Storm Siren (Storm Siren, 1)
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Storm Siren (Storm Siren, 1)

Hardcover – January 1, 2014

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$14.96
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Hardcover
Pages
341
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Thomas Nelson Inc
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ISBN-13
978-1401690342
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5.54 x 1.25 x 8.5 inches
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1 pounds

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"Readers who enjoyed Marissaxa0Meyer's Cinder series will enjoy this fast-paced fantasy which combines an intriguing story line with as many twists and turns as a chapter of Game ofxa0Thrones !"--Dodie Owens, Editor, School LibraryJournal Teen This story is for those who believe they can. You are beautiful, powerful, unstoppable. Mary Weber is the multiple-award-winning author of the bestselling young adult Storm Siren Trilogy, and The Evaporation of Sofi Snow series (all by HarperCollins). An avid high school, middle school, and conference speaker, Mary's passion is helping others find their voice amid a world that often feels too loud. When she's not plotting adventures involving tough girls who frequently take over the world, Mary sings 80's hairband songs to her three muggle children, and ogles her husband who looks strikingly like Wolverine. They live in California which is perfect for stalking L.A. bands and the ocean.xa0Mary's debut, Storm Siren, was featured in the Scholastic School Book Fairs, and her novels have been endorsed by bestselling authors Marissa Meyer, Wendy Higgins, CJ Redwine, Shannon Messenger, and Jonathan Maberry.xa0You can also find Mary's fun interview in the paperback of Marissa Meyer's NYT bestselling, CRESS, and most recently, you can see her and her family as extras in the NETFLIX Original Series, 13 REASONS WHY.She gets nerdy at @maryweber.com, FACEBOOK @MaryWeberAuthor, INSTAGRAM @MaryWeberAuthor, TWITTER @mchristineweber, and GOODREADS. Come say hi!! Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Storm Siren Book One in the Storm Siren Trilogy By Mary Weber Thomas Nelson Copyright © 2014 Mary Christine WeberAll rights reserved.ISBN: 978-1-4016-9034-2 CHAPTER 1 FOURTEEN CIRCLES FOR FOURTEEN OWNERS." I shade my eyes to block the sun's reflection off the distant mountains currently doused in snow and smoke and flesh-eating birds. The yellow flags above me snap sharp and loud in the breeze as if to emphasize my owner's words that yes, she's quite aware such a high count is utterly ridiculous. Waiting for it ... "Fourteen?" the sweaty merchant says. Ha! There it is. Eleven years of repeatedly being sold, and it's sad, really, how familiar I've become with this conversation. Today, if Brea has her way, I will meet my fifteenth, which I suppose should actually bother me. But it doesn't. Brea nods. "Fourteen." I smirk and turn to watch a gimpy minstrel roaming through the marketplace, which is the closest I've ever been to Faelen's High Court. The poor guy is singing so wretchedly off-key, I want to giggle, except he might be newly returned from the war front, so I don't. Besides, his odd version of the old ballad "The Monster and the Sea of Elisedd's Sadness" reminds me of my home up in the Fendres. Have you been there? I want to ask him. Instead, I look over as the enormous merchant grunts his nervousness and retreats from me, giving the ground a superstitious spit. He eyes Brea. "Fourteen owners says either yer lyin' or she's got the dark-death disease. Whichever it is, you best get her out of my way. I got a money business to run." He makes to hurry off toward the selling stand, almost tripping in his furtrimmed shoes. I grin. Yes, run away in your too-little boots. "Wait!" Brea grabs his arm. "Nym doesn't have the disease. She's just ..." The merchant scowls at her grip on his sleeve. She releases it, but her roundish face turns stony with determination. "She's just too uppity for the poorer folk, that's all. There's only so much a master can take of a servant who thinks she's made of better than the rest." What in hulls? Is she off her chump? My laugh bubbles up and I choke it back, waiting for her to choke on her lie. He creeps closer and slides a look of dislike down my partially hooded face, my chin, my half-cloaked body. "She don't look uppity. She don't even look decent enough for the favor houses." Whoa. I bite back a prickly remark about his mum birthing him in one of those dung havens and look away. Neither of them deserves a reaction. Using my practiced haughty pose, I face the lively crowd gathered like giddy children in front of the selling platform. Five, ten, fifty people. They're all smiling as if the circus with its panther monkeys and manic dwarves were performing instead of a fat guy in little boots exploiting children. Seems even decent women are desperate for extra hands while the men are off fighting a war we've no hope of winning. The merchant chews his puffy lip and studies me, like he expects me to help coerce him. Is he jesting? I raise an eyebrow and glare at him until, finally, he grunts again and pulls up the cuff on my right arm. I stiffen. His gloved fingers run over each thread tattooed around my wrist like tiny bracelets. "One. Two. Three ..." He numbers the circles slowly, fourteen in a row inked into my skin with the juice of the black mugplant. I almost feel like I should clap for him. Good job, I mouth. You know how to count. The merchant's face twists into a snarl. He gives me a vicious pinch below my elbow and pushes my sleeve higher up my arm onto my shoulder. I shiver and, narrowing my eyes, start to pull away, but Brea leans into me. "You hold yourself together," she sputters close to my ear. "And for fool's sake, keep your hair covered, or so help me, Nymia, I'll break your fingers again." I bite my tongue but refuse her the satisfaction of dipping my gaze to my slightly misshapen left hand, which I'm now curling into a fist. "How old are you?" the dealer growls in my face. "Seventeen," I growl back. "When was she first sold?" This question is for Brea, but I feel his bristly glove squeeze my skin as if he expects me to alert him if she's dishonest. "Age six. Her parents died when she was five and then she lived a short time with a midwife who had no use for her." She says this last part with a slice of disgust in her voice that's directed at me. And as much as I try to force it down, the hateful shame swells up to eat holes in my chest. She's got me on that one. Two parents, one midwife, and fourteen owners I've ruined, the latest being Brea's own husband. And it doesn't matter that I tried to warn every single one of them. The merchant's eyes constrict. "There somethin' else wrong with her yer not tellin' me?" "Nothing's wrong with her. She's perfectly fine. Just give me three draghts and she's yours." "Three draghts?" I murmur. "How generous." Either she doesn't hear or chooses to ignore me as the merchant rubs his huge, stubbled jowls and considers the offer. Although I can already sense he'll take it. Three is cheap. Beyond cheap. It's pathetic. I consider feeling insulted. The minstrel limps by, practically giddy as he continues his fabulously bad recount of the Monster and the Sea. "'Twas the night compassion forsooooook us." He's singing, referring to the night an agreement was struck between Faelen's past king and the great, flesh-eating Draewulf. The price of which had been Faelen's children. "And the big sea, she roared and spit up her foam at the shape-shifter's trickery and our foooooolish king." I swallow and feel my amusement over how much he's enjoying himself catch in my throat at what I know comes next. "The ocean, she's begging for our salvation. Begging for blood that will set our children free." And for a moment I swear I can feel the sea waves calling, begging my blood to set us all free. Except just as with the Draewulf, my blood comes at a price. "Blast the crippled croaker! Would someone put him out of his misery?" the merchant shouts. A louder shout and then a cheer interrupt the inharmonious tune. Someone's just been bought for a higher amount than expected. The merchant looks at the stage behind us and smiles. Then, without glancing at me, he says, "Done," and fishes into his hip bag to drop three draghts into Brea's open palm. Congratulations, Nym. You're officially the cheapest slave sold in Faelen history. Brea hands the reins of my collar to the merchant and turns from him, but not so quickly as to confirm his suspicion that there's something else amiss with me. Just before she leaves, she leans into me again, and her black hair brushes against my cheek. "Pity you weren't born a boy," she whispers. "They would've just killed you outright. Saved us all from what you are." And then she's gone. And I won't even pretend I'm sorry. The merchant yanks my leather straps like he's bridling a goat and leads me behind him to the side of the selling platform where twelve other slaves wait, tethered to a lengthy stretch of chain. Before he bends down to tie me in line, he pulls a thin knife from his right bootie and puts it against my chin. "Try to escape, little imp, and this blade'll find you faster than a bolcrane goin' for a baby." He breathes an extra puff of foul air up my nostrils and grins when I squirm in revulsion. So, of course, I do what any self-respecting, uncooperative person would do. I spit into his annoying face. "You little ..." His knife is as fast as his fury, and before I can move he's cut into my skin just beneath my jaw. I cry out, and then bite my tongue because he doesn't deserve to see my pain. "I'll sell you off in pieces if I have to," he says, growling. "Try," I mutter. Obviously the heat's gotten to me because I'm smiling a bit crazy in spite of the sting—until his arm rises. I barely have time to brace before the back of his hand finds my mouth with a force that nearly knocks me over. Warm blood gushes from my lip to join the trickle on my neck, and suddenly I'm blinking to keep the whirling world in focus. Curse him. He yells at someone I can't see, "Get her up front and be rid of her. Now!" The assistant pushes me to the low base of the stand. Hands shove me onto the stage as a small girl with red hair, who can scarcely be older than five, is being led off the other side. My stomach twists at her frightened expression, at the terror-filled memory of my first selling—the brief image of coming home to the midwife after my curse had wiped out her entire herd of sheep. Within hours I was sold to a man who gave a whole new meaning to the word monster. The merchant's assistant is standing beside me. He looms over the buyers and makes up attributes about me, of which he knows nothing and believes none of. What a sideshow. The bidding starts low. Despite the aching slash in my neck, I stare into the faces of the individuals yelling out prices, evaluating them as they freely evaluate me. Their ballooning silk hats and ruffled shawls, I swear, look strikingly similar to a pair of lady's panties I saw in the sale booth last year. These people appear well-off compared to most I've known in our kingdom. Not as fancy as the politicians from the High Court, but clearly living above the poverty of the peasants. Panty shawls and all. The bidding begins to climb with the same frenzy the onlookers have been possessed by for the past half hour. Suddenly, a male voice clamors above the rest, "Take off the hood and give us a better look at her. Let's see what she's made of." I scowl and lean forward, jerking on my reins to yell back, "Why aren't you off helping win the war, you wastrel?" "Right there, let's see her!" "Yeah! Take off her cloak!" The assistant grabs my shoulder. I bristle, but his hand is already reaching for my hood. I shove an elbow into his skinny stomach, hard enough to knock the wind from him. "Don't touch me." He yelps. Staggers back like the weakling he is. Then the merchant swears, and before I can blink he climbs onto the stage and lunges for my wrists. I kick him in his crotch. He screams but doesn't crumble. A noise erupts behind me and just as I'm turning to check, two men grab my arms and the merchant is up and plows into my side, nearly knocking me over. He grips my cloak and yanks it off in one harsh sweep. Before I can count to one, the three of them are stumbling back and tripping off the stage. The crowd falls silent. CHAPTER 2 My HAIR SLIPS DOWN MY BACK AND shoulders and around my face like fresh snow falling on the forest floor. Pure white. I raise my chin as the onlookers stare. Yes. Look. You don't want me. Because, eventually, accidentally, I will destroy you. It's what I do. A child's gasp breaks the silence and out of the corner of my eye, I see the little redheaded girl at the outer edge of the crowd. The reins of her collar are in her master's hand. He's stalled in horror like the rest of them. But the little girl's features—they're painted in awe. Which, of course, makes a lump climb up my throat. The childlike mercy her innocence brings touches something within me. She's too young to recognize the perverse significance of my snowy-white hair and sea-blue eyes. Apparently no one's told her about Elementals, or how they are not allowed to exist. No one's told her that a female version is not even possible. That I shouldn't be. The hush has rippled out to the market stalls. Vendors and customers alike pause to find the source of the unnatural silence. I wonder if they're terrified as well. They should be. Offstage, the merchant suddenly lets loose a string of curses, equally distributed between the long-gone Brea and me. I find his anger a bit funny, and it effectively shatters the spell of quiet and triggers an uproar in the crowd. "What is she?" "How can she be?" "Is she dangerous?" "Yes. Very," I whisper. "What are all those tattoos on her arms? Are those owner circles?" "What about the markings on the other arm?" Memorials, is what I won't say. The assistant I knocked the wind from recovers himself when he realizes the merchant standing just off the stand is now swearing at him. He scrambles back over and tries to start the bidding up again, but suddenly even those who've named prices are ducking their heads and backing away. A gaudy laugh erupts from the sideline. It's so melodramatic and mocking that everyone pauses to look in its direction. It's the man holding the redheaded girl's reins. His face is as strikingly cruel as it is handsome. He waves a hand in the air toward me. "She doesn't look like much! How about loaning her out and letting me test her? Let's see what she's good for!" He jerks the small slave girl's collar and struts his way toward the stage, dragging her behind him. Swine. I force myself to look away from them both. Hold it in, Nym. "C'mon! No one else is going to want her. Let me have her, and I'll pay you more if she ends up being worth it." The man uses his hands to boast, and the redhead's reins yank her little neck around as he swaggers through the captive audience who've parted to create a path for him. She begins to cry. He doesn't even notice. My chest ignites. Stop, I warn my insides. She's not you. In the back of the crowd, a noblewoman strolls over from one of the stalls. Her shimmery, gold-lined eyes match her brilliant hair and painted lips as she studies me. My shoulders smooth out. My eyes hope. "Please take me," I whisper. Before I can't control it. Her gilded lips press together in a thoughtful line, then she turns away. I drop my gaze on the man now standing directly below me in front of the stage. "How about you show us a bit more skin and maybe I'll throw in an extra draght?" he hollers, brandishing a hand at the throng as if to earn their agreement. A whimper beside him, followed by a squeak, and it's only then he seems to notice the little girl whose neck he's nearly cracked. She's sniffling and straining upward so she doesn't get hung by the collar. I freeze. He sneers at her. But she doesn't notice. Her gaze is glued on me. He looks back and forth between the two of us. Curiosity, then anger flickers across his face. I pretend to ignore it. Until he lifts the girl's reins and gives them a tug. She winces and I grimace. A sick grin twists his mouth. Slowly, deliberately, he raises her reins another inch so her toes are barely touching the ground He watches for my reaction. The girl's eyes go wild. She begins to writhe and spin, trying to hold her head high enough to keep breathing. My fingers curl into fists. Stay out of it, Nym. Close your eyes. An awkward hush falls. The man's perverse pleasure is tangible as again he lifts the reins. But this time he doesn't stop unti her feet are off the ground and the little girl's expression has exploded into full-blown terror. She is kicking, flailing, gasping Choking at the end of her noose. And he's enjoying every second of it. I shut my eyes and feel the throbbing of my own neck One ... two ... three heart pulses, and abruptly there's a pause in the air. As if the wind itself is holding her breath. And then the sound of a choked spasm, so fragile in its hopelessness, signaling what I already knew. He's going to let her die. But I can't. Thick clouds descend on the marketplace in a swirling rush and darken the sun. They sharpen the friction in the atmosphere, engaging with my infuriated blood, my skin. Sickened I open my eyes in time to see faces draw upward. Their expressions slowly alter from humor to horror. I'm so sorry, I want to say. But all you fancy people in your pretty shawls? You should know better. Shouts pick up. "What's going on? Is she doing that?" The cold sets in. My body shivers, followed by heat rippling along my skin's pale surface. The little girl's owner lowers the reins and stares at me. As does the noblewoman in back with the gold-rimmed eyes. Is it in fear? Fascination? I don't know which and I don't care. (Continues...) Excerpted from Storm Siren by Mary Weber . Copyright © 2014 Mary Christine Weber. Excerpted by permission of Thomas Nelson. All rights reserved. No part of this excerpt may be reproduced or reprinted without permission in writing from the publisher.Excerpts are provided by Dial-A-Book Inc. solely for the personal use of visitors to this web site. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • Storm Siren
  • is a riveting tale from start to finish. Between the simmering romance, the rich and inventive fantasy world, and one seriously jaw-dropping finale, readers will clamor for the next book—and I'll be at the front of the line!” —MARISSA MEYER,
  • New York Times
  • bestselling author of the Lunar Chronicles
  • “I raise my chin as the buyers stare. Yes. Look. You don’t want me. Because, eventually, accidentally, I will destroy you.”
  • As a slave in the war-weary kingdom of Faelen, seventeen-year-old Nym isn’t merely devoid of rights, her Elemental kind are only born male and always killed at birth—meaning, she shouldn’t even exist.
  • Standing on the auction block beneath smoke-drenched mountains, Nym faces her fifteenth sell. But when her hood is removed and her storm-summoning killing curse revealed, Nym is snatched up by a court advisor and given a choice: be trained as the weapon Faelen needs to win the war or be killed.
  • Choosing the former, Nym is unleashed into a world of politics, bizarre parties, and rumors of an evil more sinister than she’s being prepared to fight . . . not to mention the trainer whose dark secrets lie behind a mysterious ability to calm every lightning strike she summons.
  • But what if she doesn’t want to be the weapon they’ve all been waiting for?
  • Set in a beautifully eclectic world of suspicion, super abilities, and monsters,
  • Storm Siren
  • is a story of power. And whoever controls that power will win.

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Awesome fantasy world with a disabled MC!

Storm Siren by Mary Weber is the start to what promises to be an amazing epic fantasy series with multiple magic systems, complex politics, and a very troubled main character. I absolutely loved finding out about Nym’s power and the horrible past it has brought to her as she was passed from slave owner to slave owner. Nym is a very broken character, but that hasn’t numbed her to the horror of death and I absolutely loved that she learned to be a kick ass heroine, but still never wanted to kill if she didn’t have to. Storm Siren sounds typical on the surface, but there are so many details where it excels and I think it will appeal to both YA fantasy fans and adult epic fantasy lovers.
Note: I received an advanced copy of Storm Siren from the publisher. Some things may have changed in the final version.

Storm Siren by Mary Weber (Storm Siren #1)
Published by Thomas Nelson on Aug. 19th, 2014
Genres: Fantasy, YA
Length: 320 pages
How I got my copy: Publisher

“I raise my chin as the buyers stare. Yes. Look. You don’t want me. Because, eventually, accidentally, I will destroy you.”

In a world at war, a slave girl’s lethal curse could become one kingdom’s weapon of salvation. If the curse—and the girl—can be controlled.

As a slave in the war-weary kingdom of Faelen, seventeen-year-old Nym isn’t merely devoid of rights, her Elemental kind are only born male and always killed at birth — meaning, she shouldn’t even exist.

Standing on the auction block beneath smoke-drenched mountains, Nym faces her fifteenth sell. But when her hood is removed and her storm-summoning killing curse revealed, Nym is snatched up by a court advisor and given a choice: be trained as the weapon Faelen needs to win the war, or be killed.

Choosing the former, Nym is unleashed into a world of politics, bizarre parties, and rumors of an evil more sinister than she’s being prepared to fight . . . not to mention the handsome trainer whose dark secrets lie behind a mysterious ability to calm every lightning strike she summons.

But what if she doesn’t want to be the weapon they’ve all been waiting for?

Strengths:
The magic in Storm Siren is absolutely awesome. Nym is an Elemental and has power over storms, but that isn’t the only kind of magic to be found in the land and nearly every region has their own breed of magic, some more nature-based, some very dark, and some with their own interesting twists. If you love magic as much as I do, you won’t be able to put Storm Siren down!
Storm Siren does a wonderful job of having a diverse range of characters without making them feel forced. Nym’s trainer is described as having extremely dark skin, her servant and friend is blind, and Nym herself has a permanently disabled hand. These various traits didn’t define any character though, which is exactly how diversity should be included in stories.
I absolutely loved Nym. She’s a bit abrasive and definitely broken given how many people she has accidentally killed when her power over storms makes her lose control. However, she also dearly values life and never becomes completely comfortable or nonchalant about killing even animals if she has any choice. This specific characteristic makes her feel exceedingly realistic and refreshing compared to the many heroines we’re faced with that seem to no longer care about human life because they are so “tough.”
Storm Siren could have easily become bogged down with world-building given the complex politics, history, and magic in the world. However, instead Storm Siren succeeds at dropping tantalizing hints that just make you want to learn more. I will be reading the sequel the second I can get my hands on it because I can’t wait to explore more of Nym’s world.
The writing of Storm Siren is heart-breaking. Nym faces a lot of trials and I was sobbing right along with her by the end because her thoughts were so beautifully conveyed.

Weaknesses:
While I appreciated the inclusion of a main character with a disability, it is pretty unclear exactly what happened and how much function Nym has of her damaged hand, despite it being mentioned constantly. At times it felt like her hand was only mentioned when convenient and she was able to do everything she needed to do. I also couldn’t really get an idea of what her hand looked like despite how often it was mentioned, which meant I couldn’t fully visualize Nym herself.
The politics of Storm Siren were generally quite interesting, but the number of important secondary characters got to the point where I couldn’t quite keep everyone straight. Normally I wouldn’t particularly mind, but it became pretty important for me to remember the information we had found out about each secondary character once the back-stabbing started!

Summary:
Storm Siren is a wonderful start to a new epic fantasy series that I highly recommend for both YA fans and epic fantasy adult readers who generally don’t read YA fantasy. The world-building was just intriguing enough to keep me hooked without overwhelming me at all. I also found myself actually interested in court politics because of how much they mattered for Nym’s life and the stability of her world. I hope a couple of things get more polished as the series continues, but overall I will definitely be pre-ordering a hardcover of this one and pushing it on all my friends who love fantasy as much as I do ;-).
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It Could Have Been So Much More...

*Minor Spoilers Included in This Review*

I bought this book because I was excited to see a true fantasy offering coming from a well-known Christian publisher that didn’t involve dragons. That and the cover was beautiful.

Plot – C+

The plot described in the book description was one that made me sit up and pay attention. I WANTED to read THAT story, especially since it was coming from a Christian publisher. The plot that I read was barely connected to the description. Well, to be fair, it was strongly connected to a specific part of the story: “the handsome trainer.” However, the focus on him and Nym’s “craving” for him overwhelms the story to the point that everything else promised is shoved to the background. There was suspicion, but most of it revolved around is the evil cuckoo-lander going to get her claws in the trainer and does he really feel something for Nym. There are little teasers of the political intrigue I was interested in but again it is pushed back as serving to throw Nym in turmoil over the trainer. Super abilities and monsters were there. Well, the monsters were more flesh-eating horses and then the bolcranes, who made a short appearance toward the end of the novel, so it still didn’t live up to the promises made in the summary. The ending was a hot mess and very contrived because all of a sudden we’re running back to yank some of the forgotten subplots to the fore. However, due to the plot’s overwhelming focus on Nym and “handsome trainer,” the other two crucial characters are neglected until it’s convenient to trot them out and I couldn’t care less about them. I couldn’t believe the key elements to the ending because as a reader, I had no investment beyond surface characterization in these two people and yet I’m supposed to believe that Nym has such a strong connection with them? I could not suspend belief that far. The plot ends on a cliffhanger complete with a “What will happen to ‘Name?’ – Find out in Book Two out next year.”

Content – D

I struggled with how to grade the content due to both the material being handled and HOW it was ultimately handled. And of course, the content is where the subjective nature of the review shows the most. That in mind, I was still appalled by the content being offered in this book.

Violence is one of the central themes of this book. There is violence against slaves, violence against innocent civilians caught in the war, murder, attempted murder, and self-harm. This violence is on the page and in your face. There is hardly anything left to the reader’s imagination. The most disturbing instance is the two pages (10-11 in the hardback version) where a little girl is constantly in the process of being strangled by her slave collar, out of thoughtlessness at first and then out of malicious intent. There is a lot of blood starting from page 6 where it “gushes” from Nym’s split lip. I don’t mind violence when it has a purpose to the story but I’m not a fan of when there’s blood everywhere and it feels there’s too much page space devoted to describing how that blood is dripping or gushing or shimmering in a pool on top of brutalization. If there had been more scenes providing a breather from the blood and violence or if some of the bluntly violent scenes had been written where the violence is implied but not shown in brutal detail, I would have found it more tolerable and I wouldn’t feel like the important moments of violence had the intended emotional impact but by the time I got to those two key points in the book, pages 69-71, I’m already thinking ‘great, more blood.’ The blood and brutalization and violence occurred so often that it crossed the line into overkill.

I believe that this book was written to help address the issue of cutting and self-harm among teenagers based on the reader’s guide in particular. Nym cuts herself in a sort of warped penance. She talks about how much she wants to cut “a memorial” into her skin. However, I do applaud Weber for being upfront about how cutting is damaging and not the right solution as Nym is told by Eogan. That is one of the positives in this book.

Technically, there is no language in this book. However, the obvious in-world curses being used aren’t the most subtle euphemisms either. “What in the hulls,” “Son of a bolcrane,” and “mother-of-kracken” for example, with the first two being the ones that made me shake my head a little. Not very subtle but not as egregious as it would have been had she not made these “in-world” curses. However, the language can be crass at times, particularly whenever Breck is on the scene. Considering she could have been a very empathetic character and we are expected to believe that she is like a sister to Nym (based on Nym’s reactions), I would have expected her to do more than be crude and mean-spirited and constantly insult Nym.

As I mentioned before the plot focuses on Nym and the “handsome trainer;” however, I cannot bring myself to refer to it has romance. Instead, there is sensuality by bucketful and lust and poorly disguised innuendo dripping off the page. Adora, a character who could have been developed into a worthy and interesting antagonist, is reduced to being a creepy, vindictive and lustful woman with “a harem of menfolk.” Her main function is not the political intrigue, save in the background, but to cause angst between Nym and Eogan because she wants him for herself. A fact which brings this particular gem: “She’s grinning and twittering her hands to and from her mouth, as if she’s blowing him kisses while at the same time deadly serious about whatever she’s saying. Her eyes flash to me once, but after a quick sweep over my appearance, they’re back to her heart’s one pant-worthy desire. When Eogan strides back to us, the peacock-frog-queen stands a moment longer, watching him with raw, unabashed hunger before turning a smug gaze onto Colin and me.” (Hardback, pg. 120-121).

Now don’t get me wrong, I wouldn’t have been too troubled by this particular passage IF it had been standalone or at least been combined with other instances in a more measured manner. But the innuendo and lust has been present since the beginning with the lustful slave owners wanting to see Nym showing off more skin (again tolerable due to the scenario) and it is the defining aspect of Nym and Eogan’s relationship, a term I use loosely. I like romance and I can even get behind attraction at first sight if it is well-written and the characters develop both individually and in their relationship. Unfortunately, I never felt comfortable or very impressed with how Nym pines over and “craves” Eogan. She starts out by commenting on how beautiful he is but how she still doesn’t like him, which is fine but then there’s this overkill sensual description: “I open my mouth and the stupid heat hurls itself even hotter, like summer petals bursting against my cheeks, my neck, my barely covered chest. I swallow and move my gaze down his perfectly cut, gray-vested suit that smells of honey and pine and effortlessness…And his eyes are no longer just on me but on all of me. Taking in my height, my low-cut gown, my nervous fingers…My breath lets out in a whoosh of chuckles, and it hits me how much I crave him near me, setting me at ease. Just like I crave the way my hand feels in his, my skin with his, even if it’s just his job of calming me. His fingers keep mine as he watches me laugh, until his lips part and his expression opens, as if he’s allowing me a glimpse into his soul. To show me something beautiful. Merciful. Incomprehensible. Because it’s the recognition that he craves being near me.” (Hardback, pg. 135). What does effortlessness smell like anyway? :) Word choice aside, I found myself rolling my eyes in disgust and exasperation at this display. First with Nym’s dress leaving her chest less than covered because it was already spelled out when she first put on the dress on page 124 and then at how the emotion they feel is described as craving and after a grand total of NINE days (pg. 137). Twelve pages (and ten days) later he is “liquefying” her insides then they have yet another encounter: “He leans in and his fingers are cupping my face and slipping down, down, down my skin until I gasp at the craving welling up inside me…Adora’s warning flares in my head, but I don’t give a blast because his touch is lightning, burning me alive and breaking me down.” (Hardback, 163). Ironically, a couple lines down he is described as sliding his fingers farther to her neck but the way that encounter was written gave me the impression of leaving her face by a lot. And then on page 176 Nym comes to the realization that she loves him. After she craves him and he craves her in addition to how she continually harps on how gorgeous and beautiful he is.

Then there is bald boy, I mean Colin, who is continually described as being shirtless, kissing his biceps, flexing his stomach muscles, and flirting with/drooling over women ranging from Adora to Nym. Apparently, this is explained away by his being a seventeen or eighteen year old boy. Other than this exaggeration, there are a few moments where we see him truly caring about his sister but they aren’t enough to fully flesh him out for me and make me truly care for him.

Now to the point that well and truly vexed me. The spirituality present in this book is barely detectable except in one particular scene. After we learn a lot about the demon Draewulf and Nym dwells on how her craving for Eogan helps her to control her powers, there is finally a mention of the Hidden Lands’ creator. In the Valley of Origin, there is an opportunity to develop the Christian worldview and this creator who hasn’t even been mentioned more than a handful of times before now. This scene did not play out at all like I expected or hoped. Instead, there’s a character specific revelation that is still focused on Eogan and Nym’s relationship. Then there is an encounter with the ancient magic of the Valley of Origin: the magic is “stirring me, inhabiting me even as it’s whispering that it’s incapable of inhabiting evil. The thought emerges that, therefore, there must be a goodness within me that predates my curse.” (Hardback, pg. 201). I have a very big problem with this passage. I believe Weber was probably trying to go for the message that Nym has self-worth because she is created by the “Hidden Lands’ creator” but this passage reads as Inherent Goodness, which goes completely against Scripture! Where is God? His apparent counterpart for the world doesn’t even factor into this important scene except as the Valley being a place of worship and we know more about the evil entity than we do about this “creator.”

I advocate both subtle and overt Christian worldviews on fantasy novels because both have their strong points and both work for different novels but I firmly believe I should be able to discern a difference between a Christian novel and a secular novel. Honestly, if I had not known that Thomas Nelson was a Christian publisher, I never would have suspected this book to be a Christian YA novel. This was even more troubling to me than the constant craving going on in the book.

Technical – C-

This book avoided any prominent typos or errors of that nature. However, the style and its execution didn’t impress me. I’ll be honest, books written in present tense drive me nuts and the few books that I’ve read where it was tolerable and the author skilled enough to get away with using present tense were third person. The language style is juvenile and the word choices leave me wondering at times why she didn’t pick a different word. The actual description besides Eogan being gorgeous and beautiful is lackluster at best. The world has an incomplete feel to it and I wish Weber had spent more time painting the picture of the world and the its inhabitants.

One of the most annoying things about the book was how Nym counted: Five, ten, fifty (pg. 2) and basically every other time she was counting something. Ironically, on page 3 she makes fun of a slaver who counts out one, two, three. Then there is the fondness for using a word three times when it would have sufficed and kept the pace from staggering to a halt if the word had been used once. Such as the aforementioned instance where Eogan’s fingers sliding down her face, which resulted in the unfortunate implication and confusion when suddenly his fingers were only just moving to her neck and the most irritating example for me is where a paragraph is broken up so that we received a staggered repetition of “falling” on page 316. Was it supposed to be dramatic or convey Nym’s emotions more clearly? Perhaps but for this reader, I was too busy groaning in frustration at the style choices.

The second most annoying thing about the book is that because it is written in first person, the reader relies on the narrator to convey why characters are important and to make me feel for them, but this book falls short. Colin, who is important beyond the brainless bicep kissing thing, is constantly referred to as “bald boy.” I could not connect to him at all. There was nothing significant about him except the annoying qualities and that Nym calls him “bald boy.” We run into the same trouble with Adora and Breck. Nym’s narration of their actions and words do not forge a strong enough connection between them so that I, as the reader, would believe the endings involved. The narration is also very choppy and distracting.

Final Grade – D or 2 stars

This book had SO much potential. Going into it, I thought this book would be a BRILLIANT example of Christian fantasy and since it was published by Thomas Nelson, it could have potentially opened a lot of doors for authors of Christian fantasy seeking traditional publishing. I finished the book feeling that I had been invited to a gourmet dinner and was served half a plate of beets instead.

I expected so much of this book because it was published by a major Christian trad publisher and the premise was excellent. But the ultimate execution fell short in so many places and the amount of brutality, sensuality, and general crudeness was not appropriate for a YA novel, especially due to the lack of a true breather between any of these elements. I am also extremely disturbed by the lack of a discernable Christian worldview in this novel. A reader’s guide and a few “creator protect you” thrown into the mix does not a Christian book make. Perhaps the spirituality issue will be addressed in the next book. But, I don’t care enough about these characters to pick it up. I am disappointed in this book because what it could have been seemed to be sacrificed for the hope of a crossover into ABA YA and I just think it fell far short of the goals. I do not recommend this book for anyone.
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An Altogether Intriguing YA Read

Once I picked up Storm Siren, I had a hard time setting it back down. Set in a world of magical abilities, horrifying foes, friends and frenemies, (and with just a touch of a steampunkish feel slipping through now and again), Storm Siren is a fascinating, enjoyable, and altogether intriguing YA read.

Not to imply that the story is all fun and games. The story progresses at a rapid pace, pausing only to explain the histories of the nations involved as needed. No fantasy adventure would be complete without a fair share of battles and training and desperate escapes, and Storm Siren is no exception. By the end of the book, the death toll is fairly high, but rather than feeling gratuitous, it only serves to highlight the dangers of the war facing Nym’s people and all that is truly at stake.

Nym makes for a sympathetic main character. Although she has lived as a slave in some form or another for most of her life, she is anything but a victim. And Colin is just too much fun. He’s sweet, a little goofy, and slightly adorable, but that doesn’t stop him from being quite formidable in battle.

(Slight Spoiler Alert: Can I just say that, despite all the readers who’ve been swooning over Eogan, I personally liked Colin so much better! I never really got Nym and Eogan’s “connection,” or saw anything between them other than that she thought he was really, really, really handsome … and we’re supposed to believe that he thinks the same about her … so it’s got to be love, right? Not exactly a firm basis for a relationship, if you ask me.)

As for Adora, well, let’s just say it’s been a long time since I have so thoroughly disliked and despised a character. From the first time I met her, I couldn’t help hoping she would get her comeuppance and that it would be a doozy! Note: partly because of Adora, and partly because of Nym and Eogan, I’d suggest reserving this book for older readers, ages 14+ or so.

I was not overly fond of the hissing speech pattern given to one of the slightly more dubious characters in the story. It seemed like too much of a desperate attempt to make this character seem stereotypically evil, but that’s just my two cents.

Long story short, I did enjoy reading Storm Siren, and I’m sure I will pick up the next book, Siren’s Fury, when it releases!
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Will probably read the whole series...

This YA book has been getting rave reviews from some of my favorite authors, so when I had the chance to read it, I was excited. "Storm Siren" got off to a slow start for me, but once I got into the rhythm of the story, I was hooked.

For me, I think I wanted more back story. Yes, I'm a weirdo, because usually the complaint is too much back story. But in order for me to slip into the universe of the fantasy novel I need more to pull me out of my regular world.

Nym is a sympathetic character. She's been handed around like a pair of used socks, with nothing to really call her own except this elemental power that takes more than it gives. When her fifteenth owner purchases her, will she finally find a home, or just be another piece of furniture on display?

Lots of foreign terms kind of threw me as well. A pronunciation guide might have helped, but midway through the book I either had my own way of saying the words or just skipped over them to get to the action.

My thanks to my friends at Thomas Nelson for an advance copy of "Storm Siren" in exchange for an honest review, and major props to the artist behind the gorgeous cover art. If you are a fantasy fan, this book is perfect for you.
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Started Off Slow, But Turned Out Great

To be honest, Storm Siren started slow for me. I was only vaguely interested in the plot and not quite engaged with the characters. But, I kept reading and, a little over halfway through, things took a turn for the exciting. The pace picked up as secrets were revealed and the political machinations upped their game. From then one, it was a nonstop roller coaster of secrets, betrayals, and plenty of twists. By the end of the book, I was hooked and I ended up liking this book. It was a wonderful read that I really enjoyed.

Nym was a defiant character. After facing terrible things as a child and being thrown from slave home to slave home as she grew up, she wasn't about to turn meek. At first, though, she frustrated me a bit. This is a very rare case when the romance blocked the story for me. Going into training, I expected her, as a strong character, to throw herself into learning how to control her power and gaining information about the political situation, for self preservation, if nothing else. But, she mostly just alternatively mooned over Eogan (her trainer), then scolded herself for doing so. It blocked her from showing herself as a strong, resilient character and made her seem shallow. Later, she started to really prove herself, taking the initiative with her training and finally learning how to tug the political strings and throw her very powerful weight around. So, by the end of the book, I liked her.

There were 3 other characters that were major: Eogan, Colin, and Breck. Eogan was the love interest and, though I was okay with him, I wished that I had gotten to know more about him. I knew who he was, what his power was, but I didn't know him, if that makes any sense. Colin was my favorite character. He was sweet and endearing and the joker that lightened the book. Breck was an odd character for me. I wasn't sure if her brashness was supposed to be endearing but it just came off as mean. The players in the political game were all interesting and a couple of them managed to surprise me. All in all, this book had fairly good characters.

The romance wasn't my favorite part. On Nym's side, as I said, I felt like it blocked rather than enhanced her character. On Eogan's side, I didn't feel like I knew him well enough to really root for him. However, I didn't think they were good complements.

The plot was the best and worst part of the book. As I mentioned, it was slow to start, but I was interested enough to keep going. About halfway through, though, the pace picked up and I was hooked from there. There were twists that I never saw coming, secrets that changed the game, manipulations that affected all the characters and a totally surprising ending that blew me away. That was the point that I decided that I really liked the book and now I'm curious to see what happens in the next book.

Storm Siren was a wonderful YA read that I ended up really liking. Despite its slow start, it managed to surprise me and turned out to be a great book. YA lovers, if you're willing to persevere for the promise of a great story, then you'll want to check this book out.

*I received a complimentary copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review
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Bring on the storm!

Storm Siren was an intense ride full of action that I devoured within hours. The world that Mary created was unique, full of a rich culture and diverse characters. It’s a fantasy read that shouldn’t be overlooked!

We’re introduced to our main character Nymeria, known as Nym, on the slave block. She’s been sold and resold as a slave fourteen times. There’s a reason for this. She has powers that she believes are dangerous and she has no control over. She’s an Elemental and her kind have been wiped out for fear of these powers. When she accidently kills one slave keeper with lightning, she fears death. However, she’s sold to the Noble lady Adora. Adora turns out to be the king’s advisor and she wants Nym to save Faelan, the country that enslaved her and killed her people. She begins training immediately with the hot Eogan to conquer her powers. With his help she does learn to control her power and becomes aware of it’s strikingly beautiful ability. She strikes a friendship with another trainee named Colin. Unfortunately Nym doesn’t want to kill anymore. She had done this too many times by accident, never on purpose. However, if she doesn’t help the kingdom she will be put to death.

First off, the cover is gorgeous. It’s what drew my attention first. It was the story and characters that won me over. The plot was intense with twist and turns like a road map. Mary’s words flowed with powerful action scenes and descriptive settings. I’ve always loved the concept of Elementals, like storm from X-men. With such power comes the consequences that those powers can bring. Nym had so much guilt for what her powers had done to her previous owners she had tattooed herself as a reminder. It was nice to see a strong female character that had a conscious. She thought she was a monster until she met Eogan and Colin. She grew from being a depressed girl to a strong, independent woman. Her story was depressing at the beginning, the way she lived her life but she never let that beat her down. She conquered her past as well as her powers.

The secondary character brought Nym out of her shell. Eogan was the hot love interest that pushes Nym to control her power. He’s mysterious and charming. He’s a private person and it takes time for us to learn his story. The dynamic interaction between Eogan and Nym is heart melting. There’s tension filled emotions with epic outcomes. He may act hard and uncaring, but deep down he does care. Colin was a wonderful sidekick who cared for Nym. I’m glad there wasn’t a love triangle here. I get tired of that immensely.

Storm Siren was an epic high fantasy read that didn’t dwell too much on world building, as more on the main character. There were great twist and turns within the plot. The romance was full of tension but the sweet kind. It wasn’t forced. It developed slowly and for good reason, Nym had to train! Unfortunately the ending is a cliffhanger. Booooo! Boy what a cliffhanger though. I can’t wait for the second book Storm Fury!!! Bring on the storm!

Should you read it? Yes! Elementals? Romance? Adventure? This story brings immense action and heartfelt characters. It’s one book hard to put down.
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New Favorite Book

I love this book. And I hate that I have to wait for part two. If you're looking for an elemental story with intrigue, to-die-for characters and fast-paced action, this is the book for you.
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My 13-year-old daughter who loves fantasy like Hunger Games

Seventeen-year-old Nym is an aberration--the only female Elemental in a land where male Elementals are killed at birth. Living her life as a slave, she is sold from owner to owner because when she gets angry or upset her storm powers get out of control--injuring and even killing people. But then she is bought by the crafty Adora in order to be trained and used as a weapon in her kingdom's war -- but unlike mechanical weapons, human weapons have their own will and their own feelings and Nym does not prove as malleable as Adora thought.

My 13-year-old daughter who loves fantasy like Hunger Games, Harry Potter, and Shannon Messenger's Keepers series read this book and this was our conversation:
Daughter: This is exactly my kind of book. I loved Nym and Colin. Their powers were really cool, and the book was very exciting. I want to get some of her (the author's) other books.
Me: This is her first book, but there will be more in the series coming.
Daughter: This is her first book! Then this book is REALLY amazing for a first book. I mean, it's amazing even if it's not her first book. But wow--I can't believe this is her first book.

I read the book as well and I found the characters and the world very well done. I fell right into the world and really cared about Nym, Colin and Eogan. But what a cliffhanger ending . . . .I can't wait for the next one to find out what happens!
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An author to keep your eye on!

-Originally posted on A Bibliophile's Reverie-

Storm Siren is the tale of the slave girl, Nym, who believes herself cursed. Nymia is a slave in the war torn lands of Faelen waiting on the auction block for her fifteenth sale when she is purchased by the exquisitely insane Adora. Adora upon discovering that Nymia is an Elemental, a Storm Siren, gives her an option… save the war torn lands of Faelen by using her powers, or die.

Thus begins Nymia’s adventure and training as an elemental. It is within the courts of Adora that Nymia befriends Breck and Colin, the latter also being an elemental. Both Colin and Nymia are trained by Eogan to become weapons of war, Colin as a Terrene and Nymia as a Storm Siren. As everyone around Nymia views her ability as a gift and a talent, Nymia struggles within herself to see in the mirror more than a monster and a cursed woman

Storm Siren is a novel filled with politics, adventure, bizarre parties, colorful characters, and romance. The novel is illustrated so beautifully in the tale of a woman so beautiful and strong who struggles internally every moment with her own strength and self. Storm Siren is not your average, run of the mill fantasy story. Written within the story is the revelation of a young girl dealing with everyday insecurities of self and appearance. Nymia is a character that so many can relate to and come to appreciate for with reading Nymia’s story the reader can find strength within themselves.

Nymia’s story in Storm Siren of her gift and curse helps the reader realize that differences are beautiful and there is truly a strength within. Weber’s development of Storm Siren helps the reader realize and appreciate that it is a wonderful thing to be different, and differences are nothing to be ashamed of.

Storm Siren is a captivating, lovely story with a powerful, beautiful message. The book ends with an unexpected cliffhanger that leaves me eager for the next chapter in Nymia’s story. Those that search for strength, magic, love, and struggles both internal and external in their stories will appreciate Storm Siren. After all it is not just a story of a Storm Siren, but a story that when you peel away the layers the reader can find themselves. It is as if Nymia was a reflection staring back, encouraging the reader to embrace the differences and love who they are.

I eagerly await the second book in the Storm Siren series, especially with such a bold cliff hanger that left my jaw dropping and wishing the next book was out now. Well done, Mary Weber, well done indeed. You have me hooked.
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After initial frustration, this visceral and inspired tale of self-worth grew on me

Real Rating: 3.5 / 5

Wow. It’s hard to know where to begin this review of Storm Siren, because there’s so much to say. I discovered this debut novel by Mary Weber through Writer’s Digest and was convinced to check it out after seeing all the enthusiastic Twitter buzz on it. Being a fantasy writer myself, I want to absorb as much of the genre as possible. Plus, I hadn’t read any stories on elemental magic (storms, earth, water, etc.) before, so Storm Siren offered a new fantasy experience for me. And I’ll be honest: I didn’t love Storm Siren as much as other reviewers did, but I certainly enjoyed it.

Storm Siren starts off with a bang as Weber introduces us to Nym, an orphan slave girl and an Elemental with the ability to create destructive storms. When Nym’s rage-induced powers manifest during a slave auction, the court advisor Adora scoops up Nym and offers her a choice: learn to use her storm-wielding magic to save her country, or face the same fate as other Elementals – execution. Nym agrees to the training and is quickly caught up in a whirlwind of high society and political intrigue. She also finds allies in fellow Elemental trainee Colin (an earth-manipulator of sorts), Adora’s blind maid Breck, and her enigmatic instructor Eogan. As the stakes mount and war creeps closer, Nym struggles more with insecurity than with her innate magic. Can she learn to value herself by seeing the good in her powers before it’s too late?

Normally with positive reviews, I share what I liked first before the criticisms. With Storm Siren, I’ll do the opposite – because I had a hard time getting into the story. For the first third, Nym was surrounded by characters who either irritated me in some way or were difficult to like at all. It even took time for Nym to grow on me because of her constant angst and sharp attitude. Also, while I didn’t mind with the first-person POV (it draws the reader closer to Nym), I was thrown off by the use of present tense, the occasional slips of modern word choice, and frequent fragments. The tense and word choice issues in particular conflict with the historical setting, unless Storm Siren doesn’t take place as long ago as I think it does.

After that initial frustration, I found reasons to keep reading Storm Siren. The breathless action sequences, hints of a future romance between Nym and Eogan instead of a full-blown relationship within a short timeframe, Eogan’s explosive secret from his past that threatens to destroy those hopes – and the world-building! Weber’s imagination shines as she immerses readers in a fascinating universe of deadly monsters, steampunk-like airships, and parties where socialites wear vivid, animal-esque costumes (imagine the Capital from The Hunger Games, except even weirder). Even the world’s history and the characters’ slang is nothing like what I’ve experienced from other literary fantasy worlds.

Weber also deserves applause for tackling some tough themes in Storm Siren. Self-doubt, insecurity, and self-harm are difficult yet important topics to explore with a YA audience. I cringed when Nym described how she creates her memorial tattoos. But it’s incredibly symbolic of her journey toward self-worth, and I cheered for her as she learned to ignore the painful craving. So, kudos to Weber for examining those subjects with care and poise.

Now, the ending. Gah!!! What a cliffhanger! It screamed the word “sequel” and made me quaver with fear over Nym’s safety. It also left me dying to know what’s going to happen to another character – yet feeling violated as a reader because I can’t possibly imagine how said character will survive that plot twist. I’m not lying when I say that I slapped Storm Siren on my lap three times when I finished reading it and shouted, “No, no, no!” The reaction makes me laugh in hindsight, but it reflects how torn I feel about the ending.

But it’s a good kind of torn. Why? Because at its heart, Storm Siren is more than a story about power and magic. It’s a visceral and inspired tale of a young woman’s effort to save her home and the people she cares about while saving herself from her own worst enemy. And thanks to its colorful cast of characters and distinctive world-building, Storm Siren has a vibrant, quirky personality that helps it stand out in the fantasy genre. It’s not a perfect story, but it has me invested. You’ll find me in line when Book 2 comes out in June 2015.
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