Torment (Fallen, Book 2)
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Torment (Fallen, Book 2)

Hardcover – September 28, 2010

Price
$16.99
Format
Hardcover
Pages
464
Publisher
Delacorte Press
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ISBN-13
978-0385739146
Dimensions
5.81 x 1.5 x 8.56 inches
Weight
1.21 pounds

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Amazon.com Exclusive: Questions for Lauren Kate Amazon.com: Luce and Daniel's story is very romantic. What inspired you to write a love story between a human and an angel? Lauren Kate: I’ve been writing love stories for as long as I’ve been writing. To me, the most complicated romances make the most interesting narratives, so I’m always looking for new obstacles to throw in my lovers’ paths. When I was getting my masters degree in fiction, I was studying biblical narratives and came across a line in Genesis (6:1-4), which describes a group of angels who fell in love with mortal women. Putting this reference together with a mention in Isaiah and another in Palsm 82, biblical scholars conclude that these angels were actually cast out of Heaven for their lust. Which means--you could say--that these angels chose love over Heaven. I found this to be an endlessly interesting set up for an incredibly complicated romance. I started thinking about what kind of mortal girl it would take to attract an angel’s attention. And what it would be like for her to find herself in this position. What kind of baggage would an angel have? What would her very over-protective parents think? From there, this whole world unfurled in my head with fallen angels, demons, reincarnation, and the war between good and evil all battling for a piece of the action. Amazon.com: We've been wondering about the "mechanics" of Luce and Daniel's story (for lack of a better word). Does Daniel age? Or does he stay seventeen forever (while Luce grows older)? And with that said, what does he do while Luce is growing up in each of her lives? What was he doing before he met Luce in this life? Kate: What’s important about angels is not their bodies but their souls. In their purest forms, they’re actually genderless, but for my story to work--for the angels to come down to earth and interact with mortals--they all assume human bodies and attach themselves to human genders. Daniel is eternal and will live on forever, but the body Luce sees him in (gorgeous as it is) is really just a shell for the soul that she loves. There’s not the feeling of a ticking clock in the background as there might be with, say, a vampire story. Right now I’m writing Passion , the prequel where we’ll see Luce and Daniel in a dozen other lifetimes, so I’m exploring a lot of these mechanics (a great word for it, by the way) between the angel’s bodies and souls. The way Daniel occupies himself in between Luces varies from life to life. His soul is least at rest just after she’s died, before she’s incarnated into another life--when she is “in between.” During her lives, even when he isn’t with her, he is always aware of her age, what she’s going through, how she’s doing. He has a sort of internal Lucinda clock. Sometimes he meets her as a child, sometimes he tries to stay away from her as long as possible, to give her as much of a life outside of him as he can. In the years leading up to the life where they meet at Sword and Cross, Daniel was living on Skid Row in Los Angeles. Amazon.com: Fallen and Torment talk a lot about the history of Heaven and Hell, the different classes of Angels, and the rules of human-angel interaction. Obviously these themes are explored heavily in religious texts, but were there other sources that informed your story? Kate: It’s interesting because there is actually very little in the Bible about angels--a few mentions in the Old Testament, a few more in the new. And the mentions that we do have are often vague or contradictory. Most of what we think of when we think of angels today comes from secular or cultural contexts. Seventy-five percent of it might have come from Milton alone. I worked with a biblical scholar at UC Davis who pointed me toward some apocryphal texts (books written during the same as the bible, but which were not included in the book when the canon was closed). Books like Enoch 1-3 and the Dead Sea Scrolls are chock full of angel references. I also read a trilogy on Satan and a book called the A History of Heaven both by Jeffrey Burton Russell , as well as a great book by Harold Bloom called Omens of the Millennium . I got so engrossed in all of the research I did for Fallen that I had a hard time knowing when to stop reading and when to start writing. I had to realize that it was okay for me to pick and choose things from various accounts, to look past contradictions, and to come up with my own angel mythology. That’s what Milton did, after all! Amazon.com: What is Cam's deal? We're not convinced that he's totally evil--in Fallen , he seemed to be trying to protect Luce by keeping her away from Daniel, and in Torment he and Daniel reach a mysterious truce, again to protect Luce. Will we be seeing more of him in book 3? Kate: Speaking of Milton, isn’t it fascinating that Satan is the most interesting character in Paradise Lost ? From the start of this series, I have wanted to test the boundaries between what is “good” and what is “evil.” How and when do those terms get applied? Are they black and white or is there some flexibility along the spectrum? Obviously it’s much more interesting if Heaven and Hell/good and evil work as binaries: opposites that orbit each other and are pulled toward each other with a mutual gravitation. We see that at the end of Fallen and in Torment with Daniel and Cam’s truce. The idea that good and evil rely on each other is as old as the oldest dualistic religion, Zoroastrianism (on whose shoulders both Judaism and Christianity stood). So yes, there is more to Cam than pure evil! (Especially since his character--the charming side of his character anyway--was based loosely on my husband.) We’ll see a lot of him in Passion and will even begin to understand how he got where he is today. Amazon.com: Can you tell us a little bit about book 3? Will we find out more about Luce and Daniel's past lives? Kate: Passion is going to be the craziest, coolest book I’ve ever written! I’m halfway through the first draft right now and it is so rewarding to finally get to delve into Luce and Daniel’s past lives together. The history these two share is the stuff of epics, and I am learning so many new things about them as I write. For any reader out there feeling tortured by the teasing hints of so many thrilling past lives: Passion is your book! Everything--well, almost everything--will be illuminated. From School Library Journal Gr 9 Up–This sequel to Fallen (Delacorte, 2009) continues they complex tale as Luce tries to uncover the truth and break the cycle of falling in love, dying young, and being reincarnated. Daniel, her lover through the ages and a fallen angel, institutes a truce with Demons to protect her from the Outcasts, who would do her harm. For her safety, Daniel hides her at a boarding school for the Nephilim, children of human and fallen angels, and cautions her to remain on campus and learn all she can. Unfortunately a little knowledge can be dangerous and Luce's naive attempts to manipulate her powers constantly put her and others in danger. Some of the rescues employ a deus ex machina as is the case when Arriane inexplicably arrives in Vegas and saves the day. At times the story plods along, with a full chapter devoted to a fencing lesson. Daniel regularly returns to check on Luce and there's lots of swooning, passionate kissing, and playing at being in love, though it often ends with bickering. Interest is piqued with the hint of a love triangle, and the suspense is ratcheted up in the heart-pounding final battle scene. In the end, readers won't be much closer to unraveling Luce's mystery and will need to stay tuned for the next installment. It's unlikely this title will garner new fans for the series, but those already hooked on the epic romance won't want to miss it. Patricia N. McClune, Conestoga Valley High School, Lancaster, PA © Copyright 2010. Library Journals LLC, a wholly owned subsidiary of Media Source, Inc. No redistribution permitted. PRAISE FOR FALLEN, THE BESTSELLING SERIES BY LAUREN KATExa0“Bloodsuckers are about to have some competition for the hearts of YA readers.”— The Daily Beast “This emotional roller coaster will have you turning the pages nonstop!”—Seventeen.comxa0“This series has delivered glorious settings, fast-paced action and a love that transcends death.”— Justine magazinexa0“Readers will pine right alongside Luce.”— Publishers Weekly “This epic romance is a perfect blend of mystery, intrigue, and celestial imagery with a beautiful, bittersweet ending.”— SLJ “Twilight-style success could be in the cards for the fallen-angel saga.”— The Bookseller “Compellingly readable . . . readers will be hooked on Luce’s story.”— VOYA “The Southern Gothic atmosphere . . . is so well crafted that readers can easily picture Luce walking among the marshes and crumbling buildings.”— Kirkus Reviews “A tantalizing, atmospheric Gothic romance, Fallen is well worth picking up.”— New York Times bestselling author Melissa Marr LAUREN KATE is the internationally bestselling author of the FALLEN series, comprised of Fallen, Torment, Passion, Rapture , Fallen in Love , and Unforgiven ; and The Orphan's Song . Her books have been translated into more than thirty languages. She lives in Los Angeles. Visit Lauren online at laurenkatenovels.com. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. ONE EIGHTEEN DAYS Luce planned on keeping her eyes closed all six hours of the cross-country flight from Georgia out to California, right up until the moment when the wheels of the plane touched down in San Francisco. Half asleep, she found it so much easier to pretend she was already reunited with Daniel. It felt like a lifetime since she'd seen him, though it had really only been a few days. Ever since they'd said goodbye at Sword & Cross on Friday morning, Luce's whole body had felt groggy. The absence of his voice, his warmth, the touch of his wings: it had sunk into her bones, like a strange illness. An arm brushed against hers, and Luce opened her eyes. She was face to face with a wide-eyed, brown-haired guy a few years older than her. "Sorry," they both said at the same time, each retreating a few inches on either side of the plane's armrest. Out the window, the view was startling. The plane was making its descent into San Francisco, and Luce had never seen anything like it before. As they traced the south side of the bay, a winding blue tributary seemed to cut through the earth on its way to the sea. The stream divided a vibrant green field on one side from a swirl of something bright red and white on the other. She pressed her forehead to the double plastic pane and tried to get a better view. "What is that?" she wondered aloud. "Salt," the guy answered, pointing. He leaned in closer. "They mine it out of the Pacific." The answer was so simple, so . . . human. Almost a surprise after the time she'd spent with Daniel and the other--she was still unpracticed at using the terms literally--angels and demons. She looked out across the midnight-blue water, which seemed to stretch forever west. Sun-over-water had always meant morning to Atlantic coast-raised Luce. But out here, it was almost night. "You're not from around here, are you?" her seatmate asked. Luce shook her head but held her tongue. She kept staring out the window. Before she'd left Georgia this morning, Mr. Cole had coached her about keeping a low profile. The other teachers had been told that Luce's parents had requested a transfer. It was a lie. As far as Luce's parents, Callie, and anyone else knew, she was still enrolled at Sword & Cross. A few weeks before, this would have infuriated her. But the things that had happened in those final days at Sword & Cross had left Luce a person who took the world more seriously. She had glimpsed a snapshot of another life--one of so many she'd shared with Daniel before. She'd discovered a love more important to her than anything she'd ever thought possible. And then she'd seen all of that threatened by a crazy, dagger-wielding old woman whom she'd thought she could trust. There were more out there like Miss Sophia, that Luce knew. But no one had told her how to recognize them. Miss Sophia had seemed normal, up until the end. Could the others look as innocent as . . . this brown-haired guy sitting next to her? Luce swallowed, folded her hands on her lap, and tried to think about Daniel. Daniel was taking her someplace safe. Luce pictured him waiting for her in one of those gray plastic airport chairs, elbows on knees, his blond head tucked between his shoulders. Rocking back and forth in his black Converse sneakers. Standing up every few minutes to pace around the baggage carousel. There was a jolt as the plane touched down. Suddenly she was nervous. Would he be as happy to see her as she was to see him? She focused on the brown and beige pattern on the cloth seat in front of her. Her neck felt stiff from the long flight and her clothes had a stale, stuffy airline smell. The navy-blue-suited ground crew outside the window seemed to be taking an abnormally long time to direct the plane to its Jetway. Her knees bobbed with impatience. "I take it you're staying in California for a while?" The guy next to her offered a lazy smile that only made Luce more anxious to get up. "Why would you say that?" she asked quickly. "What would make you think that?" He blinked. "With that huge red duffel bag and all." Luce inched away from him. She hadn't even noticed this guy until two minutes ago when he'd jarred her awake. How did he know about her luggage? "Hey, nothing creepy." He shot her a strange look. "I was just standing behind you in line when you checked in." Luce smiled awkwardly. "I have a boyfriend" streamed from her mouth. Instantly, her cheeks reddened. The guy coughed. "Got it." Luce grimaced. She didn't know why she'd said that. She didn't want to be rude, but the seat belt light went off and all she wanted to do was barrel past this guy and right off the plane. He must have had the same idea, because he edged backward in the aisle and swept his hand forward. As politely as she could, Luce pushed past and bounded toward the exit. Only to get caught in a bottleneck of agonizing slowness on the Jetway. Silently cursing all the casual Californians shuffling in front of her, Luce stood on her toes and shifted from foot to foot. By the time she stepped into the terminal, she'd driven herself half insane with impatience. Finally, she could move. She wove expertly through the crowd and forgot all about the guy she'd just met on the plane. She forgot to feel nervous that she'd never been to California in her life--never been further west than Branson, Missouri, that time when her parents dragged her to see Yakov Smirnoff doing standup. And for the first time in days, she even briefly forgot the horrible things she'd seen at Sword & Cross. She was headed toward the only thing in the world that had the power to make her feel better. The only thing that could make her feel that all the anguish she'd been through--all the shadows, that unreal battle in the cemetery, and worst of all, the heartbreak of Penn's death--might be worth surviving. Read more

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  • The second novel in the addictive and
  • worldwide bestselling
  • FALLEN series . . . where love never dies.
  • #1
  • New York Times
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  • USA Today
  • Bestseller
  • More than 3 million series copies in print!
  • Hell on earth.That’s what it’s like for Luce to be apart from her fallen angel boyfriend, Daniel. It took them an eternity to find one another, but now he has told her he must go away. Just long enough to hunt down the Outcasts—immortals who want to kill Luce. Daniel hides Luce at Shoreline, a school on the rocky California coast with unusually gifted students: Nephilim, the offspring of fallen angels and humans.At Shoreline, Luce learns what the Shadows are, and how she can use them as windows to her previous lives. Yet the more Luce learns, the more she suspects that Daniel hasn’t told her everything. He’s hiding something—something dangerous. What if Daniel’s version of the past isn’t actually true? What if Luce is really meant to be with someone else?
  • “Sexy and fascinating and scary . . . I loved loved loved it!”—P. C. Cast,
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Extremely Disappointed

I was eagerly awaiting this book because the first one was amazing, but I read Torment yesterday and was very disappointed. We really didn't learn anything new that wasn't already told in the first book, there were hints, but in 450 pages I'd prefer if there had been a real climax (one I don't think this book provided). This story has so much to offer, yet we still can't see the details of it. I too will read the third book, hoping for a remedy to the disappointment I felt after finishing this sequel. There were good parts in it, but there was just a lot of the book as I was reading that made me roll my eyes and hope it was getting closer to the end. I think I was most frustrated with Luce's angsty "everything's my fault" and finding comfort only in the arms of either Daniel or Miles.
Which leads to the whole other, why the hell bring Miles into it? I thought it was a triangle between Cam, Luce, and Daniel which I really liked, but it seems Cam has been replaced by Miles whom I don't really care for his character at all. Is she turning it into a love square? Or is she pulling a House of night and have Luce fall for all the guys that pay her attention and offer comfort?
I agree who ever said the book was basically full of fluff and I felt it held a lot of repetition. Here's to hoping Lauren Kate can bring back my interest in this series with book #3
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Can't understand the disappointment, this was an amazing followup!!

liked Fallen.

I LOVED TORMENT!

First of all, one of my favorite themes to read is good vs. evil and even better when it's heaven vs. hell. And while most people are probably going to be more interested in the love story aspect of this series, for me it's really all about the battle between the angels and demons. Daniel, the good guy against Cam the bad guy....or are they?? The line in the sand is sometimes a little fuzzy in Torment. You'd think it would be easy to predict the behavior of either one, but sometimes they act in unexpected ways which leaves Luce confused and questioning. And is one of the things that makes Torment so compelling. There are definite mysteries to be solved and I am loving trying to figure them out!

Torment gives us a new setting...the gorgeous California coast. Shoreline is everything that Sword and Cross wasn't. Sunshine and beaches and a gorgeous building with decks and windows where classes are held. We are also introduced to some new characters at the school...Shelby, Luce's new roommate and Miles, a totally sweet guy who helps make Luce feel comfortable in her new school. And there are two teachers who...well, let's just say they're not your ordinary teachers *wink*

And then of course there's Daniel and his glorious wings. Lauren does an absolutely amazing job of describing them...not only can you picture his wings, she makes you hear and feel them too. As you would expect, Daniel's main goal is protecting Luce from the Outcasts, but he's also protecting her from her past. There are lots of unanswered questions and we are left wondering just what it is that he is hiding from her. I think there are going to be some amazing reveals in book three!

I was really happy with Luce's growth in Torment. Granted, she has a habit of doing the absolute opposite of what the people trying to protect her tell her to do, but I think ultimately that is an important part of her personality. She has free will and she acts on it. She puts herself in some situations she should avoid, but there is so much about her past she doesn't understand and she wants to know. You really can't hold it against her. I also really love the fact that while she has this great passion with Daniel, she questions their relationship. She gets that passion and attraction and history isn't everything. So many girls in YA fiction don't do this and I love that Luce is actually thinking.

Bottom line...if you liked Fallen, I think you're going to love Torment!
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Torment? It Felt Like It

I should begin by saying that I wanted to like this book. I wanted to like the series. I really appreciate beautiful, thoughtful graphic design, and I like to see authors and publishers beginning to appreciate just how important good design is as a marketing technique. The series is lovely in concept.

In execution, not so much. The first book was mediocre, and the second was an equally mediocre follow-up. Luce is a troubled teen, put in reform school for her role in the death of her high school crush. In her new, gothic school, she meets a variety of punks and pretties, all fallen angels in disguise. The hero, Daniel, leader of the fallen angels on the side of good, competes with equally attractive Cam, representative of the dark side, for Luce's affection. The second book picks up where the first left off, with Daniel winning Luce's love and her realization that they have been playing out a tragic love story for millennia - Daniel finds her, then Luce dies. This time Luce has not perished, so Daniel sends her to a private school in California for Nephilim, children of angels or demons, to hide her from the growing ranks of their enemies. They proceed to spend the next 400 pages fighting with one another and then making up whenever Daniel comes to visit.

The characters are caricatures - not a single one is fleshed out to real personhood - instead the author relies on style and stereotype to fill in the blanks. The heroine, Luce, waffles from defiant to resigned at dizzying speeds. Even though she realizes she's in an abusive relationship (kudos to the author for making that clear early on), she continues to explain away the fights and problems with that over-exploited panacea 'true love.' It's okay if your relationship is miserable (and killing you!) if it's all in the name of true love.

And since no YA paranormal romance is complete without the requisite Twilight reference, let's just say now, that while Edward becomes a possessive, emotionally manipulative boyfriend from New Moon on, at least in Twilight he is made into an attractive, seductive, tragic, somewhat desirable partner. At the very least, the reader can see why Bella is drawn to him. Daniel is never very attractive - it's hard to see what all the fuss is about. For an angel, supposedly a near-perfect being, he doesn't seem to have many positive qualities. He spends the extent of Torment attempting to dictate orders to Luce, 'for her own good.' He treats her like a child, he's emotionally manipulative, and he's secretive. In real life we'd advise Luce to give him the boot, but because he's a supernatural being, and the Romeo to her Juliet, we're supposed to put up with abusive behavior? Not for me, thanks.

So, with a cast of forgettable characters and an irritating celebrity couple we move towards the BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL that marks the finale of the book (again...in Torment evil wears a different face, though that's really the only difference between it and Fallen). We don't learn any new information, Daniel becomes less, rather than more likeable, and Cam is written out nearly entirely for a new, milquetoast-ish Nephilim love interest.

Bottom line: I skimmed, I got bored, and I wasn't sad when it ended. Two stars for the story, 3 for the design...because I'm shallow.
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A great follow up to Book 1

Anyone who has read Fallen knows that author Lauren Kate ended the book with a cliffhanger. If you haven't read the first book--and plan to--I suggest you skip this altogether!

So, if you're still reading, I assume you were hooked at the end of the first book in the series and left to wonder: What will happen during the eighteen day truce between groups of fallen good and fallen evil angels who seem to be fighting over Luce's fate? Torment picks up only a couple of days later as Luce makes her way to Shoreline, a school in northern California for unusually gifted students. Her classmates are Nephalim--children who are part human, part fallen angel and Luce will board and study with them at this safe haven until Daniel returns for her.

At the school, Luce is more comfortable and less of an outsider than she ever was at Sword and Cross, but it's what she doesn't know that still haunts her. Eventually, she learns the Shadows that plague her are windows to events from her lives, both current and past. She intends to manipulate them and illuminate her relationship with Daniel. The problem? The Shadows only reveal a glimpse. Sometimes partial understanding is more misleading than none at all. Ultimately, viewing her past confuses Luce. And, adding to her sense of bewilderment is Luce's new friend Miles, a warm, funny, open guy who is so different than Daniel.

Often the second book in a series can be a letdown, but Torment did what a second book should do--pull you deeper into the unfolding story and leave you wanting to read the next! The eighteen-day countdown as the end of the truce nears creates a fast-paced read. Following an exciting climax, author Lauren Kate leaves the reader with another cliffhanger ending and a lot of unanswered questions. So, along with other fans of the series, I'm waiting for the next book, Passion, due to hit shelves in the summer of 2011.
-- Reviewed by Michelle Delisle
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Review from Blkosiner's Book Blog

(slightly spoilerish)

Torment was a very enjoyable read, though I had a few issues. The issues were surpassed by awesome characters and tremendous writing. I didn't want to put it down and I am now craving Passion even though I have quite a time to wait.

Luce grew a backbone in this book, and for this I am very glad and applaud Lauren Kate. Even though she felt this magnetic pull to and incredible love for Daniel, she began to really question why it was there. She has no memories of the past lives that they shared, all she has are stolen kisses and a few sweet memories. When he gives orders, and is forced to be behind the scenes, she stands up for herself and demands to know more, she gets angry and pushes to know the relevant information. I am not saying that this driving desire doesn't result in some bad decisions, but she has every right to know more, and to wonder at the intensity of their love.

I really wanted to see more of Daniel in this book. I am honestly not completely sold on him, even though I would really like to be. I adore the concept of undying love, and he has the potential to be an amazing love interest and an awesome character, but I just don't know enough about him. I am in the same boat as Luce except that I don't have any pull to him. There is just too many secrets and so much mystery shrouding him and what role he plays in tipping the balance of the war.

As for the new characters, they are wonderful and really made me get into the story more. Shelby is a firecracker and I love watching her and Luce's relationship build and their interactions. Miles is so cute, and I love his devotion, friendship and understanding toward Luce. He is a down to earth guy and I got to see the cute moments that really build a relationship between him and Luce. Though I am hesitant to get too attached because I know that this is ultimately Luce and Daniel's story and I don't want to hope for romance with them even though it made be alluded just to have that shot down or him be a character just brought in to sacrifice himself for her. Oh, and Franscesa and Steven were also wonderful- they wonderfully illustrated the talk about the line between love and hate- angels and demons- is more blurry than one would like to think. It is heart breaking when she says- "Do I love him, yes. But when the battle comes, I will have to kill him."

Adrianne comes back in this one, and kicks some butt. I totally did not see it coming, but I am glad that she is back. Cam is also back in this one, and he is still a big question mark. I am unsure of his allegiances in the end, and him and Daniel working together.

Overall this is a great story, and I feel like Torment is doing a lot of ground- work for scenes to come.

I have to share a few quotes that I found amusing:

"If you two were going to be that obvious about it, why didn't you come down stairs in your Team Daniel and Team Miles T-Shirts?"

"We should order those," Shelby said.

"Mine's in the laundry," Arriane said.

"Well, as much as I love kicking asses and taking names, it's way past curfew for you three"- Arriane"
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A Tormenting Read, For Sure

Having enjoyed Fallen, I was really looking forward to the follow-up, Torment. I have to say that I was pretty disappointed. Without giving you any spoilers, I will say that this book covers the eighteen days following the truce between angels and demons. Throughout most of the book, Luce spends her time getting herself into trouble and doing what she has explicitly been told not to do. It went something like this: some authority figure tells Luce not to do something. In the very next paragraph, of course Luce goes and does it. Then there is either some disastrous consequence, or she gets into trouble. You would think a girl would have more sense, but not our Luce! In the time she isn't getting into trouble, she is either under the influence of some kind of misunderstanding (usually things the reader figured out ages ago) or fighting with Daniel about his controlling behavior... because, of course, Daniel can't just TELL Luce what's going on. No, that would be FAR too easy.

I am frustrated with the character development in this series (which is just about nil), and the lack of movement in the plot. In my opinion, this 400-some page book could have been told in less than 100 pages and not suffered any ill effects. I'm debating whether to read the third in the series when it comes out. Although I did enjoy the book, it's mostly fluff and words taking up space. Spelling and capitalization errors also drove me nuts. Ms. Kate, you need a better editor! (FYI: The word Marine is capitalized when referring to the United States Marine Corps!) I was really expecting something more from this series, sadly this just didn't deliver.

2.5 stars rounded up to 3.
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What a let down...will the trend continue?

Another young adult author who has great material, puts out a great first novel, and then lets it all crumble apart in the remaining books...or will Lauren Kate be one of the few who are able to bring the story back? My concern is that when this trend starts and I am hopeful I tend to buy the books waiting for things to get better, but the rarely do. I so hope that wont be the case with this series and that the next book will make up for this one. It was truly a let done. However, if there is going to be any chance of a recovery then there important pieces you will need from this novel...just not very many.

It picks up right were Fallen leaves off. Daniel and Cam agree to a 18 day truce among angels and demons to fight another enemy, the outcast. In an attempt at keeping Luce safe they hide her at a school that contains humans as well as the children of angels. When Daniel leaves her there he isnt suppose to have contact with her during the truce to give Luce time to "develop". Luce (being your typical self imposed tragedy thru the novel) is constantly disobeying her teachers ( that happen to be an angel and a demon couple) and is constantly getting herself into trouble. Always making bad decisions and assuming way more then any one person ever could, she is getting into trouble right up to the very end.

In the end you have some answers but with a very alone, confussed, and not sure what to do group of kids, angels, demons, and a stupid teenage who holds the fate of the world in her hands. I guess after reading the book you are hoping for a little better ending then the one we got. I will be purchasing the next one but after that chance this series will get no more...lets hope the suther gets it together before Passion comes out in the summer of 2011.
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Tormented by this book series

My sister raved about, "Fallen" so I read the book. Starting out with a 101 questions and nothing gets resolved. On to, "Torment" and hoping for some answers, and I get none.

I'm a writer and the #1 cardinal rule, "Ask questions in the beginning but don't bore your readers with over-thought, boring background, un-needed characters, develope your theme and deliver the answers to your questions in a timely and effective way that is compelling and sincere."

"Fallen" and "Torment" lacked everything. The only two characters that held "Fallen" together were missing from "Torment".

Do us a favor Lauren, STOP WRITING AND RE-READ YOUR OWN BOOK. Don't read what words you think should be there, read the actual text in the book and see if you'd give your own book more stars then I have. I only gave 1 star because there wasn't anything lower.

Skip this book and read the newspaper instead as it will captivate and mesmerize more then this series of books.
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Forgetful

If you haven't got this book yet, save your money. I will not say that you shouldn't altogether skip it, but you won't learn anything new about the plot or the characters.
I fell in love with Fallen, it is great concept that takes romance to another impossible reality, I was getting a little tired of all the vampire romance out there so Angels and Demons were a good change. But I fell that the author kind lost herself in this one. This book is forgetful.
While I liked the change of scenery, going to a more upbeat school and meeting other people that were in love with angels or that were the fruit of this forbid love, so we could get a glimpse of those relationships, it didn't happen.
The possibility of Luce learning about the previews lives and what the shadows were and how to see trough them, had so much potential, but what you get is a bunch of nothing. Too many new character that doesn't enriche the story, a new love triangle with a too nice of a guy. I was happy with the one that she had created for Fallen, why bring someone new. I like Miles, but he should be just a friend.
Here is what I would have done with the story line. Luce would learn how to control the shadows and use it to learn about her past and about her angel. Daniel, would keep his part of the truce and would not see Luce for a while, cam, would take advantage of that and would try to seduce her, Luce would feel conflicted about her eternal love and all the pain that was left on it's wake.

One more thing, what about the truce, the chapters were a count down to some epic battle that never happened. It reminds me of the end of the Twilight Series, when Stephenie Meyer didn't have the guts to do what it need to be done!
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Review of Torment

I am so angry right now! Thoroughly disgusted with what was done with Luce in this book. I'm beginning to think that I'm expecting too much by expecting a three-dimensional character that I actually LIKE and want to sympathize with.

Now that I've gotten that little rant out of the way I will say this. I enjoyed Torment infinitely better than I did Crescendo, and I 100% credit that to the supporting characters in the book. Without the cast of characters at Luce's new school (and I do miss the old, Gothic cemetery), this story would have, basically, been exactly the same type of story I read in Crescendo.

Now, if you are wanting to get some answers, be prepared to join the disappointment train with me. There is SO MUCH BACKSTORY I want to know about, Lauren Kate!! Please, flesh it out, give us the story, talk to us about the outcasts and the fallen and the history you've created. Luce is not the only girl in the dark here - we need and want to know what's happening!

That said - I'll be picking up Book 3 just to find out if we get some answers. Oh, now I'm all frustrated again. There were so many pages and still.. no answers! Okay, I'm done ranting now. The book is interesting but, if you want my advice, wait to dive in until the story has been completed or you too might end up like me right now.
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