The Iron King
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The Iron King

Paperback – January 19, 2010

Price
$18.00
Format
Paperback
Pages
368
Publisher
Harlequin Teen
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ISBN-13
978-0373210084
Dimensions
5.26 x 0.9 x 8.01 inches
Weight
9.6 ounces

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From School Library Journal Grade 8 Up—On her 16th birthday, Meghan Chase's four-year-old half brother is exchanged for a changeling and she discovers that her best friend, Robbie, is actually Robin Greenfellow, aka Puck, from Shakespeare's A Midsummer Night's Dream . He is her guardian and will lead her into the faery world to rescue her brother. Once there, Meghan learns that she is a princess, daughter of Oberon, king of the Seelie Court. With a mortal mother and a faery king for a father, she is very powerful, and Oberon and Queen Mab, queen of the Unseelie Court, are both fighting to keep her. With help from Puck and a talking cat, Meghan sneaks into the Unseelie Court to rescue Ethan, only to discover that he is held captive by more powerful forces that could destroy the entire fey world. Meghan is a likable heroine and her quest is fraught with danger and adventure. The action never stops, and Meghan's romance with Ash, the handsome prince of the Unseelie Court, provides some romance that is sure to continue in the sequel. Faery books are in high demand now, and this is one of the better ones. Expect it to be popular with teens who liked Melissa Marr's Wicked Lovely (HarperTeen, 2007).— Ginny Collier, Dekalb County Public Library, Decatur, GA (c) Copyright 2010. Library Journals LLC, a wholly owned subsidiary of Media Source, Inc. No redistribution permitted. Born in Sacramento, CA, Julie Kagawa moved to Hawaii at the age of nine. There she learned many things; how to bodyboard, that teachers scream when you put centipedes in their desks, and that writing stories in math class is a great way to kill time. Her teachers were glad to see her graduate. Julie now lives is Louisville, KY with her husband and furkids. She is the international and NYT bestselling author of The Iron Fey series. Visit her at juliekagawa.com. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. The Ghost in the Computer Ten years ago, on my sixth birthday my father disappeared.No, he didn't leave. Leaving would imply suitcases and empty drawers, and late birthday cards with ten-dollar bills stuffed inside. Leaving would imply he was unhappy with Mom and me, or that he found a new love elsewhere. None of that was true. He also did not die, because we would've heard about it. There was no car crash, no body, no police mingling about the scene of a brutal murder. It all happened very quietly.On my sixth birthday, my father took me to the park, one of my favorite places to go at that time. It was a lonely little park in the middle of nowhere, with a running trail and a misty green pond surrounded by pine trees. We were at the edge of the pond, feeding the ducks, when I heard the jingle of an ice cream truck in the parking lot over the hill. When I begged my dad to get me a Creamsicle, he laughed, handed me a few bills, and sent me after the truck.That was the last time I saw him.Later, when the police searched the area, they discovered his shoes at the edge of the water, but nothing else. They sent divers into the pond, but it was barely ten feet down, and they found nothing but branches and mud at the bottom. My father had disappeared without a trace.For months afterward, I had a recurring nightmare about standing at the top of that hill, looking down and seeing my father walk into the pond. As the water closed over his head, I could hear the ice cream truck singing in the background, a slow, eerie song with words I could almost understand. Every time I tried to listen to them, however, I'd wake up.Not long after my father's disappearance, Mom moved us far away, to a tiny little hick town in the middle of the Louisiana bayou. Mom said she wanted to "start over," but I always knew, deep down, that she was running from something.It would be another ten years before I discovered what.My name is M.eghan Chase.In less than twenty-four hours, I'll be sixteen years old.Sweet sixteen. It has a magical ring to it. Sixteen is supposed to be the age when girls become princesses and fall in love and go to dances and proms and such. Countless stories, songs, and poems have been written about this wonderful age, when a girl finds true love and the stars shine for her and the handsome prince carries her off into the sunset.I didn't think it would be that way for me.The morning before my birthday, I woke up, showered, and rummaged through my dresser for something to wear. Normally, I'd just grab whatever clean-ish thing is on the floor, but today was special. Today was the day Scott Waldron would finally notice me. I wanted to look perfect. Of course, my wardrobe is sadly lacking in the popular-attire department. While other girls spend hours in front of their closets crying,"What should I wear?" my drawers basically hold three things: clothes from Goodwill, hand-me-downs, and overalls. I wish we weren't so poor. I know pig farming isn't the most glamorous of jobs, but you'd think Mom could afford to buy me at least one pair of nice jeans. I glared at my scanty wardrobe in disgust. Oh, well, I guess Scott will have to be wowed with my natural grace and charm, if I don't make an idiot of myself in front of him. I finally slipped into cargo pants, a neutral green T-shirt, and my only pair of ratty sneakers, before dragging a brush through my white-blond hair. My hair is straight and very fine, and was doing that stupid floating thing again, where it looked like I'd jammed my finger up an electrical outlet. Yanking it into a ponytail, I went downstairs.Luke, my stepfather, sat at the table, drinking coffee and leafing through the town's tiny newspaper, which reads more like our high school gossip column than a real news source. "Five-legged calf born on Patterson's farm," the front page screamed; you get the idea. Ethan, my four-year-old half brother, sat on his father's lap, eating a Pop-Tart and getting crumbs all over Luke's overalls. He clutched Floppy, his favorite stuffed rabbit, in one arm and occasionally tried to feed it his breakfast; the rabbit's face was full of crumbs and fruit filling.Ethan is a good kid. He has his father's curly brown hair, but like me, inherited Mom's big blue eyes. He's the type of kid old ladies stop to coo at, and total strangers smile and wave at him from across the street. Mom and Luke dote on their baby, but it doesn't seem to spoil him, thank goodness."Where's Mom?" I asked as I entered the kitchen. Opening the cabinet doors, I scoured the boxes of cereal for the one I liked, wondering if Mom remembered to pick it up. Of course she hadn't. Nothing but fiber squares and disgusting marshmallow cereals for Ethan. Was it so hard to remember Cheerios?Luke ignored me and sipped his coffee. Ethan chewed his Pop-Tart and sneezed on his father's arm. I slammed the cabinet doors with a satisfying bang."Where's Mom?" I asked, a bit louder this time. Luke jerked his head up and finally looked at me. His lazy brown eyes, like those of a cow, registered mild surprise."Oh, hello, Meg," he said calmly. "I didn't hear you come in. What did you say?"I sighed and repeated my question for the third time."She had a meeting with some of the ladies at church," Luke murmured, turning back to his paper. "She won't be back for a few hours, so you'll have to take the bus."I always took the bus. I just wanted to remind Mom that she was supposed to take me to get a learner's permit this weekend. With Luke, it was hopeless. I could tell him something fourteen different times, and he'd forget it the moment I left the room. It wasn't that Luke was mean or malicious, or even stupid. He adored Ethan, and Mom seemed truly happy with him. But, every time I spoke to my stepdad, he would look at me with genuine surprise, as if he'd forgotten I lived here, too.I grabbed a bagel from the top of the fridge and chewed it sullenly, keeping an eye on the clock. Beau, our German shepherd, wandered in and put his big head on my knee. I scratched him behind the ears and he groaned. At least the dog appreciated me.Luke stood, gently placing Ethan back in his seat. "All right, big guy," he said, kissing the top of Ethan's head. "Dad has to fix the bathroom sink, so you sit there and be good. When I'm done, we'll go feed the pigs, okay?""'Kay," Ethan chirped, swinging his chubby legs. "Floppy wants to see if Ms. Daisy had her babies yet."Luke's smile was so disgustingly proud, I felt nauseous."Hey, Luke," I said as he turned to go, "bet you can't guess what tomorrow is.""Mmm?" He didn't even turn around. "I don't know, Meg. If you have plans for tomorrow, talk to your mother." He snapped his fingers, and Beau immediately left me to follow him. Their footsteps faded up the stairs, and I was alone with my half brother.Ethan kicked his feet, regarding me in that solemn way of his. "I know," he announced softly, putting his Pop-Tart on the table. "Tomorrow's your birthday, isn't it? Floppy told me, and I remembered.""Yeah," I muttered, turning and lobbing the bagel into the trash can. It hit the wall with a thump and dropped inside, leaving a greasy smear on the paint. I smirked and decided to leave it."Floppy says to tell you happy early birthday.""Tell Floppy thanks." I ruffled Ethan's hair as I left the kitchen, my mood completely soured. I knew it. Mom and Luke would completely forget my birthday tomorrow. I wouldn't get a card, or a cake, or even a "happy birthday" from anyone. Except my kid brother's stupid stuffed rabbit. How pathetic was that?Back in my room, I grabbed books, homework, gym clothes, and the iPod I'd spent a year saving for, despite Luke's disdain of those "useless, brain-numbing gadgets." In true hick fashion, my stepfather dislikes and distrusts anything that could make life easier. Cell phones? No way, we've got a perfectly good landline. Video games? They're the devil's tools, turning kids into delinquents and serial killers. I've begged Mom over and over to buy me a laptop for school, but Luke insists that if his ancient, clunky PC is good enough for him, it's good enough for the family. Never mind that dial-up takes flipping forever. I mean, who uses dial-up anymore?I checked my watch and swore. The bus would arrive shortly, and I had a good ten-minute walk to the main road. Looking out the window, I saw the sky was gray and heavy with rain, so I grabbed a jacket, as well. And, not for the first time, I wished we lived closer to town. I swear, when I get a license and a car, I am never coming back to this place. "Meggie?" Ethan hovered in the doorway, clutching his rabbit under his chin. His blue eyes regarded me somberly. "Can I go with you today?""What?" Shrugging into my jacket, I gazed around for my backpack. "No, Ethan. I'm going to school now. Big-kids school, no rug rats allowed."I turned away, only to feel two small arms wrap around my leg. Putting my hand against the wall to avoid falling, I glared down at my half brother. Ethan clung to me doggedly, his face tilted up to mine, his jaw set. "Please?" he begged. "I'll be good, I promise. Take me with you? Just for today?"With a sigh, I bent down and picked him up."What's up, squirt?" I asked, brushing his hair out of his eyes. Mom would need to cut it soon; it was starting to look like a bird's nest. "You're awfully clingy this morning. What's going on?""Scared," Ethan muttered, burying his face in my neck."You're scared?"He shook his head. "Floppy's scared.""What's Floppy scared of?""The man in the closet."I felt a small chill slide up my back. Sometimes, Ethan was so quiet and serious, it was hard to remember he was only four. He still had childish fears of monsters under his bed and bogeymen in his closet. In Ethan's world, stuffed animals spoke to him, invisible men waved to him from the bushes, and scary creatures tapped long nails against his bedroom window. He rarely went to Mom or Luke with stories of monsters and bogeymen; from the time he was old enough to walk, he always came to me.I sighed, knowing he wanted me to go upstairs and check, to reassure him that nothing lurked in his closet or under his bed. I kept a flashlight on his dresser for that very reason.Outside, lightning flickered, and thunder rumbled in the distance. I winced. My walk to the bus was not going to be pleasant. Dammit, I don't have time for this. Ethan pulled back and looked at me, eyes pleading. I sighed again. "Fine," I muttered, putting him down. "Let's go check for monsters."He followed me silently up the stairs, watching anxiously as I grabbed the flashlight and got down on my knees, shining it under the bed. "No monsters there," I announced, standing up. I walked to the closet door and flung it open as Ethan peeked out from behind my legs. "No monsters here, either. Think you'll be all right now?"He nodded and gave me a faint smile. I started to close the door when I noticed a strange gray hat in the corner. It was domed on top, with a circular rim and a red band around the base: a bowler hat. Weird. Why would that be there? As I straightened and started to turn around, something moved out of the corner of my eye. I caught a glimpse of a figure hiding behind Ethan's bedroom door, its pale eyes watching me through the crack. I jerked my head around, but of course there was nothing there. Jeez, now Ethan's got me seeing imaginary monsters. I need to stop watching those late-night horror flicks. A thunderous boom directly overhead made me jump, and fat drops plinked against the windowpanes. Rushing past Ethan, I burst out of the house and sprinted down the driveway.I was soaked when I reached the bus stop. The late spring rain wasn't frigid, but it was cold enough to be uncomfortable. I crossed my arms and huddled under a mossy cypress, waiting for the bus to arrive. Wonder where Robbie is? I mused, gazing down the road. He's usually here by now. Maybe he didn't fleel like getting drenched and stayed home. I snorted and rolled my eyes. Skipping class again, huh? Slacker. Wish I could do that. If only I had a car. I knew kids whose parents gave them cars for their sixteenth birthday. Me, I'd be lucky if I got a cake. Most of my classmates already had licenses and could drive themselves to clubs and parties and anywhere they wanted. I was always left behind, the backward hick girl nobody wanted to invite. Except Robbie, I amended with a small mental shrug. At least Robbie will remember. Wonder what kooky thing he has planned flor my birthday tomorrow? I could almost guarantee it would be something strange or crazy. Last year, he snuck me out of the house for a midnight picnic in the woods. It was weird; I remembered the glen and the little pond with the fireflies drifting over it, but though I explored the woods behind my house countless times since then, I never found it again.Something rustled in the bushes behind me. A possum or a deer, or even a fox, seeking shelter from the rain. The wildlife out here was stupidly bold and had little fear of humans. If it wasn't for Beau, Mom's vegetable garden would be a buffet for rabbits and deer, and the local raccoon family would help themselves to everything in our cupboards.A branch snapped in the trees, closer this time. I shifted uncomfortably, determined not to turn around for some stupid squirrel or raccoon. I'm not like "inflate-a-boob" Angie, Ms. Perfect Cheerleader, who'd flip out if she saw a caged gerbil or a speck of dirt on her Hollister jeans. I've pitched hay and killed rats and driven pigs through knee-deep mud. Wild animals don't scare me.Still, I stared down the road, hoping to see the bus turn the corner. Maybe it was the rain and my own sick imagination, but the woods felt like the set for The Blair Witch Project. There are no wolves or serial killers out here, I told myself. Stop being paranoid. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • MEGHAN CHASE HAS A SECRET DESTINY—ONE SHE COULD NEVER HAVE IMAGINED…
  • Something has always felt slightly off in Meghan's life, ever since her father disappeared before her eyes when she was six. She has never quite fit in at school…or at home.
  • When a dark stranger begins watching her from afar and her prankster best friend becomes strangely protective of her, Meghan senses that everything she's known is about to change. But she could never have guessed the truth.
  • For Meghan is the daughter of a mythical faery king…and a pawn in a deadly war. Now Meghan will learn just how far she'll go to save someone she cares about, stop a mysterious evil no faery creature dare face…and find love with a young prince who might rather see her dead than let her touch his icy heart.
  • Don't miss the first book in Julie Kagawa's highly anticipated new series, TALON, AVAILABLE OCTOBER 28, 2014

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Disappointing, but with potential

I liked it, I didn't like it, I liked it I didn't like it IlikeditIdidn'tlikeit...
I'm torn.
On the one hand, The Iron King can be a really fun read, and I think a lot of people are going to fall in love with it because it's going to give them what they wanted going in: a little faery lore, a little magic, a little otherworldliness and a little lovelust. If you can just read it on that level, it's not bad, a bit of fun fluff.

But at the same time, there are some real drawbacks for me. So here's what I'm going to do: the following is a bulleted list of my pros and cons in the book, and you can decide for yourself whether it's a good or bad review. As I said, I can't decide how much I like this one.

PROS

Kagawa is pretty successful visually. There was enough description to help me see the Nevernever, but it was never really overkill.
I really liked the idea of the iron fey. I don't want to give away too much, but it makes sense, it makes faeries current, and it adds another layer of BigBad to the already scary and dangerous fey world.
I think Kagawa gave herself room to grow in the series, and even though there are things you can see coming a mile away, she was able to wrap this book up fairly nicely while planting a hook for the next. I have friends who hate a hook, so let me be clear that it is not a cliffhanger type of hook; if you want to stop after The Iron King, you can and I don't think you'll feel like you didn't get a complete story, but if you want to continue on, there is something there to pull you back in.
The Pack Rats. I thoroughly enjoyed the Pack Rats, and elements like this made me see this as a potential movie, because I think they'd be pretty neat and visual.

CONS
The beginning was very slow for me, and thoroughly predictable (truthfully, predictability is a problem throughout, though at some point, I guess I just accepted it). The writing and plot seemed a little write-by-numbers, and other works (Shakespeare, Alice in Wonderland, The Labyrinth, Peter Pan, Spiderman, etc) were alluded to or mirrored throughout, and it left me with an impression of unoriginality for a good portion of the book.
I felt Kagawa was rash with the love aspect; in the beginning Ash is aloof and, as we learn, wounded and closed off, and had there been a slow build up over the entire 3-book series, beginning with a grudging trust and some crushing, then some lovelust, I would have bought it more, but as is, it felt again like write-by-numbers: "I need a love interest, so this is going to happen, then she'll do this and he'll say that, and presto, aren't they just devoted?" It didn't work. Also, there's a whole lot of Puck v. Ash love triangle going around the blogosphere, and I just don't get it. I feel it's hinted at but not developed or even necessary in the book, and it's become so gimmicky anyway...
Weird continuity errors. This got on my nerves a bit. It was just stupid things, like Ash saying Meghan's name, then a couple of pages of stuff happening, and then Ash saying her name again and Meghan getting all fluttery that it's the first time Ash has ever called her Meghan -- when it's not. The first time was about five minutes ago, when he said "Meghan, blahblahblah"... Or, when Meghan is leaning propped against Ash's chest, so there's no way she can see his eyes, and he's telling his sob story (which someone noticed was like a scene from The King's General) and Meghan narrates "Ash fell silent, his eyes dark and haunted." Except you can't see them, so you don't know that. Grr.
Oy, with the deals already! Anyone who is familar with faery lore at all, or has read any fey book knows no saying "thank you" and NO making deals. Even if Meghan was lacking in faery lore before entering the Nevernever, she is told not to say thanks or make deals, and still, it's like practically every single badguy faery she meets, she walks up and plays Lets Make a Deal. She's smart about it once, but the rest of the time, she basically offers herself up on a platter. She'll be thinking, "I hope they don't want my firstborn child," or something along those lines, but she'll say "I'll do anything." What? Think, Meghan. Stop getting yourself into situations where you become the dumb damsel in distress and just THINK.
And speaking of the damsel thing, we're told that Meghan has loads and loads of untapped power, which I am always leery of (but more on that in a minute), but she gets herself into these situations and then stands there waiting to be saved. If you're so powerful, or will be so powerful, show some damn spunk.
[A sidenote on all-powerful protagonists: Just don't. If you're writing a book, just don't. Have the gumption to have an MC who isn't some deep font of powerpowerpower. It's too tempting a crutch to write your characters into an impossible situation and then have them finally "discover" the confidence and ability they've been shying away from using, and BAM, sticky situation solved. Just don't. Think how much more interesting it is, how much more tension there is, and edge-of-your-seatness, when the MC has some ability, some brains, and some pluck, and have to really work to get themselves through. It is so much more rootforable, so much more believable, and so much more relatable. I know it makes your job as a writer a little harder if you can't go all Deus Ex... but really, just don't.]

So. That's the list. As I said, if you can go into it willing to set some things aside and just enjoy it, it flows well and is a nice bit of funfluff. But I'm still torn, and am hoping for growth in book 2, which I have a review copy of, so that the Pro list will begin to outweigh the Con. But I guess only time will tell.
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TOTAL RIP-OFF OF LABYRINTH!!!

Am I the only one who noticed that this book is an absolute, total rip-off of the 1986 Jim Henson film, Labyrinth???
Seriously.
Julie Kagawa should be sued by the Jim Henson Company for plagiarism.
The similarities are just too many to ignore:
16 year old girl's baby brother is stolen by a faerie king who rules goblins/gremlins? Check.
Step parent? Check.
Big, tied up creature who should be eating said girl & companions but instead helps them escape after she unties him & sets him free? Check.
Said creature growling "Friend" in reference to girl who set him free? Check!
Romantic dance in a ballroom wearing a pretty gown with a dark, dangerous but alluring faerie prince/king? Check.
Lost in a garbage dump surrounded by little creatures that collect junk & tie them to their backs so they look like walking mounds of junk? Check.
Eating of faerie fruit offered by loyal side-kick with bad results? Check.
Huge metal robot-type thing hell-bent on killing/thwarting heroine and & loyal posse on their way to the king's castle? Check.
When girl finally comes face to face with faerie king who stole her brother, he offers her everything; his entire kingdom and all he has to offer in return for her love? Yup. Check.
The real question here is: what DIDN'T Julie Kagawa steal from Labyrinth???
Errr.. the answer to that question is the Cheshire Cat thinggie which she stole from Alice in Wonderland - and don't get me started on the similarities between those two!
Its a shame, really. I SO wanted to love this book but as I kept reading, the only thing that ran through my mind was "You have GOT to be kidding me. Did she just pop the DVD in and write down what she saw?"
All I can say is this - If you've seen Labyrinth, then you've read this book; don't waste your time & money!
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A dark, satisfying twist on faery lore that's giving me a sudden nostalgic desire to watch Labyrinth.

William Shakespeare's faeries from A Midsummer's Night Dream have been popular characters for YA fiction of late. Following Lesley Livingston's Wondrous Strange and Darklight, The Iron King marks the third book to borrow Puck, Summer King Oberon and Queen Titiana and Winter Queen Mab. Both series also imagine a daughter for King Oberon who discovers her faery heritage and is drawn from the human world into the world of the fey. But that is where the similarities end. The Iron King is a much darker tale.

On the eve of her sixteenth birthday, Meghan Chase is confronted with a scene straight out of Pet Cemetery when she and her mother are attacked by her four year old brother. Her best friend Robbie (aka the famous Puck) saves her and reveals that her brother has been switched with a faery changeling and the only way to get him back is to find the kidnapper in the Nevernever (aka faeryland).

The world of the faery is as terrifying as it is beautiful. In her quest, Meghan is nearly eaten several times, ripped apart by trolls, drowned by nixies, impaled by a prince, raped by a herd of satyrs, and boiled by Goblins. And that's not even half of it. There is nothing sweet and gentle about the fey in this book.

There are a number of amusing characters who aid/impede Meghan along the way, most notably the cait sith Grimilkin (who is straight out of Alice in Wonderland), and the inevitable love interest Ash, youngest son of the Winter Queen and sworn enemy of Puck. The animosity between Puck and Ash along with each one's motivation for helping Meghan was a constant thread of entertainment.

Meghan does a fairly good job of acclimating to the revelations Puck presents her with. She struggles initially with the idea that faeries are real, but she doesn't blindly cling to her former reality either. She adapts and learns, and rarely makes the same mistake twice. Nor does she allow herself to become distracted from saving her brother. I did find some of her dialogue to be somewhat juvenile and her interest in Ash seemed to have little motivation beyond how 'inhumanly beautiful' he was.

I think what I enjoyed the most about The Iron King was the twist on the traditional fey mythology involving iron. I don't want to give anything away so I won't elaborate, but be ready to start counting down the months until August when The Iron Daughter is released as there is a bit of a cliffhanger ending. In the meantime I have a sudden nostalgic desire to watch Labyrinth.

Sexual Content: Kissing
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Delicious

Take Labyrinth, crash it full-speed into The Neverending Story, and mix well with The Matrix, and that's just a taste of the wildly imaginative ride you'll go on when you read THE IRON KING. It's such a pleasure to read a contemporary fantasy that's fresh and full of action, and doubly a pleasure to read the first of a series that stands completely on its own. This book is a fantastic voyage and a satisfying read, and now I'm heartbroken that I have to wait until next fall to get another bite. Highly recommended!
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Iron King..Waste of Money

I purchased this book and the next because The summaries looked good. Well I was very disappointed and frustrated. It was almost a chore to turn the page and see what stupid thing Meghan would do next. The majority of the story was predictable and The main girl was incredibly weak and made rash decisions and ignored the warnings of those around her. I understand she is young but come on she just got herself into bad situations and didn't have the power to get herself out of them. This story could be considered angst or whatever and IF you like bad news, being captured in every chapter and lots of crying then this book is definitely for you. I wanted to like Ash but he was such an *hole that I could never believe any possible connection between him and Meghan. I respected her devotion to finding her brother but nothing ever went her way, she is blind to the affections of someone very close to her and is willing to throw herself at the man who attempted to kill her and desires to take her to her peoples enemy, It was like they hated each other and then were randomly kissing and then back to hate although he supposedly was suppressing his emotions because that's what the Winter fey do; Their love was not developed at all. If anything Meghan should have just dated Puck it would make more sense. I didn't understand how the author could describe the royal fey's abilities and the power that always radiated from them yet made the main character with royal blood running through her veins like a lamb among wolves. Meghan was always at the mercy of someone cruel. I guess the only things I enjoyed with this story was Puck, He was loyal to Meghan and truly cared about her, and such a fun character that made the story worth enduring another page. The Cat was pretty cool.I also liked the concept of the Iron King; that was very creative and a formidable opponent to all fey.

Bottom line, I wish I had saved all the money I paid on these book for something that's worth reading.
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Story was lost amoung the description...

The Iron King is a mess of a book, so much so that I don't even know where to begin in reviewing it, my thoughts are almost as scattered as the author's. This book reads like bad fan fiction, borrowed bad fan fiction at that. Riddled with erroneous scenes, lacking in character development, and one incredibly far-fetched villain, it was impossible for me to enjoy. I searched everywhere, but could find nothing to like. I can't even summarize the story as their is simply too much of it, and yet not nearly enough.

Megan was just eh. I didn't care about her enough for her to grate, she was just, well, there. I found it extremely difficult to buy into Megan's sudden acceptance of her circumstances, only to see her later hindered in the story due to lack of belief. Where was her skepticism when her best friend of 16 years told her she was a faery and needed to go to NeverNever, the magical faery realm, to save her brother? *pauses for crickets* Also, she is a bit stupid. I was going to scream if she promised one more faery a favor, because anyone who dares claim to know anything about faeries knows not to say please or thank you, much less utter the phrase "let's make a deal". Being half-fey, Megan should have known better. But I didn't scream at her even though she did make another favor after my mental sworn promise to do so, because I was just over her, I couldn't even care if she died. If any of the characters died for that matter.

The love story was sub par, and extremely underdeveloped. One moment she is being hunted by the faery prince, Ash, next she is dancing with him, feeling all lustful, only to revert back to being mortal enemies the next day after he attempts to kill her. It's during this time that she "makes a deal" with him, literally putting her life in his hands, despite his blatant attempt to end it. Two days into the "deal" that he has spent ignoring her, or looking upon her with disdain and hate, he kisses her, but not in that oh so sexy tension filled way, it simply came out of nowhere. Moments later they are declaring their love and admitting that they will defy the impossible in order to be together. WTF? Ludicrous. Prescribe that faery prince some Prozac and be done with his mood swings.

As for the story, it was strange. As I mentioned previously, there were tons of erroneous scenes that served no purpose whatsoever. As for the villain, lol, I thought I had seen some pretty pathetic villains in my time, but this one took the cake. Machina. That's right, the evil villain was an Iron fey that was described much like the bad guy from Spider Man 2 (cable arms and all), created by the dreams of man in the age of the industrial revolution. One second I'm reading about magical realms with enchanted forests filled with faeries, trolls and such, where technology is shunned, as iron is poisonous to fey, and the next thing I know, the bad guy sends Virus, as in computer virus, to hunt down our heroine. Yup.

Basically, I think this author bit off more than she could chew. I could tell that she wanted to deliver a modern faery tale, but she failed, miserably. She lacked the ingenuity to deliver as this story is so much of everything it is nothing. I won't be bothering with this author again.
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Terrible Execution

The Iron King had plenty of potential, but failed in execution on many levels.

1) Meghan is a terrible protagonist. She comes off as whiney, bitter, and lacking any redeeming qualities to make me want to see her grow. Not to mention she is too foolish to be believable. How many times are you going to make a deal that could cost you something high? After a while, it comes across as stupid behavior instead of courageous or what have you.
The way she treats her brother confused me. Did she truly care about him or found him to be a nuisance? I couldn't tell. It was so poorly constructed that I couldn't understand how she really felt toward her brother, who she refers to as her `half-brother', making me first think she disliked him somewhat.
Also, the other characters are not worth my interest. It's a pity because they very well could be, but Meghan TELLS me EVERYTHING that I couldn't enjoy the personality of someone like Puck (who could have been very fun) because her point of view treats me like I'm an idiot. A lot of this goes back to...

2) The writing. It's not bland, I'll give it that, but it's almost all "tell" and no "show". The writing made me feel that the author thought I was an idiot, needing everything to be told and spelled out when readers are able to determine emotions/etc from body language and other clues. The author also stretches it too much, as though trying to sound cute with how she `creatively' expressed something, only it did nothing of the sort. Nothing in the writing helped to develop any character, especially Meghan.

3) The overall plot. I really did liked the idea of the Iron King, but, again, the way it was constructed failed. There are far too many moments where something conveniently happens to get the story going, which makes it cheap. A bunch of stuff happens to Meghan but most of it is either not driven by her and/or not helping to establish/develop who she is. I didn't find the reason for Meghan getting Ash to tag along justified either. It was another forced plot device.

4) The world. This part should have been fun, and, again, the idea had great potential. However, it felt like the author was trying to throw every mythical creature at you to get your attention in that, `hey! I included them too!' way, though they served no purpose. They pop in and out and I'm left wondering why the heck they needed to even show up if they were only there to fatten up the pages. It's not that you can't have a lot of mythical creatures involved, but throwing them in to just bulk up the world isn't enough.

5) The `romance'. It was forced, dry, and should not have taken place in the first book. If Ash was showing interest in her, the author did a terrible job of showing that. He seems disinterested in Meghan, if only vaguely curious about her being the half-human in his world. Then, suddenly, he seems to like her without having gradually taken us there. Meghan also assumes too much; she thinks she and Ash have something going on and when he dismisses her, she throws a crying fit.
Her unfair treatment of Puck aggravates this. I don't think she needs to automatically fall for the guy who has been good to her (versus Ash who wanted her dead at one point), but it says a lot about her that she mistreats him in favor for making goo-goo eyes over the prince who, I thought, carried no interest in her.

Mash it all together and it made for a headache. I was confused more often than not. The writing was mediocre, unable to add depth to characters, and the plot was riddled with too many holes (or "convenient" moments) that I couldn't forgive. I heard the books get better after this one but this one was too poorly done for me to bother with the next one.
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I couldn't do it...

This book has beaten me. I am normally very good at finishing books, even if I didn't like them, but this was just too awful. To be fair, maybe this isn't my type of book. (I don't honestly believe that though, I love fantasy books, especially ones set in modern day.) Iron King was too cliched and not as clever as it thought it was. I felt like this story had been told exactly the same way many, many, many, many, many times before. I understand that that was really the point of using Shakespearian characters (to give it a feeling of familiarity), but it just felt like the author couldn't think of anything on their own. Coupling an All-I-Really-Want-Out-Of-My-Life-Is-To-Be-Accepted kind of main character with a whole cast of characters that aren't aren't even your own idea and adding a plot (or at least what I assumed was the plot, it was lost in the over detailing of things I didn't care about and the repetition on things that I remembered from the first time reading them about a page ago, thank you!) a plot that was unexciting even when done by my favorite authors (a classic tying to find beloved (insert relation here: i.e. mother, son, daughter, etc.) in a mysterious world). All in all, if you are dying for Shakespeare retold, with young, interesting characters who make understandable decisions fueled by a thought process other than, OK, I'll do that, it sounds good, then you should look past this book. (You could maybe try the The Faerie Path by Frewin Jones, it was much better, as in readable.) Of course, I had about 20 pages to go when I put this down, maybe the end redeemed the rest of the book...
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not worth the money

I love Fae books but I just could not get into this one. I thought it was slow I quit reading on page 94, at this point she still doesn't know who she is. I also really didn't appreciate the language, a lot of taking the Lords name in vain, F word as well. Not worth my time or money!
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Don't waste a penny on this dribble.

This was awful do you think the 5 star reviews read the same book I did? Surly not, OMG so boring at times I skimmed page after page. I'm sorry I paid for this book. I did finish (by skipping most of the book) just to see if she found her brother. I don't think there was one character in this book I liked, maybe the cat a little. I am also questioning being rated for young teens with the F word in it. I'm not Pollyanna I realize kids use this word but I don't need to have my 13 year old reading it. Typical of books today... the love story. I'm so sick of young girls being force fed the plots of the Fey Prince or vampire who is the love of their life. I was hoping to find something like "The Hunger Games" even though there is a developing love story there the main character is already a strong female.

I hate this book and it was a waste of my time and money to read it.
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