Black Rain: A Thriller (Danielle Laidlaw)
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Black Rain: A Thriller (Danielle Laidlaw)

Mass Market Paperback – January 26, 2010

Price
$8.99
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Dell Books
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ISBN-13
978-0553592412
Dimensions
4.3 x 1.13 x 6.9 inches
Weight
8.5 ounces

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From Publishers Weekly Mayan myth, including the much-ballyhooed 2012 doomsday theory, forms the backbone of this action-packed debut. Danielle Laidlaw, an investigator for a covert branch of the National Research Institute, sets off into the Amazon with a small group of mercenaries, renegades, rogues, and scholars to uncover the source of mysterious radioactive crystals, hoping to find an ancient Mayan city and a possible source for clean energy. Ruthless billionaire Richard Kaufman has his own plans for the technology and will stop at nothing to get it, even if it means killing Danielle and her team. There are other dangers lurking in the rain forests, including a cartoonishly savage tribe of natives called the Chollokwan and a mysterious man-eating creature. A few sections seem unnecessarily padded, but the fast pace and nonstop violence will keep readers forging ahead. (Feb.) Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved. " Black Rain is an adventure that's not only a terrific read, but is smart, intelligent, and poised to shake up the whole thriller community.xa0 Every copy should come with a bucket of popcorn and a John Williams soundtrack to play in the background.xa0 Loved it."—Linwood Barclay, author of Fear the Worst " Black Rain sizzles with tension and twists that both entertain and magnetize. xa0The plot envelopes the reader into a brilliantly conceived world, full of strange and amazing things. xa0Graham Brown is an exciting new talent, a writer we're going to be hearing a lot from in the years ahead. xa0I can't wait."—Steve Berry, authorxa0of The Paris Vendetta Graham Brown was born in Chicago. He is a pilot and an attorney. He lives with his wife, Tracey, in Tucson, Arizona, where he is currently at work on his second novel for Bantam Dell, a sequel to Black Rain. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Chapter OneManaus, Brazil Danielle Laidlaw sat alone on the terrace of a small café overlooking the great river. In the heat-induced calm of a sweltering afternoon she watched the sun paint traces of gold on the river’s surface. It was a mesmerizing and hypnotic sight, and one she’d gazed at for too long.She turned her attention to the café, looking past the tables and their bright yellow umbrellas to what she could see of the café’s interior. In the heat of the afternoon the place was all but empty. Certainly there was no sign of the man she was waiting on, a man who was running atypically late.With quick hands, she retrieved her BlackBerry, checked for any messages and then typed a none-too-subtle text. It read: Where the hell are you?Before she could press send, she caught sight of him, speaking to a waiter in the café’s foyer.She spotted his silver hair first, and then his craggy face as he turned in her direction. He walked toward her, as nattily dressed as always, today in dark slacks, a button-down shirt and a navy blue dinner jacket. She wondered how he could wear such clothes in the heat of central Brazil, but then Arnold Moore didn’t do compromise very well, not even with the vagaries of nature.“You’re late,” she said. “Did you have trouble finding this place?”He pursed his lips as if the suggestion itself was ludicrous. “Of course not,” he said. “I simply asked where one might find a brooding, dark-haired woman angrily checking her BlackBerry a hundred times a minute. Surprisingly, only seven different people pointed me in your direction.”As she smiled at his barb, Danielle sensed the eyes of the waitstaff upon them. It happened more often than not. She was thirty-one, tall and fit with high cheekbones and glossy chestnut hair, and he was twice her age, gray and refined, almost continental in his bearing. People who saw them together commonly gawked, assuming her to be his mistress or trophy wife or perhaps, less cynically, a niece or daughter. The truth would have surprised them: she was his partner, his protégé and one of the few people in the world he actually trusted.As ranking field operatives for an American organization known as the National Research Institute, Danielle Laidlaw and Arnold Moore had traveled much of the globe together. In just the prior year they’d spent time in eleven countries, studying everything from oil field resuscitation in the Baltics to nano-tube production in Tokyo. They’d even been to Venice as the NRI partnered with the Italian government on a plan to protect the island with a band of giant sea gates.Their stock-in-trade was to examine cutting-edge projects and determine what technologies, if any, could be valuable to the United States. Then, through a combination of relationship building, bribes, or even outright theft, they were to secure for their country what might be of interest.To that end, she and Moore spent their days in cutting-edge labs or at illustrious seminars. Their nights resembled those of the jet set, attending state functions and elaborate parties thrown by corporations and wealthy entrepreneurs. It was often as glamorous as it was rewarding. So far, however, the mission to Brazil was proving to be an exception.The NRI’s interest in the country was unrelated to anything being designed, developed or produced there. In fact, it concerned the past as much as the future, beginning with a group of artifacts recovered from the Amazon by an American explorer named Blackjack Martin.A fortune hunter more than anything else, Martin launched his expedition in 1926, in search of anything that might bring him fame. He returned a year later having mostly failed. The stories he told were laughed off as fanciful exaggerations or outright lies. And the few artifacts he did bring back raised little more than passing interest and were soon consigned to the dusty backrooms of various museums, forgotten if not lost. At least, that is, until a chance encounter with one of them, and an examination with modern tools, had drawn the NRI’s substantial interest.Since then, Danielle and Arnold Moore had been in Brazil, trying without success to pick up on Blackjack Martin’s trail. After months of fruitless effort, Danielle believed she’d finally found something that would help.“I have good news,” she said. “And something to show you.”Moore grabbed a cloth napkin and snapped it open. “And I have bad news,” he said, “straight from the mouth of our director.”The words were spoken in a tone that Moore reserved for moments of disgust. She sensed a hint of resignation on Moore’s face, the bitterness of another argument lost or some new and bizarre order being implemented over his objection, something that had become a pattern on this particular assignment.“What’s happened now?” she asked.Moore shook his head. “You first. Perhaps something positive will take the sting out of what I have to tell you.”“Fine,” she said, reaching into a small leather bag at the foot of the table. She pulled out a flat gray stone and placed it in front of Moore. “Take a look at that.”About two inches thick, the stone was roughly rectangular in shape, with jagged edges on three sides and a face slightly larger than a postcard. It tapered at one end and was covered with weathered symbols, including one that resembled a skull and others that appeared to represent animals.Moore took the stone from her, holding it out at arm’s length. He squinted hard before giving in to necessity and pulling a pair of bifocals from his pocket. With great precision he placed them in their proper spot at the end of his nose.“Hieroglyphic,” he noted.“And clearly Mayan,” she said.He nodded, angling the piece for a better view. As he did, the edges of the glyphs caught the sun. “My, my,” he whispered to himself. “Now, this is a sight.”“Take a look at the top right corner,” she said. “Recognize that one?”Moore studied the glyph, a grin creeping onto his face. “The same mark we saw on Blackjack Martin’s cradle,” he said. “Xibalba: the underworld.”Her eyebrows went up in triumph. If they were right, this was the first real proof they’d found supporting what Martin had described in his wild journals. “Hard to believe, isn’t it?”“Yes,” he said. “Very hard.” He looked at her suspiciously. “Where did you get this?”“I bought it from a logger who’d taken his crew upriver for contraband hardwoods. Mahogany, for the most part.”Mahogany was an important cash crop in the Amazon, but the trees grew slowly and most of those in accessible areas had been felled long ago. Others were protected. As a result, increasing amounts of illegal logging took place far upriver, where the loggers went in search of untouched lands to harvest. As time went by, this trade took them deeper and deeper into the watershed, to places where few others journeyed.“How far in was he?’ Moore asked with renewed enthusiasm.“Eight days from here, a trip we could make in four or five.”As Moore examined the stone, Danielle felt a new surge of energy. A reverberation of the jolt she’d felt when first viewing the stone herself—and something sorely needed by both of them.“Did he know what he was selling you?” Moore asked, flipping the stone over.“Not the specifics,” she said. “But he knows where it came from and he claimed to have seen a much larger stone nearby, one with similar markings. Too heavy to carry, apparently, so he took this one instead.”She watched as Moore ran his fingers across the sharp edges on the back of the stone; the rest was relatively smooth and weathered.“Recent break,” he said. “I wonder if he chipped this piece off of the bigger one.”“My thoughts exactly,” she said.Moore looked up. “What else did he tell you?”“He said they hired some members of the Nuree tribe to act as guides upriver. One of the tribesmen pointed out the larger stone as they were hiking along the banks of a small tributary. They treat it as a marker of some kind, denoting the border of a land they consider to be cursed. Beyond it lie terrible things, apparently: shadows darker than the night, a tribe that converses with the spirits and controls wild animals . . . and a wall,” she said, “made with the bones of human beings.”It was local folklore—more often outright false than even partly reliable—but in this case they had reason to trust it, at least enough to hope. One of the few landmarks Blackjack Martin had used in his journal was a place he called the Wall of Skulls. If they could find it, they might be able to trace the rest of his movements and locate the source of the items he’d brought back. And if they could do that . . .“A wall made of bones,” Moore repeated. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • From Graham Brown, co-author of
  • the
  • New York Times
  • bestselling thriller
  • Devil’s Gate
  • with Clive Cussler, comes
  • Black Rain
  • . . .
  • Covert government operative Danielle Laidlaw leads an expedition into the deepest reaches of the Amazon in search of a legendary Mayan city. Assisted by a renowned university professor and protected by a mercenary named Hawker, her team journeys into the tangled rain forest—unaware that they are replacements for a group that vanished weeks before, and that the treasure they are seeking is no mere artifact but a breakthrough discovery that could transform the world. Shadowed by a ruthless billionaire, threatened by a violent indigenous tribe, and stalked by an unseen enemy that leaves battered corpses in its wake, the group desperately seeks the connection between the deadly reality of the Mayan legend, the nomadic tribe that haunts them, and the chilling secret buried beneath the ancient ruins.

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Amazonian adventures and Mayan mysteries make for a dynamic debut!

I like the wild places of the world. Not in real life, mind you, but on the pages of a book I can't resist them. With his debut novel, Black Rain, Graham Brown has combined all the elements of a perfect adventure thriller--at least one written with me in mind. He's got the exotic location, the mysterious beast, the ancient puzzle, the cutting-edge science, and he integrates all of these elements into a smart and thoroughly engaging page-turner. It's the kind of debut I absolutely love to see, and all I want from Brown is... more.

What's the story? Well, it's too complex to go into real detail, but basically the National Research Institute believes there's an artifact lost deep in the Amazon that may hold the key to a limitless source of clean energy. An expedition sent to search for it has to contend with hostile natives, terrifying creatures, and cut-throat competitors who will do anything to beat them to the discovery.

I'll admit that none of these story elements is especially unique or original. But Brown's novel is--for lack of a better description--just darn entertaining. And he does so much right. The plotting of the novel is nice and tight. I won't swear that all of his science is accurate, but it rings true. And based on the creature he creates in Black Rain, it's obvious he knows a thing or two about animal biology.

Finally, it's worth mentioning that Brown does an unusually good job with character development. And this is great news--because it looks like his central characters are coming back in his next novel, Black Sun. I can't wait!
60 people found this helpful
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Silly, but entertaining thriller

If you've read Cussler, Rollins or Dan Brown, you have a pretty good idea of what to expect going into the debut thriller from Graham Brown. In this twist on the popular historial treasure hunting genre, our heroes are from a secret government agency and their target is a an ancient source of power, possibly having to do with cold fusion.

So our intrepid team goes on their mission (where the team before them have all been killed) bringing together the thriller standards of the tough female leader, the snarky male co-leader with a checkered past, the hard mercenary and his team of cannon fodder as well as the linguist and two academics, one old and one young. They face the elements, a group of savage tribesmen that may not be as savage as they let on and of course monsters, lots of big scary monsters. Working against them is a greedy billionaire who has a mole on the team. Beside the setting, there isn't too much original about this somewhat bloated 500 pager.

Yet, despite this rather contrived setup, Brown manages to keep the action level and the interesting facts about Mayan culture coming fast enough to propel you through the book. Sure, you know right from the start who will live and who will die if you've ever read a thriller before, but hey, you aren't exactly expecting Eco when the cover has "A dark secret that kills" written on the cover.

This book is for genre fans and won't win any new converts, but Brown keeps things interesting enough that I will look forward to his next book, a promised sequel to Black Rain.
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Easy summer read, no thinking required

This book is not bad, but I don't quite understand all the 5-star reviews. Semi-entertaining read with a flimsy plot and little-to-no character development. One part X-files, one part Indiana Jones, mix with a dash of Predator, and you've got yourself Black Rain. Buy it used today!
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Indiana Jones Meets Alien

What do you get when you cram a book with cliched plots? Black Rain. The book has rainforests, Mayan ruins, covert operations, mercenaries, time travel, gun fights, helicopter crashes, primitive native tribes, mysterious crystals, hieroglyphics, environmental consciousness, strange creatures, lions and tigers and bears, oh my! (okay, it doesn't have lions and tigers and bears. But hey, since it had everything else, why not throw in the lions and tigers and bears as well?). I guess the author couldn't decide whether he wanted to recreate Indiana Jones, Alien, or Jurassic Park, so he combined every story line he could think of and stuffed them all into Black Rain.

The book just tries too hard. The actions don't make sense. There is way too much going on, distractingly so. The characters are the typical, predictable bunch - the overweight cigarette smoking tech guy (hey, wasn't he in Jurassic Park?), the tough smart woman (only she isn't), the big bad brave black ops guy. The multiple action/science fiction story lines are overkill. What could have been a good read is just a very long book.
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I know everyone else loves it, but it's just not for me

Let me get this out front. I thought, from description of this book, that is was a CIA-thriller/suspense-type novel, which is why I chose to read and review it. Imagine my surprise when midway through the book the author went off into the realm of science fiction and silliness.

I will not divulge any plot elements here, because it would most likely wreck the story for anyone else wanting to read this. To be very honest, I was definitely caught up in the story up until the characters' adventures in the jungles of Brazil, when I realized that the nature (and genre) of the story had changed. Not that I couldn't live with that, but the story became so unreal and so over the top plotwise that it was disappointing and caused my interest to wane, but I did go on and finish it.

I think this author shows promise in his writing style and his ability to think up incredible plots, and I did like the first part of the book, but if you write a book that is clearly sci-fi, please market it as such rather than as a CIA-type thriller. That's so not fair. For the positives, the book is very fast paced, there is a lot of action, and the author starts with a bang which sets up the later mystery of exactly what is out there in the Rain Forest jungle. I really wanted to like it, but it just didn't do it for me.

However, as usual, I find myself swimming against the tide of other reviewers who gave it 4 and 5 stars (out of 5), so this is yet another one you have to check out for yourself.
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Jungles, Pyramids and Action with a hint of Sci Fi

"Black Rain" is a good, fun read that nicely sets up a sequel without sacrificing a solid ending.
This book fits squarely in the realm of the lighter-weight Dan Brown-esque genre of thrillers. Leaders of this genre include James Rollins and Jeremy Robinson, whose stories are a bit formulaic and their characterizations often thinly built.

Graham Brown brings new energy to the genre. His core plot involves the Mayan creation myth called "Popul Vuh". In reality, this document has been handed down through history only due to the work of a Dominican Friar who, in the 18th century, made a copy of the Mayan legend rather than follow suit of most of his forebears who feared the devilish presence of another religious doctrine and burned almost all other native documents in the New World.

After having discovered several crystals that suggest the existence of a tremendous new energy source, a semi-secret non-governmental organization goes to Brazil to find their source.

Brown picks apart certain stories from "Popul Vuh" and develops historic explanations for their origins as his team of ex-military and researchers uncover clue after clue surrounding the origin of the crystals. The story contains government conspiracies, hidden jungle pyramids, helicopters and big guns, war-ready natives, and monstrous animals. It also contains a tease of science fiction which nicely sets a tone for the rest of the series.

Brown captures the texture of Brazil including the jungle-embedded pyramid and the centuries-old tribe that endures it's ancient lifestyle. Brown paces each new clue, each newly unraveled mystery at a solid and steady pace. There was very little plot disclosed without a reasonably good rationale. There was very little mystery solved without it fitting in well with the rest of the tone, texture and pacing of the rest of the story.

The story isn't deep enough to warrant a 4-star rating. But it's better than most supernatural thrillers I've read and I was drawn into the story enough to want to read the sequel, "Black Sun". If you enjoyed the opening sequence of the original Indiana Jones, then imagine a full books' worth of that style adventure and you have a decent preview of what you'll get.
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I'm sorry . . .

. . . I tried!

Twice!

But I could not get into this book. Respectfully, the author could stand a few classes in creative writing. Yes, I realize that this novel is a first effort, but really, that excuse will only take you so far.

As I see it, if you're doing something really creative, you can be forgiven in on your first effort your writing skills aren't quite up to speed. But Graham Brown is not doing something particularly creative.

Secret government agency.

Dangerous mystery hidden in the remains of a long-lost civilization.

Older male agent with political baggage, giving way to younger female agent.

Sorry -- it's already all been seen before -- with better writing and better characterizations.

If I'm traveling and anticipate a long layover somewhere boring, perhaps I'll give this a third try. But no guarantees.
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One word... WOW!

I can't get my hands on his next book fast enough! Graham Brown has Jumped to the top of my favorite author list, with this first book. I feel he will remain there if he keeps writing stuff like BLACK RAIN. This book kept me turning pages well into the night. The story is excellent. Fast paced, and quite afew unexpected suprises along the way. Regarding his next book... I WANT BLACK SUN NOW!!!
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An Extraordinary Amazon Jungle Thriller

Thrillers, for me, are strictly escape reading. Thus I expect formula plots, lots of action, and predictable characterization. But BLACK RAIN surprised me, over and over again, with unexpected but believable plot turns, well-drawn characters whose fates I cared about, and generally excellent writing.

This is a story about a secret, ill-fated, government-funded expedition to the Amazon jungle. The expedition, led by a tough female "researcher" (really a highly trained, highly paid covert government operative), seeks to locate a Mayan temple site that is probably sheltering an artifact that is capable of producing energy by cold fusion. Such an artifact would solve the world's energy problems, and therefore unlimited funds are available to the expedition. But the government's ultra-secure computer system has been hacked, and word of the prize has leaked to a corporate millionaire, who sends his own mercenary forces after the expedition and the artifact.

Adding to the expedition's danger is that a previous government expedition to the same site never returned. The expedition's members--all but one--were killed by the arrows of hostile natives, or by a beast that attacked so swiftly that it remained unseen, even as it carried its victims away, leaving only a swath of blood behind. For me, the "unseen beast" is nearly as terrifying as the beast in RELIC (Preston & Child).

However, the novel delivers far more than a series of descriptions of bloody dismemberments. The story is about the expedition, and the devious political maneuvering behind the expedition that is continuing in Washington, D.C. and other locations around the world. In carrying out her assignment, the female leader gets a lot of help from a disgraced CIA operative, a hardened mercenary soldier, an archaeologist, a linguist, and an archaeology student, so there are plenty of characters for the reader to identify with. Unfortunately, not all of these characters survive. The book contains lots of page-turning action, and the author uses Mayan mythology and Mayan mythological figures (such as Seven Macaw) with great skill in keeping the narrative from ever becoming boring.

Everything fits together--including the descriptions of Mayan mythology, and the final Mayan plot element that produces a wholly unexpected surprise ending. It's difficult to believe that this is Graham Brown's first novel, because it seems destined to become a mass market best seller. I absolutely loved this book.
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The Good, The Bad The Natives and Monsters too.

Oh no, another Amazon jungle trek. Uncovering ancient relics and secrets... only to lead to a climactic ending. Yep, this is another one of "Those" books...but there's not a damned thing wrong with that!

I can't say without giving up some spoilers, so let me just say that if you are into good thrillers, mystery, intrigue and unheard of monsters, pick up this book and give it a shot. Likable characters, fun action, and a pretty cool story, even with monsters and the authors glimpse of what our future ancestors are up to.
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