The Maytrees: A Novel
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The Maytrees: A Novel

Paperback – Deckle Edge, June 10, 2008

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"Packed with superb writing." — New York Newsday “One of the most distinctive voices in American letters today.” — Boston Globe "In this amazing novel, Dillard has combined her Thoreau-like nature writing with her philisophical/theological way of looking at the world to create a beautiful story of life and love and ultimately death. . . . This is the kind of novel in which you want to linger over the beauty of each sentence and along with Dillard’s characters, contemplate topics like why we love or what are we meant to do with our lives. While the outer story seems so simple, the inner story is incredibly profound." — Cathy Schornstein “Dillard calls on her erudition as a naturalist and her grace as a poet to create an enthralling story of marriage—particular and universal, larky and monumental.” — Publishers Weekly (starred review) “A superbly written novel. . . . The compact, elliptical narrative will continue to pervade the reader’s consciousness long after the novel ends.” — Kirkus (starred review) “A rhapsodic novel of our times. . . . In this mythic and transfixing tale, Dillard wryly questions notions of love, exalts in life’s metamorphoses, and celebrates goodness. She casts a spell sensuous and metaphysical.” — Booklist (starred review) “Annie Dillard is best known her for lyrical observations on nature and philosophy, and she puts those talents to marevelous use in her new novel The Maytrees, a love story that spans four decades and is set on Cape Cod….Dillard takes the most amazing facts and lays them bare for all to see.” — BookPage “Dillard, a naturalist at heart, poignantly tracks the relationships between Lou and Toby Maytree across 50 years.” — More Magazine “Glorious.” — The Miami Herald “In The Maytrees , Dillard creates a beautiful sense of stillness as she details the unencumbered lives of Toby and Lou.” — The Christian Science Monitor “Annie Dillard gets it right twice in her second novel. As well as being the compelling story of a couple who marry just after World War II, The Maytrees is an ode to the unique, open-skied beauty of Provincetown. . . . Writing about Provincetown, Annie Dillard does the near-impossible: She matches the simple splendor of language to the subtle magnificence of place. And writing about the Maytrees, she captures the entwining and transformation of two people who marry and then grow up.” — The New York Observer “Dillard has written an elegant metaphor strewn and at the same time beach-funky, philosophically minded, ocean-side love story set on Cape Cod, between the dunes and the star-splashed sky above.” — NPR's All Things Considered “Dillard’s erudition and her tendency to pose large philosophical and moral questions are in evidence here as in her other works. . . . The Maytrees is a fine book, both in depth of insight and freshness of language . . . by one of our finest contemporary authors.” — The Roanoke Times “Each paragraph of Dillard’s novel is a thing of beauty, meticulously crafted and vivid, whether expressing the loveliness of a seascape or a man’s inner turmoil.” — Entertainment Weekly “A gorgeous meditation on one couple’s slog through marriage, separation and reconciliation.” — The Washington Post “The Maytrees is a soulful exploration of love and marriage that has the hot, sunburned sting of a seaside summer afternoon. . . . Dillard evokes the rich landscape and characters of Cape Cod—its eccentric clam diggers and poets posing as roofers—while centering her story around one family’s moving tragedy.” — People “Dillard has all she needs in terms of imagination, and she is handy with the witty rejoinders.” — The Chicago Tribune “Lyrically enthralling. . . . Dillard tells an engaging, subtle tale.” — The Seattle Times “Dillard’s writing can be as fine as the constellations in a clear night sky.” — The Atlanta Journal-Constitution “‘Full of grace’ describes both the story and the way Dillard tells it. Her style is perfectly attuned to her material—quirky, sometimes near archaic in its rhythms and language, plain-spoken but lyrical. . . . You may not come away from this novel with all the answers about love and marriage, but with Dillard as guide, you will begin to know the important questions.” — The Hartford Courant “Dillard’s lush, perfect prose paints a winning portrait of these artistic, opinionated, strong-willed characters who love books, love words, embrace life. . . . Time and love parade before us in The Maytrees, in all their glory. . . . This warm enveloping tale enfolds us like a caress.” — The New Orleans Times-Picayune “ The Maytrees showcases all the reasons people worship Dillard. . . . The Maytrees has elegant, evocative language. It describes nature in a way that would enchant the most hardened city dweller. And it captures the mystery of love, maternal as well as romantic. This novel is a treasure. . . . Dillard writes so beautifully about the ocean, the clouds, the stars, the bogs and the sand that the landscape becomes the most memorable character of this novel. . . . The Maytrees is the perfect beach book for the serious reader.” — USA Today “Exquisite. . . . Few American writers can describe the ecology of a region quite like Pulitzer Prize winner Annie Dillard. In her slim, poetic new novel, The Maytrees , she turns those descriptive muscles on a man and a woman—lovers—bound by their commitment and the landscape against which their rocky affair unfolded. . . . The Maytrees follows their courtship, romance and early marriage with a fine-tuned eye and an amusing ear.” — John Freeman, The Cleveland Plain Dealer “A meditation on love and forgiveness.” — The Wall Street Journal “Wonderful. . . . Annie Dillard is a writer of unusual range, generosity, and ambition. . . . Her prose is bracingly intelligent, lovely, and humane. . . . Dazzling. . . . The Maytrees is a love story of an unusually adult and contemporary kind.” — Margot Livesey, The Boston Globe “Dillard’s poetic descriptions seem to grow up out of the sand and seafoam, and the images she puts into your mind, playfully rendered and wonderfully precise, are spellbinding. Ultimately, this is a story of great tenderness.” — The Arizona Republic “In the union of Toby and Lou Maytree we see what could be the ideal marriage: companionship, intimacy, contentment, and love that needs no words. But amid all this reassurance and coziness, the Maytrees’ lives are turned upside down. . . . Then this becomes a story of survival and repose, of a mother and son finding peace for themselves.” — Elle “Brilliant. . . . A shimmering meditation on the ebb and flow of love. . . . The author also weaves recurring images and themes through the narrative with supreme grace. . . . As in all of Ms. Dillard’s writing, transcendent moments abound. ” — The New York Times “Dillard’s novel, about a torturous affair, captures the solitude of Provincetown in spare descriptions of character and landscape.” — New York Magazine “A simple, elegant tale. . . . Thought and solitude and the mystery of being, death and love and the sea, dwell at the center of this spare and graceful novel.” — The San Diego Union-Tribune “The charm here is in the telling. . . . Dillard’s look at love and distance is engagingly intimate.” — Boston Magazine “[F]ull of the kind of pleasures one looks for in fiction. . . . The novel as a whole is beautiful, and the beauty is never digressive or ornamental. . . . This is where Dillard’s imagination has always lived, in the stark and lyrical awareness of the profundity of the physical world.” — Washington Post Book World “Gorgeous. . . . Deeply meditative. . . . One of the most lucid and effective books Dillard has ever produced. Certainly one of the most affecting. . . . A novel of almost drastic austerity.” — Slate “Annie Dillard is, was and always will be the very best at describing the landscapes in which we find ourselves. The Maytrees is as much an exegesis on love and time as it is the story of a marriage. . . . There is no denying that when you have finished this slim book, you have looked over a jewel and seen its beauty.” — The Minneapolis Star Tribune “A spare and subtle novel. . . . Like Thoreau, Dillard takes us to that place of rugged independence, that struggle of making a living without forfeiting the mind.” — The Chicago Sun-Times “Intelligent and poetic. . . . Dillard’s prose is rich, as is her dive into the too-often-shallow waters of love and deception. . . . The Maytrees will not disappoint.” — The Rocky Mountain News “A very good book. . . . Nobody writes nature better than Annie Dillard. There’s nobody more alive to the nuances of its pulsing (and sometimes menacing) fecundity. In The Maytrees, the sand dunes and waves of Cape Cod function almost as characters. . . . Dillard seems incapable of writing a bad or graceless sentence; this novel is full of beautifully concise sentences that convey precisely what they need to convey without drawing undue attention to themselves.” — The Globe and Mail “Breathtakingly illuminative. . . . Beautifully told. . . . Dillard has accomplished the reader’s payoff she so relentlessly detailed almost 20 years ago in The Writing Life . She too has pressed upon us ‘the deepest mysteries.’” — The New York Times Book Review “Bracingly intelligent, lovely, and humane. . . . Dazzling. . . . The Maytrees is a love story of an unusually adult and contemporary kind.” — Margot Livesey, The Boston Globe “A reservoir of oceanic language, thrilling and sophisticated assumptions of reader intelligence and elegantly lean descriptive detail. . . . Dillard knows how to create Eden on the page . . . exquisite.” — Los Angeles Book Review “Dillard’s examination of all manner of human interactions is nuanced, and her evocation of Cape Cod is at once precise and gorgeous.” — The Atlantic “Poignant. . . . Dillard, like the best of naturalists, creates memorable poetic images. . . . If the purpose of literature is to teach us how to live, Dillard has succeeded.” — The Houston Chronicle “A book worth pondering. Its seeming simplicity is seductive enough to draw the reader into the questions that Dillard poses and then to strike with unexpected emotional power. Once again, Dillard takes on the big questions of life, love and meaning in a fresh and intriguing way.” — The Christian Century “The Maytrees is a quiet masterpiece. . . . Dillard’s prose slips from the natural to the human with quicksilver grace. . . . Life by sea and starlight is simple and rich, conveyed by Dillard with Thoreau’s eye for the natural world. . . . As well as Herman Melville, something of Dillard’s great Catholic compatriot Flannery O’Connor is there in her unremitting sense of both doom and wonder, in the beauty of her prose and the boldness of her structure.” — The Financial Times “In her elegant, sophisticated prose, Miss Dillard tells a tale of intimacy, loss and extraordinary friendship and maturity against a background of nature in its glorious color and caprice. The Maytrees is an intelligent, exquisite novel.” — The Washington Times “In The Maytrees Dillard remains nominally loyal to those values that make her earlier writings both disturbing and rewarding: patience, the attention to particularity, the emptying of the self, and the submission of the will to necessity.” — The London Review of Books Annie Dillard is the Pulitzer Prize-winning author of Pilgrim at Tinker Creek, An American Childhood, The Writing Life, The Living and The Maytrees . She is a member of the Academy of Arts and Letters and has received fellowship grants from the John Simon Guggenheim Foundation and the National Endowment for the Arts. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. The Maytrees A Novel By Annie Dillard HarperCollins Publishers, Inc. Copyright © 2008 Annie DillardAll right reserved. ISBN: 9780061239540 Chapter One It began when Lou Bigelow and Toby Maytree first met. He was back home in Provincetown after the war. Maytree first saw her on a bicycle. A red scarf, white shirt, skin clean as eggshell, wide eyes and mouth, shorts. She stopped and leaned on a leg to talk to someone on the street. She laughed, and her loveliness caught his breath. He thought he recognized her flexible figure. Because everyone shows up in Provincetown sooner or later, he had taken her at first for Ingrid Bergman until his friend Cornelius straightened him out. He introduced himself. —You're Lou Bigelow, aren't you? She nodded. They shook hands and hers felt hot under sand like a sugar doughnut. Under her high brows she eyed him straight on and straight across. She had gone to girls' schools, he recalled later. Those girls looked straight at you. Her wide eyes, apertures opening, seemed preposterously to tell him, I and these my arms are for you. I know, he thought back at the stranger, this long-limbed girl. I know and I am right with you. He felt himself blush and knew his freckles looked green. She was young and broad of mouth and eye and jaw, fresh, solid and airy, as if light rays worked her instead of muscles. Oh, how a poet is a sap; he knew it. He managed to hold his eyes on her. Her rich hair parted on the side; she was not necessarily beautiful, or yes she was, her skin's luster. Her pupils were rifle bores shooting what? When he got home he could not find his place in Helen Keller. He courted Lou carefully in town, to wait, surprised, until his newly serious intent and hope firmed or fled, and until then, lest he injure her trust. No beach walks, dune picnics, rowing, sailing. Her silence made her complicit, innocent as beasts, oracular. Agitated, he saw no agitation in her even gaze. Her size and whole-faced smile maddened him, her round arms at her sides, stiff straw hat. Her bare shoulders radiated a smell of sun-hot skin. Her gait was free and light. Over her open eyes showed two widths of blue lids whose size and hue she would never see. Her face's skin was transparent, lighted and clear like sky. She barely said a word. She tongue-tied him. She already knew his dune-shack friend Cornelius Blue, knew the professors Hiram and Elaine Cairo from New York, knew everyone's friend Deary the hoyden who lived on the pier or loose in the dunes, and old Reevadare Weaver who gave parties. Bumping through a painter's opening, picking up paint at the hardware store, ransacking the library, she glanced at him, her mouth curving broadly, as if they shared a joke. He knew the glance of old. It was a summons he never refused. The joke was—he hoped—that the woman had already yielded but would set him jumping through hoops anyway. Lou Bigelow's candid glance, however, contained neither answer nor question, only a spreading pleasure, like Blake's infant joy, kicking the gong around. Maytree concealed his courtship. On the Cairos' crowded porch, she steadied her highball on the rail. He asked her, Would she like to row around the harbor with him? She turned and gave him a look, Hold on, Buster. He was likely competing with fleets and battalions of men. Maytree wanted her heart. She had his heart and did not know it. She shook her head, clear of eye, and smiled. If he were only a painter: her avid expression, mouth in repose or laughing, her gleaming concentration. The wide-open skin between her brows made their arcs long. Not even Ingrid Bergman had these brows. The first few times he heard her speak, her Britishy curled vowels surprised him. He rarely dared look her way. One day he might accompany Lou Bigelow from town out here to his family's old dune shack. He was afraid his saying "shack" would scare them both. Without her he already felt like one of two pieces of electrical tape pulled apart. He could not risk a mistake. Robert Louis Stevenson, he read in his Letters , called marriage "a sort of friendship recognized by the police." Charmed, Maytree bought a red-speckled notebook to dedicate to this vexed sphere—not to marriage, but to love. More red-speckled notebooks expanded, without clarifying, this theme. Sextus Propertius, of love: "Shun this hell." From some book he copied: "How does it happen that a never-absent picture has in it the power to make a fresh, overwhelming appearance every hour, wide-eyed, white-toothed, terrible as an army with banners?" She was outside his reach. Of course she glared at Maytree that fall when he came by barefoot at daybreak and asked if she would like to see his dune shack. Behind his head, color spread up sky. In the act of diving, Orion, rigid, shoulder-first like a man falling, began to dissolve. Then even the zenith and western stars paled and gulls squawked. Her house was on the bay in town. He proposed to walk her to the ocean—not far, but otherworldly in the dunes. She had been enjoying Bleak House . Men always chased her and she always glared. She most certainly did not ask him in. His was a startling figure: his Mars-colored hair, his height and tension, his creased face. He looked like a traveling minstrel, a red-eyed night heron. His feet were long and thin like the rest of him. He wore a billed fishing cap. An army canteen hung from his belt. She had been a schoolgirl in Marblehead, Massachusetts, when he went West. —Just a walk, he said, sunrise. We won't need to go inside. In his unsure smile she saw his good faith. Well, that was considerate, brickish of him, to say that they would not go in. She agreed. She had not seen the dunes in weeks. Maytree suggested she bring, as he did, a pair of socks, to provide webbed feet, and wear a brimmed hat that tied. In predawn light she saw the sunspokes around his eyes under his cap. Continues... Excerpted from The Maytrees by Annie Dillard Copyright © 2008 by Annie Dillard. Excerpted by permission. All rights reserved. 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Features & Highlights

  • “Brilliant. . . . A shimmering meditation on the ebb and flow of love.”  —
  • New York Times
  • “In her elegant, sophisticated prose, Dillard tells a tale of intimacy, loss and extraordinary friendship and maturity against a background of nature in its glorious color and caprice.
  • The Maytrees
  • is an intelligent, exquisite novel.” —
  • The Washington Times
  • Toby Maytree first sees Lou Bigelow on her bicycle in postwar Provincetown, Massachusetts. Her laughter and loveliness catch his breath. Maytree is a Provincetown native, an educated poet of thirty. As he courts Lou, just out of college, her stillness draws him. He hides his serious wooing, and idly shows her his poems.
  • In spare, elegant prose, Dillard traces the Maytrees' decades of loving and longing. They live cheaply among the nonconformist artists and writers that the bare tip of Cape Cod attracts. When their son Petie appears, their innocent Bohemian friend Deary helps care for him. But years later it is Deary who causes the town to talk.
  • In this moving novel, Dillard intimately depicts willed bonds of loyalty, friendship, and abiding love. She presents nature's vastness and nearness. Warm and hopeful,
  • The Maytrees
  • is the surprising capstone of Dillard's original body of work.

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For the Lucky One

I read this book several years ago and it has remained with me like a fable with a moral to remember. As other reviewers who liked the book have observed, it is sparse, precise and pointed. It blows the reader about, like the weather which is central to the book. I decided to write this review when I recommended the book to a friend, and realized that I have recommended this book more than any other modern read. So I was on the Amazon page and stunned to find so many negative comments. It amazes me: how can you not love this book? How can you not marvel at the beautiful words and word craft? How can you resist the exquisite human processes Dillard captures with clarity and compassion? Of course, I loved Pilgrim at Tinker Creek which one professor of mine called "a tedious study of a small, polluted body of water." Dillard, I understand, is not for everyone - but if you are one she speaks to, you are in for a tremendous, lasting read. You are lucky.
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For the Lucky One

I read this book several years ago and it has remained with me like a fable with a moral to remember. As other reviewers who liked the book have observed, it is sparse, precise and pointed. It blows the reader about, like the weather which is central to the book. I decided to write this review when I recommended the book to a friend, and realized that I have recommended this book more than any other modern read. So I was on the Amazon page and stunned to find so many negative comments. It amazes me: how can you not love this book? How can you not marvel at the beautiful words and word craft? How can you resist the exquisite human processes Dillard captures with clarity and compassion? Of course, I loved Pilgrim at Tinker Creek which one professor of mine called "a tedious study of a small, polluted body of water." Dillard, I understand, is not for everyone - but if you are one she speaks to, you are in for a tremendous, lasting read. You are lucky.
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Theres no such thing as sin?

This book lays out the modern mentality which justifies infidelity and cruel selfishness. Horrifying. There is nothing sympathetic or heroic in these characters. And very few reviewers have a problem with this. Sure, nature is beautiful, but her clever descriptions are not worth mucking around in the justifications for diving headfirst into me-first service to the flesh. The one and only saintly thing done in this book is the selfless care for the dying performed by the jilted wife. But I find it odd that she actually justifies her husbands affair through indifference. It's like instead of forgiving someone for murder, you say theres nothing wrong with murder in the first place.
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Overworked prose

I laugh when I see the writing in The Maytrees described as "spare." It's spare in the way that a painfully hip, "minimalist" apartment full of curated, uber-expensive status Statement pieces is spare. Dillard's prose is so laboriously winnowed down that it bursts at the seams. It is so dense you can almost chew it. Flows of short, staccato sentences -- often at chapter openings -- come off as clunky. The occasional drops of humor are too contrived. Semi-poetic riffs scream "trying too hard." I felt as if Annie Dillard was trying on the skin of another writer. It doesn't fit.

Did you like reading all those short sentences? If not, you won't like this book.

It's difficult to criticize the writing of the woman who wrote the book on Writing. However, I feel comfortable in saying that as much as I admire Dillard's other books, this one was a painful read.
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Depressing

I read this book for book club, the same book club that read The Pilgrim at Tinker Creek, which I much enjoyed. This book, while difficult to read, had occasional brilliant wording, references, points to ponder. Except for Lou's unconditional response in caring for Deary, however, I found the relationships in this book to be dark and depressing. It seems that the entire community is into free love, multiple divorces, and generally focused on "me first" mentality--and this is considered normal! There was not one person who considered marriage to be a sacrament. It seems like Dillard has read so many books on philosophy that's she's forgotten some of her questions might be answered by belief in a Creator. If this is supposed to be a love story, I want to know where the Author of Love (God) is in the book. But my big question is this: What was the motivation for any of her characters--or the author--to get up in the morning?
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flowery to the point of suffocation

This was a "share" book, given to me by someone who loved it. That was all right because an earlier share book was "Eat,Pray, Love," which turned out to be very compelling. Unfortunately, the same cannot be said about "The Maytrees." I found it irritating from the start, with a reliance on poetic language that was so self-conscious I was embarrassed for the author. The characters seem to be drawn out of the mists (perhaps that is appropriate to the landscape of Cape Cod), and as a result "there is no there there." I would not call this a novel, but an extended selection of poetic moments. Anyway, authors should always go back and check Dickens' before sending in their latest works for publication. "It was the best of times, it was the worst of times." Grab your reader from Line One. Prose is its own poetry.
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Deeply Beautiful

It's very hard to describe The Maytrees in a few sentences. What is this novel about? I suppose it is, as many others have said, a love story. But to my mind it is as much about love of place as it is about love of a spouse or of a family.

There's not much action in the conventional sense, so if you are looking for a good plot, I would skip this book. What it is, though, is incredibly, deeply lyrical. The language sings and whispers, and occasionally shouts. Reading The Maytrees is like reading a poem masquerading as a novel.

I am a lover of Provincetown, located at the end of Cape Cod and the setting for this story. Annie Dillard has clearly done her research on the town's history and deftly evokes the way Provincetown life has changed over the years. Right after WW II, when the story begins, the town is isolated and quaint, where, as Dillard writes, people walk about by starlight and live in rhythm with the seasons. By book's end, the town has become a "resort destination," where the primary business is real estate rather than fishing.

Dillard's characters carry on lives separated between the dunes along the Atlantic and the town on the sheltered bay. In summer, many of the principal characters live lives of solo contemplation in shacks out on the dunes -- writing, painting or just watching the tides. In winter, they come back to town to live through the cold months in houses clustered along Cape Cod Bay, but never are they far from the sea.

There is a very thin line between indoors and outdoors. In summer Deary Hightoe rolls herself into a mainsail and sleeps along the swale deep in the dunes. At 80, Lou Maytree continues to live in her dune shack through December, watching storms roll in from the Atlantic and stuffing the shack's chinks with steel wool to keep out mice. These and a thousand other small things -- for instance, finding one's way through the dunes at night by walking barefoot, toes feeling for the various types of sand -- create a strong sense of place, as well as a sense of the abiding love that these characters feel for a place where land, sea and sky meet, merge, blend, move apart, and then come back together again.

This meeting of sky, land and sea is much like the meeting, advancing, parting and reuniting of the novel's main characters. I don't know if I am reading too much symbolism into The Maytrees or not. Perhaps Dillard intends for each of her readers to inject themselves and their own loves into the story, or perhaps it is merely the way I chose to read her book. In any case, the characters and their stories have stayed with me and I expect that I will come back to The Maytrees again at some point in the future, something I rarely do.

For me, this novel is five stars all the way.
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My least favorite Annie Dillard book

I have been an unabashed Annie Dillard fan since I read "Pilgrim at Tinker Creek" the year it came out.
Since then, I have read every book she's written, and have found every single book to be fascinating. So it
was with great excitement that I found out that her second novel (the first was "The Living"), was to be
published. I pre-ordered the book, and tore into it when it arrived. Well, the fact that I'm just now bothering
to review the novel will give you an idea of what I thought of the book. Dillard is one of the very best
living American writers, but that doesn't mean she's perfect or that she can't stumble. I think this book is a
real stumble. It's twee. Dillard says she's taking some time off to read. I believe that's a good idea. I hope
she rests up for a year or two or three, and then comes back with a bang. I know she can. I hope she will.
This novel, though, I give three stars. I wish I'd loved it. I didn't.
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A Poetic Essay on Love

I have long considered Annie Dillard as one of the finest American essayists, right up there with E. B. White. Her description in [[ASIN:0060915412 TEACHING A STONE TO TALK]] of watching a total eclipse of the sun on a hilltop in Washington State is one of the most remarkable short pieces of writing I can think of, for its combination of everyday detail, scientific observation, and sheer awe at the smallness of man in the transcendental scale of the cosmos. Dillard's poetry, her awareness of the totality of the natural world, also shines through almost every page of her novel, THE MAYTREES, about the long marriage of a couple in Provincetown, Cape Cod. As an extreme example, take this almost baroque incantation to the stars: "They were Arabic: Enif, Markab, Achernar, Hamal, Alfirk, Scheat, Rasalhague. They moved evenly over the black desert. They spread and kept their places as searchers sweep a field. Algenib and Denebola had gone before. Fomalhaut kept alone. Alpheratz and Saiph trailed out of sight."

Contrast this, from near the beginning of the book, when Lou Bigelow takes her first walk in the sand dunes with her future husband, Toby Maytree: "From the high dune Maytree was trying to show her his shack on the horizon. Where could he mean? Would he touch her shoulder with his hand, or even arm, as he pointed? She had not let a man this close in years. Against blue sea she saw sand crests trace catenary curves against sky. Knee-high pines marked some hollows." Simple, simple writing, with just that one word "catenary," astounding in its precision, articulating the skilful balance of the sentence on which it rides, energizing the entire passage. Dillard's subject is love. She occasionally describes it in sentimental terms, more often in an objective mode as though marriage were merely another subject for natural history, and most frequently (as in the dunes passage above) by a kind of poetic analogy between the inner and outer worlds. So long as this works, the book is a marvel, but I don't feel that it is enough to sustain the needs of a novel.

Besides being a carpenter, Maytree is a poet. Every few years, he publishes book-length poems, but regrets that the only things of his to get wider attention are shorter pieces that have nothing of the scope of his bolder concepts. But I suspect that his gift, like Annie Dillard's, may have been more lyrical than epic. Open this book almost at random, and you will find magnificent writing. But despite the author's attempt to give it a bold arch spanning many decades, buttressed at the one end by courtship and at the other by death, the structure loses integrity in the middle. Dillard is quite skilful in her use of brief forward leaps in time to set up deceptive expectations, so I should not give away those aspects of the plot that are a surprise. But suffice it to say that when something truly unexpected does happen, it seems both unprepared and inexplicable. For a while, the burden of the story falls more on the shoulders of more minor characters who have not been established with the depth and sympathy of the Maytrees themselves. And when the novel moves back towards emotional resolution, everything seems to happen too easily. Yes, it is beautiful, but the lives involved lack some of the harsher edges, the pain, grit, and texture needed to validate beauty. Dillard's magnificent poetry needs to be balanced with more plain old prose.
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Jellyfish

I'll make this very short; don't think this book merits more attention. As you can tell from the lack of stars awared I did not care for it. Maytree, the husband, appears rather spineless, easily led; not a very sympathetic character.
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