Darcy's Voyage: A tale of uncharted love on the open seas
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Darcy's Voyage: A tale of uncharted love on the open seas

Paperback – September 1, 2010

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$5.98
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Paperback
Pages
512
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Sourcebooks Landmark
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ISBN-13
978-1402241024
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5.75 x 1.28 x 7.75 inches
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1.05 pounds

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"While the characters are true to those created by Jane Austen, they have a fresh feel to them... the prefect book for those who loved Pride & Prejudice yet yearn for more. " ― The Royal Reviews "A great re-telling of the classic characters. It was original and cute and creative." ― The Life and Lies of a Flying Inanimate Object "Nothing short of a virtual love letter to not only Jane Austen but Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy. I absolutely loved each and every page and was enthralled with the story. " ― Psychotic State "Janeites: Rejoice! Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy come alive again in this imaginative retelling of Pride and Prejudice... a very creative and witty read for those who can’t get enough Elizabeth and Darcy." ― Historical Novels Review "Louise has captured the essence of these characters and added her own flare to the story. Darcy’s Voyage is well worth the read." ― Savvy Verse and Wit "Surprising, refreshing and filled my heart with joy. Kara Louise has given us a wonderful gift." ― The Calico Critic "The ideas of class and love are easily transformed from the original into this selection and it transported me back to remembering my first time reading Pride and Prejudice. " ― The Book Tree "Darcy’s Voyage makes for an extremely delightful day of reading." ― Rundpinne "Darcy’s Voyage takes you beyond the continent and back, and with [Kara Louise’s] responsible portrayal, you still feel the depth of their passion, their desire and their need for one another. Loved it!" ― Bookworms Dinner "An ingenious and original retelling of Pride and Prejudice. " ― Linda Banche Romance Author "A phenomenal Pride and Prejudice variation... [a] beautiful, poignant, and wonderfully well-written love story between my two favorite characters of all time! " ― Austenesque Reviews "Darcy’s Voyage was a delight to read and imagine a "what if" scenario where Darcy and Elizabeth have a wonderful romance on the sea." ― Laura’s Reviews "The author has done a remarkable job of staying true to Jane Austen's vision for Darcy and Elizabeth but she has infused it with new life and adventure in this variation." ― Debbie’s Book Bag "Written with imagination, orginiality, and skill, author, Kara Louise, proves she knows her "Austen." ― Everything Victorian and More " Bravo Kara Louise for your entertaining story!" ― The Book Faery "A romantic novel that made me sigh in all the right places and laugh out loud at the most surprising moments." ― Austenprose "Jane would be proud!" ― Libby’s Library News "A pleasure to read. Louise honors the characters and the story of Pride and Prejudice and yet makes it new, exciting, and just as endearing." ― A Curious Statistical Anomaly "Darcy’s Voyage is among the most creative Austen re-tellings I’ve read in awhile." ― Diary of an Eccentric Kara Louise began writing Austen inspired stories in 2001 and has currently written 8 novels, including "Darcy's Voyage," which was released in Sept. 2010, and "Only Mr. Darcy Will Do" which was released in March, 2011, both published by Sourcebooks. Her other 6 novels are self-published, including the newly released "Pirates and Prejudice."Kara Louise grew up in the San Fernando Valley, just north of Los Angeles. She is married and has one grown, married son. Kara and her family moved to Kansas from Los Angeles in 1991. In 2004, she and her husband moved out to the country on 10 acres, and over time accumulated 1 dog, 6 cats, 3 horses, and 4 goats. They lived there nine years, and in September, 2013, moved to 5 acres in the St. Louis area to be near their son and his wife. Four days after moving, they received the exciting news that they would be grandparents in May, 2014.xa0They live just 3 miles from their son and wife, with their dog, Reggie, and 5 cats. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. From Chapter One Elizabeth Bennet walked into the parlour at her Aunt Madlyn and Uncle Edmund Gardiner's empty home in London. She and her father had spent the day travelling from their home in Hertfordshire and were now spending the night at the Gardiners' home in Cheapside, where they would both depart early the next morning for the harbour on the River Thames. Elizabeth would board a sailing ship, which would take her from her England homeland to America. Her aunt and uncle were already in America, where they had been these past three months, so this evening they had the house to themselves. Mr. Gardiner's business had taken on additional work that spanned the two countries separated by the Atlantic Ocean. Elizabeth understood only that it involved some importing and exporting details that needed to be worked out on the American side. The Gardiners had expected to remain there between six to nine months. Elizabeth planned to visit them for the remainder of their stay. The Gardiners and their four children had all made the crossing together, taking advantage of this opportunity to see some of the sights in the New World. With her uncle's work taking him to New York, Elizabeth understood that she and her aunt would have sufficient time to tour the area together. When her uncle's work was completed, they would all travel back together to England. Elizabeth's only regret was that her sister, Jane, was not able to join her. She had also been invited, but due to Jane's tendency for severe motion sickness, she declined. She knew from a past experience on a boat in the English Channel that four to five weeks on a ship out on the ocean would be exceedingly difficult for her. Consequently, Elizabeth was setting off by herself, much to her father's consternation. When the letter from her aunt had arrived, the discussion between herself, her mother, and father had been typical of the conversations that took place in the Bennet home. Elizabeth tried to remain calm as she gave her reasons for desiring to go. Her father was adamant against it and her mother wavered back and forth, giving her nerves full rein as one moment she saw no reason why her daughter could not go, and the next, changed her mind. It was Elizabeth's steady, calm, and rational argument that finally persuaded her mother. She knew it would take more to convince her father to allow her to travel unaccompanied, but she knew she could appeal to their mutual love of history, geography, and books. To pass up an opportunity such as this to see America would be something she would always regret if she did not do it now. She appealed to his trust in her character, her wisdom, and her maturity, and in due course, he gave in. Elizabeth sat down on one of the chairs that occupied the Gardiners' sitting room. She thought nostalgically of all of the times she had come here to visit her aunt and uncle over the years. She was extremely fond of them and considered them practically a second mother and father. She closely identified with her aunt, and as a young girl scrutinized her closely and tried to imitate her ways. She had never understood her own mother's ways and knew at a very young age that she did not wish to grow up to be like her. The Gardiners' home in London, although neither exceptionally fashionable nor elegant, was very warm. Elizabeth always found it to be a respite from her own home. The Bennet home in the village Longbourn was, by society's standards, neither modest nor extravagant. Situated in the country on a good parcel of land, it did give Elizabeth a chance to enjoy her favourite pastime, which was to walk. Their own home was a good distance from their nearest neighbour, while her aunt and uncle's was located on a busy street in Cheapside. Yet she felt the Gardiners' home was more tranquil because of their easy nature and that of their children. It was far too often that the Bennet household resonated with the nervous ranting of her mother and the uncontrolled outbursts from her youngest sisters. She enjoyed every visit she ever made here. Now, she was looking forward to seeing them again, this time in America. She pulled out the letter that her aunt had written to her and her sister and read it again. From the moment she first read the missive, she knew she had to go. "Well, my Lizzy, are you still determined to do this?" Elizabeth looked up. "Yes, Papa. I am so looking forward to it." She stood up and walked over to him, taking his hand in hers. "Do not worry. All shall be well with me." _____ _____ _____ The next morning, Elizabeth pulled her wrap tightly around her as the carriage carrying her and her father drew them closer to the harbour in London. She shivered, not so much because of the cool, foggy mist enveloping them, but because of her realization that the day had finally come. She could admit to herself, but not to her father, that she was indeed nervous about all that was in store for her. The only way Mr. Bennet had agreed to allow Elizabeth to travel alone was for him to take her onto the ship himself and put her under the protection of the ship's captain until she reached the foreign shore. But even then, he felt very troubled. The journey would take from four to five weeks, depending on the weather, the winds, and a multitude of conditions. He had heard too many tales of ships that never made it across, sickness spreading throughout the passengers and crew, and other adversities that could befall them. But he also feared for his daughter arriving in this new world and the type of people she might encounter there. He absently shook his head. "What is it, Papa?" asked Elizabeth. He turned to her with a sad look in his eyes. "You know what it is, my dearest Lizzy. I would give anything to talk you out of this right now and turn this carriage back around to the safety and security of Longbourn." "But Papa, this is an opportunity that I may never get again! Think of it! All of those places I have only read about. Aunt and Uncle Gardiner certainly would not have asked us to come if they did not think it was safe. Do not worry about me. I shall be well." Elizabeth smiled to reassure him. The only betrayal to her words and her smiling face was her rapidly beating heart. They soon saw the tall masts of the ships docked along the harbour on the River Thames. One of these very ships would transport Elizabeth out to the eastern coast of England and down around the English Channel. From there it would sail out into the open seas of the Atlantic Ocean, farther from any source of land than either dared comprehend. "Elizabeth, if anything were to happen to you..." Elizabeth quickly put her hand over her father's. "Nothing will happen to me, Papa. Please try not to worry." The smile he returned to her was weak. Elizabeth noticed, but did not comment on, the tears that welled up in his eyes. He quickly turned his head to look out the window of the carriage. She knew this was difficult for him, and she wanted to do all she could to set his mind at rest. She could think of nothing else to say. She knew he would not rest easy until she was back here in his sight, in a few months. In a very soft, sad voice he suddenly said, "We are almost to the port. Are you sure, Lizzy, that I cannot talk you out of this?" "This is something I have to do." Elizabeth looked out the window. She saw the masts of the ships, some with sails completely unfurled and already sailing, and others with the sails still furled tightly about their masts. Elizabeth's heart skipped a beat as she suddenly felt a wave of excitement pour through her. Yes, this will be a life-changing adventure. I will not be the same when I come back! Read more

Features & Highlights

  • A Tale of Uncharted Love on the Open Seas
  • In this enchanting and highly original retelling of Jane Austen's
  • Pride and Prejudice
  • , Elizabeth Bennet sets out for the new world aboard the grand ship
  • Pemberley's Promise
  • . She's prepared for an uneventful voyage until a chance encounter with the handsome, taciturn Mr. Darcy turns her world upside down.
  • When Elizabeth falls ill, Darcy throws convention overboard in a plan that will bind them to each other more deeply than he ever could have imagined. But the perils of their ocean voyage pale in comparison to the harsh reality of society's rules that threaten their chance at happiness. When they return to the lavish halls of England, will their love survive?

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What if Darcy and Elizabeth Fell in Love Sailing Across the Open Seas?

Darcy's Voyage, originally published as Pemberley's Promise in 2007, is a phenomenal Pride and Prejudice variation in which Mr. Darcy's and Elizabeth Bennet's first meeting is altered. Instead of meeting in the Meryton Assembly room, Darcy becomes acquainted with Elizabeth on a ship bound for America. Elizabeth is traveling to America to visit her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner who are in New York on business. Darcy's sole purpose for journeying to America is to accompany his sister Georgiana home from her visit with Mrs. Annesley's family. On a boat full of strangers Darcy is even more reserved and aloof than his natural wont. In addition, he criticizes his fellow female passengers as looking "meagerly tolerable" and deems them not "handsome enough to tempt" him. Elizabeth, on the other hand, while sleeping in the stifling and overcrowded steerage, enjoys befriending her fellow passengers and charitably spends her time tending to those who are unwell.

Even though Darcy claims to find no interest in the ladies on board, a vivacious young woman does catch his eye. This young woman, named Elizabeth Bennet, does not pay him undue flattery like all the other single women aboard the ship. This peculiarity and the fact that she enjoys early morning walks piques Darcy's interest in her. Elizabeth is bewildered by Mr. Darcy's attention and company, yet at the same time, finds her esteem and regard for him rising daily. As you can imagine, with no Caroline Bingley or George Wickham on board and with a lesser amount of pride and prejudice, Darcy and Elizabeth are able to fall in love without much impediment. However, because they misconstrue one another's feelings and harbor some insecurities they both hesitate in revealing their true feelings for one another...

This clever and unique version of Pride and Prejudice is one of the best Pride and Prejudice variations I have had the pleasure of reading. I read it three years ago as Pemberley Promise's and after rereading it again as Darcy's Voyage, it still remains one of my beloved favorites! I love the fact that my favorite characters are well-drawn and bear strong resemblance Jane Austen's originals. In addition, I take great pleasure in Ms. Louise's remarkable story-telling capabilities and attention to details. Her subtle nuances and nods to Pride and Prejudice are diverting to discover!

What really impressed me was how Ms. Louise entwined her story with Jane Austen's so harmoniously. Even though she took the plot of Pride and Prejudice off course, by having Darcy and Elizabeth meet on board a ship, Ms. Louise dexterously weaves in various events and conversations from Pride and Prejudice. It was interesting to see conversations such as Darcy's confession that his "good opinion once lost is lost forever" or Elizabeth's visit to Pemberley occur out of sequence yet fit in seamlessly. Moreover, I delighted in seeing how Ms. Louise rewrote Lydia running off with Wickham and Lady Catherine's visit to Elizabeth to correspond with her retelling. There are so many excellent scenes to choose from it is hard to find a favorite! I loved the tender romance between Darcy and Elizabeth, felt deep despair at their separation and uncertainty, and laughed out loud when Mr. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam gave Lady Catherine her due!

If you are interested in reading a tale where the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth traverses an alternate course, Darcy's Voyage by Kara Louise is a novel you will not want to miss. While some may find parts of Darcy's Voyage a little extraordinary, "my mind was more agreeably engaged" on the beautiful, poignant, and wonderfully well-written love story between my two favorite characters of all time!

Note: I believe the only differences between Pemberley's Promise and Darcy's Voyage, besides the title, are grammatical. In addition, this is a very clean romance suitable for all ages.

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Sorry to be the naysayer here, but this book was a stinker

This is fan-fiction, pure and simple. It would have made a good Harlequin romance with the names changed, but as a "retelling" of Pride and Prejudice, it should never have made it into print. (But, I suppose, anything with the name "Pride and Prejudice" on the cover sells.)

The recasting of the plot was amusing, but the book misses on tone in a big way. Where Austen is subtle, Kara Louise is heavy-handed:
Darcy "openly smirked" at Elizabeth on page 5.
"'Oh my', exclaimed Elizabeth in awe" on page 33.
"Tears pooled in her eyes as the realization hit her that she would be at the mercy of the unpredictable sea" on page 35.
Talking to Mr. Darcy, "Elizabeth let out a sparkling laugh" on page 55.
Elizabeth "scooted" across the floor on page 154.
"Thunderous beating of her heart" disctracts Elizabeth on page 155.
And Caroline Bingley, who is restrainedly rude in the original P&P, is openly a harpy in this book.

The passages describing Elizabeth's and Darcy's feelings for each other approach soft-porn:
". . . she became aware of some other feelings that were awakening within her. . .There was a yearning inside her to draw closer to him. A stirring within that she had never experienced." (page 155)
Darcy, thinking about the "captivating lady" Elizabeth: "A soft, hopeless moan escaped him." (p. 165)
Darcy again, contemplating that Elizabeth is a few doors down the hall from him at Netherfield: "How much he wanted to walk down there now, confess his love, take her in his arms. . .and carry her back to Pemberley. . ." (p. 289)

There are also many anachronisms, starting with the duffel bag Elizabeth carries on board ship, to her coat (instead of pelisse), to Elisabeth calling her aunt "Aunt Madlyn" instead of "Aunt Gardiner", to the term "shrugged off" (which is first attested in 1902, according to Merriam-Webster.com).

Do yourself a favor. Do *not* buy this book for anyone who is a Jane Austen lover. They won't thank you for it.
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Ingenious and Original Retelling of PRIDE AND PREJUDICE

DARCY'S VOYAGE by Kara Louise is an ingenious and original retelling of PRIDE AND PREJUDICE with Darcy and Elizabeth meeting on a ship bound for America.

Ah, a sea voyage--crisp, fresh salty breezes, a time far away from the cares of everyday life, and the ship's best private cabin, which provides desired solitude.

Ah, a sea voyage--stale steerage air, cramped quarters much worse than those at home, giving up your narrow cot to a sick child and sleeping on the floor.

Such are the opposite experiences of Darcy and Elizabeth as they embark on PEMBERLEY'S PROMISE. Darcy, crossing the ocean to escort his sister Georgiana home, is the owner of the ship, and occupies the best cabin. Elizabeth, on her way to visit her Uncle and Aunt Gardiner in New York, insisted her father secure the cheapest berth and sleeps in steerage.

As fate would have it, they meet on early morning walks on the upper decks. There attraction is instant, but something niggles at their memories. Did they meet two years ago on a short carriage ride neither forgot? And where neither asked the other's name?

Elizabeth thinks the reserved Darcy is proud, and Darcy thinks he should have nothing to do with a lady so far beneath his social level. But when Elizabeth falls ill, Darcy comes to her aid. By the time they disembark, they are madly in love. But neither has told the other and so they separate, causing themselves no end of avoidable trouble.

I like a book that sweeps me along wondering what the ending will be, even when I know the ending. Ms. Louise has succeeded in writing just such a story, proving yet again PRIDE AND PREJUDICE'S enduring appeal.

For the Regency purists out there, there are errors. Forget them and enjoy this delightful retelling of reluctant love triumphing.

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A Delightful Diversion

I read this book a few years ago when it was published as "Pemberley's Promise." As an Austen fan, I've read many, many Pride and Prejudice alternate stories, sequels, prequels, modernizations, etc. and this is one of my favorites. Darcy and Elizabeth meet on board a ship on their way to visit the United States. As in the original, the course of their relationship is anything but smooth sailing. Eventually, of course, they admit to their true feelings and just as in all Jane Austen's books, there's a wedding and a happy ending. One of the errors that many fan fiction writers make is having the male characters say and do things that no sensible gentleman would have done in Austen's time -in other words, talk too much about their feelings. I think this author understands that what makes the original great is more about what's not said than about what is said. As a result, I think you'll recognize the essence of Darcy and Elizabeth in this book. Overall, I found this to be a well-written and delightful diversion, and I recommend it to anyone who can't get enough of Darcy and Elizabeth and the other P&P characters.
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Love it!!!!

I love Jane Austen and Pride and Prejudice is one of my favorites. This novel is, in my humble opinion, a great read. I love how the author recreated this story on a ship and stays fairly true to the original tale. I would highly recommend this book :)
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Best variation ever!!

If you gave Pemberley's Promise five stars, you should do the same with this book - they are identical, except for title and cover. Please do not punish the authors for something that is beyond their control. If the publishers decide to bring out an old book with a new title, it's still the same book. If you liked it, just leave another positive review. Kara Louise deserves all the praise - she's an amazing author and has a very unique style. Her stories will stay in your mind for a long time.

"Darcy's Voyage" is a true romance without being cheesy or sentimental. While there are no sex scenes, the sexual attraction between Darcy and Elizabeth comes across more strongly than in most other P&P variations. I am always annoyed when books portray Darcy as this aggressive lover without any restraint or self-control when close to Elizabeth. Of course Darcy desired our heroine but first of all he fell in love with her mind. And he was a true gentleman. What I love about Kara Louise's books is that her Darcy is absolutely in keeping with his original persona. He's not some young buck who can't control his urges, but a strong personality with impeccable moral standards and high respect for Elizabeth - which means he would never push her for intimacies.

In this touching story, our couple share a beautiful kiss at the end of their journey - a real "true love kiss". After that, Elizabeth leaves the ship without saying goodbye and our hero only knows her name and that she's from Hertfordshire. I am touched by Darcy's determination to find and win the woman he fell in love with. A very fun story with great dialogue, real depth to the characters and to the plot. After the thousands of Pride and Prejudice related stories I have read in the past years, I can honestly say this one ranks among my top five. Thank you Kara Louise for a wonderful gift!
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My All-time Favorite Thus Far and Most Romantic, Do not Miss This Brilliant Alternative

What a pleasure to come across such a romantic, imaginative, emotional, and well-edited variation. Again I hated to see this book end. Of all
of these books I have read, this is the one I would most like to see as a movie, provided the spirit of this book is not changed. This is a clean, but very romantic variation. You get quite a taste of the discomfort of traveling on a sailing vessel across the Atlantic in the early 19th century. Mr Darcy owns Pemberly's Promise, which is one of the best sailing vessels for passengers, but even it is subject to unpleasant conditions if one does not have a cabin, and even in a cabin storms are quite dangerous. Darcy tries to keep his distance from passengers, especially fawning women. Lizzy on the other hand mixes with passengers of all classes and nurses passengers who are ill, even giving up her bed to a passenger who is ill. She becomes seriously ill herself. Darcy had begun to enjoy her company and taking walks with her and feared for her life when she became ill from tending so many others, lack of sleep and fresh air, and also hurt her ankle. The only spare bed was in his cabin. He married her for convenience with the agreement that they would he would annul the marriage on returning to England. He cared very much for Lizzy's health and the two grew more fond of each other without admitting that they had fallen in love and separate on reaching New York. Darcy retrieves his sister and only stays a month and returns trying to piece together clues as to how to find Elizabeth whom he realized was also the same young lady who had enchanted him on a carriage ride 2 years before. Elizabeth spends several months with Uncle and Aunt Gardiner and her cousins. She tries to enjoy herself and see and experience all she can, but like Darcy she realizes she is in love and wants to stay married. Both try to keep their marriage secret.

On returning Elizabeth and Darcy's paths cross again. On going to Pemberly Elizabeth conceals other than her travel on the same ship as Darcy. She sees a sampler she stitched on board the ship framed on a mantle with Darcy's most treasured mementoes (one of my favorites). She met Georgiana who ran after her to meet her when she learned she had traveled on the same ship as her brother. He is at Netherfield. Elizabeth did not reveal herself as his wife as she was not sure she was still married and had vowed to herself she would never marry any one else.

Darcy and Elizabeth meet again at Netherfield the day after she gets home when she goes to nurse Jane. There's admittance of love that only continues to grow deeper and keeping the marriage secret until the time is right. There are obstacles like Mr Collins, Lady Catherine, Caroline Bingley who really stood no chance at attracting Darcy at all, and Wickham. Wickham does not physically harm anyone here; instead he burglarizes Darcy's room at Netherfield while Darcy is enjoying being with Lizzy at the ball. His mischief here is stealing the marriage certificate and selling it to Lady Catherine who wants to find a way to annul the marriage. Wickham does try to elope with Lydia in hopes of attaching himself to Darcy for his wealth. There's quite a climax and I love the way things end up even better than Austen's version.

Kara Louise shows a genius for story telling and expressing growing love and passions, despair, the deepest human feelings. How well she understands the conditions and risks of traveling on a passenger vessel, the ways passengers themselves tried to save money by getting one small bed for two children and the greater risks this crowding caused. You see the separation of class in English society and a growing cooperation and need to work together. I love this portrayal of Uncle Gardiner as a shrewd and successful businessman with amazing ability to take on the needed role to accomplish a goal minus the bribery and expense Darcy might have been subjected to. He certainly was able to brilliantly deal with Mrs Young, Wickham, and Lydia with a more favorable outcome than the original, but then Darcy already had Lizzy as a wife, though not through a church. My main con with this is why did the two not learn more about one another when they were on the ship as homes in England and where they would be in America. Also, the delay in declaring their shipboard marriage was unclear. There Lizzy was being pressured to marry Mr. Collins by her mother when refusing him could have been avoided. They could have said she was attached to someone, just like Jane was, if they did not want to say who. Of course, if he had looked to Mary he might have been accepted. Was Lizzy 20 or 21 when she was on the ship? Was she able to marry without her father's permission in a seaboard setting if she was under 21? In England, couples often eloped to Gretna Green on the Scottish border and married under anvil when one of them was under 21? These are some interesting questions and technicalities I have thought about.

This is the second one of Kara Louise's books that I have read after only Mr Darcy will do. I could not put either book down and was drawn emotionally into each one. I lost a lot of sleep and neglected many other things from inability to stop. What a brilliant story teller. Some quotes from the original Austen book appears in unique ways. I highly recommend this book. I have read too many sequels and variations to count. So far this is my very personal favorite of all! It is the one I would most like to see on the big screen provided the story is not ruined. It also fits the style of Jane Austen and I think she would be pleased. Don't miss this one if you are an Austen fan. It is deeply romantic but chaste.
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Not for Austen or Regency purists.

Pride and Prejudice is my favorite book and I love to read the various retellings of it that have come along in recent years. However, although Kara Louise's book, Darcy's Voyage, has an interesting and unusual plot premise, Ms. Louise only makes it function by making some very grave errors in the behavior of gentle society in that period, showing either her ignorance of the Regency period and Jane Austen's world, or her decision to just flout such knowledge. The main error that is very glaring is that no gentleman of Mr. Bennet's standing (he owns an estate and does not work for a living) would ever have let his daughter make a major voyage unaccompanied, let alone in steerage. To do so would render her socially ruined and unmarriageable, her entire family disgraced forever. Steerage was for lower class persons only, even though men and women were separated. It was not like going out for a walk in the neighborhood,with which country unmarried ladies could get away , but city unmarried ladies could not. And also importantly, annulments could not be granted for simple non-consummation, the reason for the non-consummation would have to be the husband's impotence, and that would have to be a provable fact. Annulments were as hard to obtain as a divorce, and would be almost as disgraceful for the lady.
Another bothersome error that even changes during the book and becomes very annoying, is that at first Ms. Louise makes a point of saying that Longbourn is the village where the Bennets live, where Jane Austen made it quite clear that Longbourn is Mr. Bennet's estate. The Darcy's Voyage author implies that a house by itself could be entailed, and an ordinary house at that. The historical fact is that only an estate could be entailed. An estate means that various tenant farms and perhaps a home farm are part of the property, along with the house. Those rents are what support the Bennet family, and are why Mr. Bennet does not have to work. However, when Mr. Bennet dies, because he did not have a son, Mr. Collins, as the heir, had a perfect legal right to throw Mrs. Bennet and any resident daughters out on their ears, which happens in Sense and Sensibility. Later, Ms. Louise refers to Longbourn as the Bennet's property, as in Austen's novel, so she doesn't seem able to make up her mind. The village near to Longbourn is Meryton. In Pride and Prejudice, Mrs. Bennett's sister, Mrs. Philips, lives there.
Other lesser errors abound. At the Netherfield ball, the author uses the word "set" to mean the dance floor as well as a set of dances (the actual meaning in Regency England.) She has Mr. Collins asking for a third dance at the ball from Elisabeth, when ladies and gentlemen only danced twice together at any occasion and that included married couples dancing together, as well. Mr. Collins, a serious clergyman, would never have done something so scandalous. Such errors abound in the book.
Ms. Louise's writing style and the dialogue of her characters reflect Austen's works well. The idea behind her plot, to have Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet meet at sea is original and interesting, but having our dearest Lizzie in steerage, and her father letting her travel alone to America accommodated there is ludicrous, as is the marriage between our two main characters when it was made only upon the premise that it would be annulled. Ms. Louise's book makes too many unjustified leaps in story even for fiction.
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A New Favorite!

'Darcy's Voyage' was such a delightful story, that I just couldn't put it down. To me, this is one of the best 'Pride & Prejudice' sequels/retellings that I have ever read. It is so different from the original and yet keeps the authenticity of the classic story that we know and love.

When Darcy and Elizabeth first meet, it is on a carriage where at first they are annoyed by one another, but soon they become quite comfortable with each other. When Darcy exits the carriage, to finish his trip in his personal carriage that is waiting for him, they both realize that they never got the other's name.

The story then jumps ahead two years to when Elizabeth, who is going to visit her Aunt & Uncle Gardiner in America, again meets Mr. Darcy aboard Pemberley's Promise where they literally bump into one another on two different occasions - though neither of them remember that they had met two years before. Darcy is traveling to America to escort his sister Georgiana home, whose companion has had a family emergency and can't leave America for a unknown amount of time.

Elizabeth cares for the women in steerage who have fallen ill, even giving up her bunk to one of them - she then sleeps on the floor! Darcy keeps noticing Elizabeth, that she cares for her fellow passengers welfare; that she, unlike the rest of the women aboard ship, seems to take little notice of him and that she enjoys taking early morning walks. While on one of these walks, Darcy joins Elizabeth and they begin to converse. After a few days of early morning walks together, they realize that they have a lot in common and that they really enjoy each other's company. With most of the original cast of characters not aboard ship (i.e. Mrs. Bennet, Mr. Wickham, Miss Bingley and Lady Catherine de Bourgh), Darcy and Elizabeth are able to fall in love without anyone or anything to hinder them - though neither lets the other know of their feelings. When Elizabeth falls ill, Darcy is so deeply concerned for her welfare that he makes a most unusual proposal.

I won't get into too much detail about the rest of the story or I might give too much away, but I thought that the characters were very well written and that the story makes you want to keep reading until you reach the end. The story flawlessly intertwines many parts of the original story, such as the conversation where Darcy says that his "good opinion once lost is lost forever". I loved how even with such a twist in the story, it somehow stays true to Jane Austen's style of writing - you feel as though these are the real Elizabeth and Darcy, just in a different situation and not just someone's interpretation of them.

Darcy's Voyage has become one of my favorite Jane Austen fan fiction books. I absolutely love this book and it is one that I could & will read again and again. I highly recommend that you read this book, especially if you love 'Pride & Prejudice' fan fiction books. I hope that this is one that you will love as much as I do.
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May Jane Austen Rest in Peace

I own a Kindle. I love my Kindle. I've read more books since owning it than I have read in the last 3 years. I often search the Free Kindle Book list for my next read. Free is good. The books I download off this list are not always good.

That is the case with Darcy's Voyage.

I'm something of a Jane Austen freak. She was one of the most gifted writers of the 19th century. Or, any century. The fact that she is more popular now than ever is a testament to the enduring (and endearing) quality of her work.

To take her best-loved work (Pride & Prejudice) and write an alternate beginning is a crime against humanity, or at least this reader.

I didn't finish the book. Wow, I really, REALLY tried. I made it to Chapter 27. The contrivances in plot, the introductions of characters (Mr. Collins! Mr. Wickham!) who factored into our beloved Lizzy's life in far different circumstances in P&P - they now are spouting familiar lines in very different circumstances. Painful.

If you are considering purchasing this novel, do yourself a favor and download one of the many Jane Austen books (free on your Kindle!) I would suggest Northanger Abbey. Not well known, but very well written.
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