out of wood.”“I wouldn’t suggest clay,” he said, pushing his luck at trying to be funny. “Though I would have made you a beautiful hinge.”“I know you would,” she said in complete seriousness.Roan wasn’t one for jokes. Much of humor arose from the unexpected or preposterous—xadlike making a hinge out of clay. But her mind didn’t work that way. To Roan, nothing was too absurd and no idea too crazy.“I’ll just have to think of something,” she said while unbuckling the brace. “Some way to strengthen the metal. There’s always a better way. That’s what Padera says, and she’s always right.” Read more

Features & Highlights

  • USA Today & Washington Post BestsellerThe gods have been proven mortal and new heroes will arise as the battle continues in the sequel to
  • Age of Myth--
  • from the author of the Riyria Revelations and Riyria Chronicles series.
  • In
  • Age of Myth,
  • fantasy master Michael J. Sullivan launched readers on an epic journey of magic and adventure, heroism and betrayal, love and loss. Now the thrilling saga continues as the human uprising is threatened by powerful enemies from without--and bitter rivalries from within. Raithe, the God Killer, may have started the rebellion by killing a Fhrey, but long-standing enmities dividing the Rhunes make it all but impossible to unite against the common foe. And even if the clans can join forces, how will they defeat an enemy whose magical prowess renders them indistinguishable from gods? The answer lies across the sea in a faraway land populated by a reclusive and dour race who feel nothing but disdain for both Fhrey and mankind. With time running out, Persephone leads the gifted young seer Suri, the Fhrey sorceress Arion, and a small band of misfits in a desperate search for aid--a quest that will take them into the darkest depths of Elan. There, an ancient adversary waits, as fearsome as it is deadly.
  • Don't miss any of Michael J. Sullivan's Legends of the First Empire novels:
  • AGE OF MYTH
  • AGE OF SWORDS
  • AGE OF WAR
  • AGE OF LEGEND
  • AGE OF DEATH AGE OF EMPYRE
  • Praise for Michael J. Sullivan
  • "If you enjoy epic fantasy, and are perhaps hungering for something with timeless appeal, then I highly recommend picking up
  • Age of Myth
  • ."
  • --The BiblioSanctum
  • , on
  • Age of Myth
  • "Hair-raising escapes, flashy sword fights, and faithful friendship complete the formula for good old-fashioned escapist fun."
  • --Publishers Weekly
  • ,
  • on
  • Theft of Swords
  • "Filled with adventure and clever dialog and featuring a pair of not-quite-heroes whose loyalties to each other provide them with their greatest strength, this epic fantasy showcases the arrival of a master storyteller."
  • --Library Journal
  • ,
  • on
  • Theft of Swords
  • "With less gore and a smaller cast of characters than George R. R. Martin's Song of Ice and Fire but equally satisfying, Sullivan's epic fantasy will be gaining fans at exponential rates."
  • --Library Journal
  • ,
  • on
  • The Rose and the Thorn

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as I enjoyed Age of Myth

I was excited for this book to come out, as I enjoyed Age of Myth, but this is amateur YA drivel. When Roan invented the wheel is when the eye-rolling started, and continued through Brin inventing written language the same week, and Roan doubling back and inventing archery a few days later. I'm fine with strong female characters, but this was Mary-Suing all over the place. Add to that all the men are chest-thumpingly stupid and incompetent, and you wind up with this ham-fisted turd of a book. Don't waste your $14.99.
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Wonderful Epic Fantasy! Even Better than the First Book!

Wow! And I thought Book One was good. I just turned the last page on this second book of the “Legends of the First Empire” series and feel blown away! It’s the best feeling I’ve had when finishing an epic fantasy novel in quite some time. Of course, this series is a prequel series to the much-loved Riyria books (Revelations and Chronicles), set 3000 years before those. To quote the author’s blog about book one, ”Age of Myth is a small story that will launch an epic tale that will lay the foundations for a world where in three thousand years two thieves will uncover much of what was lost, but so many more revelations remain to be discovered.” Age of Swords most definitely launches that epic tale in full force.

I will resist spewing out a plot summary because I would never do it justice and it would come out sounding like many other fantasy books written over the past 30 years or so. However, I will say that it picks up shortly after the events of “Age of Myth” with the same major characters and revolves around the need for the human clans to become more practical in order to deal with the very real threat from the long-lived and magic-wielding Fhrey (elves). Along the way, other major characters are introduced as well as the dwarven race (properly called “Belgriclungreians), whose impact on events cannot be overstated.

The author’s world building is once again in evidence but now is solidifying more. I have a much greater understanding of the political situation, especially the Fhrey due to several very engrossing chapters about what is happening concurrently in their part of the world. What seemed vast in the first book now seems more concrete, with each of the clans displaying unique personalities, much like the characters themselves. Normally I tend to shy away from books with lots of characters; they seem to blend together so often and I lose track of who is doing what to whom. But here, the author really shows his writing chops. Every character, even the minor ones, are distinctive and personalized, all of which led to my own sinking completely in to the story.

I also enjoyed watching our main characters learn from the other races, achieving great advancements quickly such as learning about the wheel, developing carts, wagons, baskets, barrels, and discovering writing as well as the bow and arrow. And of course, since this is the “Age of Swords” they advance from simple copper weapons to bronze, iron, and what appears to be steel. Perhaps the most satisfying parts of the story are how they use their brains to leverage this information and techniques to achieve what was previously thought impossible, making heroes out of some and chumps out of others. I would be remiss to not also show some love for Suri and her remarkable transformation in the use of the Art. I foresee great things coming from her.

This is, indeed, a complex world but Mr. Sullivan has a way of making it all completely understandable and relatable. He balances the earthiness and texture of the human clans with the political intrigue and royal factions of the advanced race of Fhrey and tosses in the engineering skills and comic relief of the dwarves. The ending of this book was emotional and extremely satisfying and certainly sets a high mark for the following novels in the series still to come.

Highest recommendation!
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Abandon all hope....

I was going to give this book 1/2 a star, but the grading system wouldn't let me. Honestly, the half star wouldn't even have represented literary excellence by the author, more so that the periods and question marks are in the right place. To say this is a step back would be an understatement, and I'm not interested enough to see if the series can right the ship. Other reviewers have pointed out the ludicrous nature of how the author advances the story....namely have innovations coming so fast and furious it defies any sort of sense. Not to mention the lack of representation by the most interesting characters from the first book. If you are looking for a feminist fairy tale though, by all means dive in.
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Action! Surprises! Heroes! Villains!

The second book in the new series, The Legends of the First Empire, by Michael J. Sullivan, takes readers into a much larger world than the first book. We learn of other races and locations in the world, and we are introduced to new people. The scope of the action is much larger, and characters in the book face new challenges in a rapidly changing world. This book is a real "page-turner," full of action and suspense. At the same time, Sullivan gives us characters that come alive on the page, with insight into what motivates their choices. Sullivan is a master of balancing fast-paced action and unexpected plot-twists with vivid characterization and insights into people and their cultures.

I became a fan with Sullivan's first book and have eagerly read every book published so far, with no disappointments. His work is even better when reread, as I then can appreciate more his skill in foreshadowing and in writing very satisfying conclusions. At 75 years of age, I have read thousands of books, especially fantasy/sci-fi, historical fiction, and literary fiction, and I believe Mr. Sullivan is making a place for himself among writers whose books endure.
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weaker than the previous book; strains credibility (not in a fun way)

Although I enjoyed book one ("Legends of the First Empire"), I found this one a little disappointing and simplistic. One of the things I Iiked about the other book was the complexity and unexpected twists, with things developing in directions I hadn't anticipated. In this book the characters seemed more flat--they each had 2 or 3 unique qualities (which is better than just having 1), but those same notes were hit repeatedly and never seemed to go anywhere new. I also found it super-annoying to witness "all the key milestones of a culture!" being invented in rapid sequence by a single person. Really? The wheel AND writing AND centralized government AND advanced weapons, all invented by the same person in less than a year? It strains credulity. Ditto on this book being the place where the old names were replaced with "elf" and "dwarf" etc.... why not just keep the new language rather than having a 10-second shift in which people suddenly come up with the generic fantasy terms? I found it reduced credibility in the story rather than adding interest. And it was annoying that when the inventor came up with the wheel, the dwarves suddenly said "oh! you've just invented The Wheel for your culture... let me tell you about axles, and spindles, and all these other things that will make it even better," like they're saying "we won't say a WORD until you hit XYZ point, but then we'll give you All The Information at once." It just seemed odd, and I couldn't quite follow the logic for it. (If it was just a case of "we're on your side now," then surely they could have shared a lot more than just advanced wheel technology, no?).

There were a couple of places where human interest and human complexity ran deeper than one might expect, but overall I found this was a shift toward a younger audience, vis-à-vis the previous book.
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Waste of time

Disappointing, long winded follow up to the first in the series
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The action begins!

Book one laid the groundwork, book two begins the action! The book picks up exactly where the previous left off. (If you haven't read book one, stop reading this review, there will be spoilers for you.)

The Fhrey are angry. They have put themselves in the place of gods and the Rhunes have bought it. Well, not anymore. Thanks to Malcom and Raithe they have been proven to be mortal. And they don't like it. They take revenge and begin plotting and planning for the total destruction of Rhunes. The Fane has internal pressures to contend with, partly from his son.

The Rhunes are resilient though. Persephone calls for a full tribe council to elect a "keenig" to lead them into battle. They gather in Tirre, with a squad of Fhrey outlaws and three Dhergs. But in order to have any chance in the war, they must be trained by the Galantians and have the dwarves help them make weapons. And of course, there are dangers with both.

The interpersonal relationships between the characters get more attention in this book. Moya, Brin, Roan and Suri are more involved in the story and we spend more time with the councils and characters of the Fhrey. And of course, we're introduced to the dwarves (who do not like being called Dhergs!) and their cultures and quirks.

It's shaping up to be a great series. It's going to be hard to wait a year for the next one. I have a whole TV miniseries running through my head with what could be done.
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Exciting Continuation of Series

Age of Swords is the second of the 6 part series “Legend of the First Empire” and is self-contained. This book can be enjoyed without reading the first book even though interesting things happened in it.

On the world of Elan, there are long-lived elves, dwarves, and the “recently” arrived humans. Persephone is the widow of the human Rhen clan chieftain and is now its chieftain by default. Living with them are a few fugitive dwarves and several “traitorous” elves that refused to help the elven empire attack other human clans. A surprise attack by a magical storm and giants destroys the Rhen clan’s village and kills a majority of its members. Persephone suspects that this attack is the beginning of a new war with the elves. She orders that the village be abandoned and the survivors walk to another human clan, hoping for refuge and to form an alliance with the other nine human clans for defense.

But there is a problem. Even if the human clans unite, human weapons can’t match elven weapons. So Persephone decides to travel with a few friends on an extremely dangerous journey to ask the dwarves for weapons. But will they agree and what impossible task will they demand as their price?
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Dialogue style reduced my enjoyment.

I read the first book in this series, Age of Myth, and had some issues with it which kept me from thinking it was more than just an okay read. I read it, however, because I wanted to be prepared for this second book so I would know if I will be continuing with the series and if I want to begin reading two other book series related to this one by this author. Michael J. Sullivan has done an adequate job of including concise backstory from the first book, but I think it will still be best for readers to read that first novel to understand this fantasy world.

Age of Swords brings the characters from the first book to the realization that they are going to be involved in a war, no matter how much they might wish to avoid that. Now we meet giants and dwarfs. The dwarfs have weaponry which the humans, called Rhunes here, haven't learned how to make yet but they want Persephone to handle a problem faced by their race before she can have the weapons. Persephone is now leading her clan and has planed to move away from their settlement in order to find safety in an area with other Rhunes. She knows that her followers will need to protect themselves during this journey so the first stage of the journey begins with a trip across the sea to the home of the dwarfs to acquire weapons.

Once again I found it hard to mentally place this race of humans in a setting where they had no knowledge of such basic inventions as a wooden cart to carry heavy loads and yet they speak in modern 21st Century language. It was most disconcerting. One example of this jarring disconnect comes when Raithe (known as The God Killer because....well, he killed a god) is talking to a man who was a slave before throwing his lot in with Raithe: "What did you do today, Mister Enterprising Ball of Ambition?" This coming from a man who is a fighter with all the skills of that craft but only rudimentary skills for anything else at all. This style of writing dialogue is just too noticeable when the narration deals with people who don't even know what a wheel is. Plus, even if there had not been the problem with the dialogue I still had the problem of being perfectly content to put this book aside for long periods and not even think about picking it up again. I just never became attached to most of the characters and certainly was not riveted to the page. I will not be continuing this series.
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Talk about a 180 turn from his previous work.

Very disappointing. His previous works are fantastic. Royce and Hadrian were amazing. But then he does a complete 180 with Age of Swords and let me down.

I only have two gripes, but they are pervasive throughout the book.

1) The blatant over-compensating for the issue of "weak female characters in fantasy". He wrote all the main female characters as world-changing super-heroines who can do no wrong. All of them. Not only that, but they made their climb to greatness in literally a matter of days. Conversely, all of the main male characters are weak-minded belly scratching buffoons. Heck, he even took the master swordsman and famed god-killer from the first book and neutered him. Raithe spends the entire book as an indecisive selfish moron until the end when he spontaneously morphs into the spokesman for the feminist movement. This weird male bashing, girl power thing came out of the blue from Sullivan and turned what could have been a phenomenal story into a painful read.

2) Inventing the wheel, written language and archery in a week? And perfecting iron working after an evening of observation? C'mon. I know it's fantasy, but really? Not to mention Suri mastering the Art in less than a month when it normally takes centuries. Talk about some massive eye-rolls here Sullivan. You're better than this.
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