Bees in the Butterfly Garden (The Gilded Legacy)
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Bees in the Butterfly Garden (The Gilded Legacy)

Paperback – July 1, 2012

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$9.99
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Paperback
Pages
407
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Tyndale House Publishers, Inc.
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ISBN-13
978-1414364469
Dimensions
5.5 x 1 x 8.25 inches
Weight
12.8 ounces

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Meg Davenport grew up at an exclusive New York boarding school. Surrounded by the educated elite, she had everything most girls could dream of―except her family. But when her father dies, she seizes the opportunity to build her own future. Discovering secrets about the father she thought she knew puts her in contact with the man her father mentored and could involve her in a dangerous plot. VERDICT: This character-driven historical set in the American Gilded Age represents Lang ( Look to the East ; Whisper on the Wind ) at her best. Though her many fans will surely enjoy it, consider giving this title also to patrons who like Amanda Harte and Tamara Alexander. (Library Journal) “A young lady of impeccable decorum never appears outside her home unchaperoned, uncoiffed, ungloved, or unhappy.” ―MADAME MARISSE’S HANDBOOK FOR YOUNG LADIES Raised at an exclusive boarding school, Meg Davenport has everything she needs but none of what she’s wanted most―like the love of a family, or a future not dependent on following etiquette and marrying well. So when she receives shocking news of her father’s death, Meg seizes the chance to break every rule that has governed her life. Especially when she learns John Davenport wasn’t the wealthy businessman she thought, but one of the Gilded Age’s most talented thieves.Ian Maguire knows that John―his mentor―would never have wanted his beloved daughter to follow in his footsteps. Yet she is determined to carry on his legacy, and her talent for garden design has earned her an invitation to stay with one of Fifth Avenue’s wealthiest families. With friends like those, Meg could help Ian pull off his biggest heist yet.But living in both worlds is more treacherous than Meg imagined. And as Ian’s concern for Meg turns to love, he finds himself torn between greed and guilt. Can they find the legacy they both long for, or in trying to gain everything, will they end up losing it all? Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Bees in the Butterfly Garden By MAUREEN LANG Tyndale House Publishers, Inc. Copyright © 2012 Maureen LangAll right reserved. ISBN: 978-1-4143-6446-9 Chapter One A young lady who attains the grace of self-discipline rightfully earns the admiration of others. Indeed, her place in genteel society will not be won without it. Madame Marisse's Handbook for Young Ladies NEW HAVEN COUNTY, CONNECTICUT FOUR YEARS LATER Meg DaVenport stood barefoot on the warm, loose garden soil. she watched a butterfly hover on a breeze above the garden as if it danced before a banquet, contemplating which nectar to sample first. Yellow celandines, purple coneflowers, or red verbena? not far off, the sweet briar rose beckoned, trimmed with a skirt of pinks and zinnias. All planted under Meg's direction to attract butterflies of every sort. She knew this butterfly. As a caterpillar he had, along with so many of his butterfly siblings and moth cousins, undoubtedly been hosted among the clover beds or colorful sweet peas that festooned the white columns of the gazebo where Meg often sat. But while many of the moths and butterflies boasted shades of black and white and gold and orange, this one lit a delicate shade of blue as the sun blended its sheer wings with the summer sky. How she wished she could fly like him, beyond the walls of the school, and see what the world looked like from a butterfly's view. It had been so long since she'd let herself dream of such things that she'd nearly forgotten how. Perhaps it was as silly a whim for herself as for this pretty blue butterfly. He wasn't as adventurous as the others. She'd seen him before and knew he rarely floated beyond the edges of the garden. She bent to remove another weed, although if Madame Marisse were still alive, she'd have quietly but firmly directed Meg back to the gazebo to merely enjoy what even she had called "Meg's garden." even with the school nearly empty for the off-season, there were others employed to do such menial tasks as pulling weeds. But Meg enjoyed the satisfaction to be found in keeping the garden pure of anything but what she'd intended for it to present. Besides, the earth was softer than any carpet beneath her toes. "Meg!" Hazel Hibbit beckoned, but beside the stout school matron bustled her sister, Beatrice. Meg smiled, far from alarmed. The Hibbit sisters were forever distressed about something, perhaps more often now that Hazel had become the matron. Meg added the weed to the others she'd collected and set to the side for the gardener to remove, then stepped back onto the grass. "A message!" Hazel called. "Yes!" Beatrice added. "for you!" Curiosity stirred, Meg held the puffed flounces that trimmed the bottom of her silk day dress out of the way to wipe her feet on the downy lawn. Obviously it wasn't a letter from a former schoolmate, an invitation to a soiree, or even a note from some prospective beau. Such things wouldn't have warranted any more attention than to be left with the others upon her silver card holder by the door. Only a message from one person would hasten Hazel's step and add a bloom to Beatrice's cheeks. It must be from Meg's father. "Open it, child! Look, it's bordered in black." Meg reached for the sealed envelope. Indeed, the stationery was outlined in black, though her name was written neatly in the center where the paper had been left white. She tore it open, seeing it was dated that very day. June 7, 1883 Dearest Meggie, I write to you today with a heavy heart and unsteady hand. Your beloved father passed on to his reward this very day. I will, of course, see to all the arrangements of his burial. Please be assured he did not suffer but breathed his last in the peacefulness of sleep. Respectfully, Ian Maguire "He's dead." Meg's words, like her heart, were untouched by the news. So it was over. Her hope that he would one day arrive knowing how to be a father to her, or to share with her anything of the family to which she was bound by blood. "Your father?" Beatrice's voice was usually high-pitched, but just now piercingly so. "He's—he's gone?" Meg nodded, folding the note and slipping it back into the envelope. She walked past the sisters, back to the three-story house that had once ranked among the finest federal estates on the hills between Boston and New York. For the past twenty-five years, this home had been one of the most expensive, exclusive schools in New England. One that taught European grace and manners to the next generation of accomplished wives and mothers, all under the far-reaching umbrella of Christian love. Even after Madame Marisse died two years ago, the staff had carried on in her absence so that it was still regarded as one of the finest schools along the East Coast. Beatrice fluttered behind Meg, taking one of her arms. "oh, dear, we're so very sorry for the news!" "Yes, of course we are," Hazel added, reaching for Meg's other arm. "How sad the world has lost such a gentleman." Indeed. Meg stepped up to the porch that served as the entrance to the back of the school, walked past the sunroom, where she and countless others had learned not only the art of watercolor and charcoal drawing, but the art of conversation and genteel manners. Here they had been taught how to be demure yet confident, all the while reminded of the delicacy of a woman's constitution and the greater delicacy of a woman's reputation. She passed the music room, where she'd learned not only to sing and dance and play piano, but the history of musical elements as well, because Madame Marisse had believed in the depth as well as the breadth of knowledge—at least as it pertained to becoming an asset to a husband. And she continued past the sitting room, where she had rested after lawn tennis or horseback riding or long afternoon walks. Or had spent time with the mundane to the profound, from idle embroidery to discussing the greatest literature known to man. Where she'd prayed with other students and the staff alike in english as well as French. Because Madame Marisse had believed in educating the whole person, physically, intellectually, and spiritually. Meg passed all the rooms in which she had been a student, a friend, a protégé. But never a daughter. In the front hall, at the foot of the stairs, she turned back to the sisters. "Thank you for your concern, but I wish to be alone for now." "Oh yes, of course," Beatrice said. Meg put a foot on one stair, then another, realizing for the first time that she'd left her shoes in the garden. But they didn't matter now. "But ..." One hand on the polished walnut handrail, Meg turned back. Hazel looked up at Meg with the oddest expression, one of uncertainty rather than sympathy. The look disappeared as Hazel turned away. "It's too soon, my dear. Never mind. Go upstairs, and we'll talk when you're ready." "Pertaining to what?" Hazel faced Meg again. "Pertaining to your father, dear." "There is nothing to be said." "You'll want to go to his funeral, of course," Beatrice said. Meg shook her head. "even if I did, I wouldn't know how. That boy—" she amended her thought of him; the last time she'd seen Ian Maguire, he had been a boy, but surely he was as grown as she by now. "a Mr. Maguire will be attending to all of the details." Hazel pulled at the bottom of her cuirass bodice, which shifted despite the finest of corsets beneath. It would fit even tighter by the end of summer, during which time Hazel annually added a few pounds, eating quantities she would never permit herself—or others—to consume while school was in session. "Yes, well, that isn't exactly what I meant, but we needn't discuss anything right now." Meg descended the two stairs she'd mounted. The school was newly quiet with only her and the sisters there, besides the reduced year-round household staff. "if there is anything to be said regarding my father's death, Miss Hibbit, you might as well tell me now. Has it something to do with my place here?" "Oh no, of course not!" Beatrice spoke before Hazel could, shaking her head and taking one of Meg's hands, patting it. She was as wont to be thin as her sister was to be plump. When the students returned in the fall, one sister would eat with those whose diets were curbed, while the other ate with those whose diets were embellished. At the end of every summer they were able to provide guidance and personal example for those girls who had to work at becoming the ideally sized debutante. "Your position is secure as long as you like," Beatrice added. "Madame Marisse made that so very clear, you know, before ... well, before she passed on." Meg turned her eyes back to Hazel, and as so often happened when Meg leveled a gaze at anyone, man or woman, Hazel let her own stare linger. It happened because of the color of Meg's eyes; she knew that. The eyes she'd inherited from her father. Eyes that people simply wanted to peer into. Hazel took Meg's other hand, leading her from the hall and back toward the wide, curved threshold into the parlor. It was a large room appointed in the finest fashion: furniture designed by such famous people as Phyfe, Lannuier, and roux; side chairs and sofas and a pair of French ladies' desks trimmed with inlaid mahogany; and nearby, a rococo center table of marble and rosewood offering an inviting surface for a silver tea set imported from London. Hazel headed to one of the desks. "i wonder if you might think this a bit sudden, considering the news has had but a moment to make an impression." Meg stared at Hazel, wondering if the older woman truly believed her own words. Did she think Meg's lack of emotion was simply because her father's death hadn't sunk in yet? Did she expect Meg to mourn a man she barely knew? other women might not have been immune to the charms of John Davenport, but unlike them Meg had never once wanted to simply stare at his handsome face. "What is it you'd like to say about the matter, Miss Hibbit?" Hazel looked from Meg to the desk beside her, the one used only by the staff. Meg expected, one day, that she would use that desk. Knowing there were few other options for her future, Meg had decided to transform this school from a luxurious factory of wives and mothers to an institution that could offer women more choices: to be instructors or lecturers, doctors or lawyers, or anything else they wished. It wasn't the kind of future she'd envisioned as a child—one in which she made others' dreams come true as she ignored her own—but with so little choice left open to her, it would have to suffice. Hazel withdrew a key from her pocket. "Please, make yourself comfortable. Perhaps Beatrice could summon some tea." Meg could hardly sit, let alone drink tea. "What is it you want to share with me?" "I have a letter for you." she opened the desk as she spoke. Meg had seen the interior a thousand times or more: little compartments neatly holding bills and records, a small inkwell, pens and tips, stationery and envelopes. Nothing unusual. It was, in fact, the perfect model for students to reproduce while studying household management. But then, after Hazel withdrew a small stack of envelopes, she pushed the edge of the corner compartment. In one surprising instant the rear wood piece dropped down. A shadow appeared, from which Hazel drew another lone envelope. Holding it in her thick fingers, Hazel turned back to Meg. "it's from Madame Marisse regarding your father. We were instructed to look at it if you were ever at death's door. Otherwise it was to be given to you upon the day you left our school or the day your father died. Whichever came first." How silly of Meg not to have had some kind of premonition of this. But she hadn't; Meg was completely, utterly stunned that Hazel knew something concerning her father that she did not. "A letter from Madame to me, about my father. Do you know what it says?" Hazel shook her head. Meg took the envelope, instantly disappointed in its weight-or rather, the lack of it. Surely it was a short letter. She didn't open it right away. Instead, she stared down at the familiar script. So precise, so feminine. The perfect handwriting, as perfect as everything Madame Marisse had done. As controlled as Meg had learned to be. Meg broke into the envelope, withdrawing the paper inside. she recognized at once the school stationery, upon which was written a few meager lines and a new York address. The address below is to be used to contact John Davenport, should anything happen to Meg. If there has been any change, the proprietor of this business will know where Mr. Davenport can be reached. Only to be used in the most dire of circumstance. Meg allowed the sisters to read the words over her shoulders. "Well, then, there is no reason for you not to attend his funeral," Beatrice said. "You have means to contact his estate now." Hazel nodded. "We'll accompany you, of course." Meg shook her head. "No. I'll not be going." She folded the letter, slipped it back into the envelope, and crumpled it with the other one, the one from Ian Maguire that had revealed her father's death. Then she walked from the room. It wasn't until she was up the stairs, down the hall, through the very last bedroom door, and inside the perfectly decorated room that she fell to her knees, pressing those letters to her breast. And then she burst into tears. (Continues...) Excerpted from Bees in the Butterfly Garden by MAUREEN LANG Copyright © 2012 by Maureen Lang. Excerpted by permission of Tyndale House Publishers, Inc.. All rights reserved. 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  • Raised in an exclusive boarding school among Fifth Avenue’s finest, Meg Davenport has all she’s ever needed . . . but none of the things she’s wanted most, like family or dreams of a future that include anything other than finding a suitable match. So when her distant father dies, she seizes the chance to throw etiquette aside and do as she pleases. Especially when she learns that John Davenport wasn’t the wealthy businessman she thought, but one of the Gilded Age’s most talented thieves.Poised to lead those loyal to Meg’s father, Ian Maguire knows the last thing his mentor would have wanted is for his beloved daughter to follow in his footsteps. Yet Meg is determined, and her connections to one of New York’s wealthiest families could help Ian pull off his biggest heist yet. But are they both in over their heads? And in trying to gain everything, will they end up losing it all?

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Not my favorite

This book review has been a long time coming. I waited and waited, hoping that if I gave it more time I'd remember something that would make me like it more. I wish I could, but it just wasn't my 'cup of tea'. For those of you who have read my reviews before, you know I like a book that draws me into the lives of the characters. I like descriptive narratives and engaging dialog. I like to feel something for the characters. I never quite got there with this book. Now, remember, this is only my opinion. You may really like it. I hope you do. I hope you give it a chance and really love it. At first, I was really drawn to the title. The main character is a young woman who designs gardens to attract butterflies. You'll have to read the book to find out what the bees reference pertains to. I had an inkling about that but wasn't comepletely sure until I read the author's notes in the back of the book. I also like books that are obviously Christian in nature. This one was kind of wishey-washey in that regard, Usually , it takes me 3-5 days to read a book. This one took me two weeks. I just couldnt get the hang of the author's writing style. In my opinion, it was too wordy. I did like how, toward the end, the author makes a point to emphasize the subtle differences between grace, mercy and justice.

Here is what the publisher's website says about it:
"Raised in an exclusive boarding school among Fifth Avenue's finest, Meg Davenport has all she's ever needed . . . but none of the things she's wanted most, like family, or dreams of a future that includes anything other than finding a suitable match. So when her distant father dies, she seizes the chance to throw etiquette aside and do as she pleases. Especially when she learns that John Davenport wasn't the wealthy businessman she thought, but one of the Gilded Age's most talented thieves.

Poised to lead those loyal to Meg's father, Ian Maguire knows the last thing his mentor would have wanted is for his beloved daughter to follow in his footsteps. Yet Meg is determined, and her connections to one of New York's wealthiest families could help Ian pull off his biggest heist yet. But are they both in over their heads? And in trying to gain everything, will they end up losing it all?"

You can read an exerpt on the publisher's website. I hope you give it a try.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Tyndale House Publishers, Inc. through their book review program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions expressed above are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255 "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising."
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Meg Davenport has spent most of her life at an exclusive boarding school in Connecticut far from the father she wishes would acknowledge her. She has every worldly comfort a girl could want and her learning has been superior. What she truly wants, however, is a relationship with her father. When word of his death reaches Meg she is both devastated and indifferent. She goes to the funeral with hopes of learning more about the father she never knew.

In New York she learns that her father's profession was that of a thief, a very successful thief. Ian Maguire, Meg's father's protege, would like to keep Meg away from her father's profession but he can't deny that her connections are worthy of note. Realizing he can't stop Meg's entry into thieving he decides to make sure she doesn't come to harm.

What follows is an intricate story that will keep you intrigued and interested. Lang is an excellent historian and I always appreciate reading her meticulous research. The gilded age is well explained in this novel as you would expect from Lang. The characters and developed but not particularly likeable. I found myself getting very bogged down with the story about a third of the way through, I was glad I kept pressing on for it is indeed a good read. While you may not be able to relate to the story line you will surely be able to relate to the character's angst and victories.

I received this book free from Tyndale House Publishers. I was not required to write a positive review.
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A Good Story

When Meg's father dies, she finds out that he wasn't an upstanding citizen, but a thief. Some of his friends, including Ian, are also thieves. This news changes how Meg feels about life and she wants to join in since that was her father's occupation.

The story was good, but slow for the first half. I was glad to see that several characters had feelings of guilt over what they were doing. I also liked how the painting of Christ and the two thieves on the cross factored into the story.
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Wonderfully Unpredictable

Oftentimes the plots for Christian fiction are similar, girl is going about her business, finds a guy, struggles with spiritual issues, marries and lives happily, the end. While there is nothing wrong with those types of plot, they aren't very interesting or unique. I was pleasantly surprised that this one was not one of those books. Meg struggles with feelings she "shouldn't have" towards her father, along with others as well as her feelings towards God and spirituality. However, she has a constant battle between right and wrong thought out the novel as well. I enjoyed the twists and turns in the plot, felt frightened and rejoiced with the characters. Overall, it was a very well written book. I am looking forward to reading more from this author.

I read this in the ebook format on my Kindle Fire. There were a few times that I went into it and it returned to the home page, rather than syncing to the furthest read page. However, when I went back into it, it stayed on the page the second time. I did like that this ebook as the text to voice feature (while the reading is a bit choppy, it is that way with all of the books). This feature allowed me to listen to it in the car on the way to and from work. The format was very well done for the Kindle Fire.

Note: I was given this book by Tyndale Publishers to review. However, all of the review content are my own opinions.
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fresh and extremely well-written christian historical....WITH THIEVES !

from my blog review:

Bees in the Butterfly Garden has two BIG things going for it a. ) it's a Christian Historical about THIEVES ( and no, not the lame Gown of Spanish Lace type) b.) Maureen Lang is a beautiful, beautiful writer.

Meg Davenport is your run-of-the-mill prep school sweetheart. She's learned the ways of etiquette and propriety, she is bred to be a proper wife for a society man. But, when her father, who has long supported her tenure at boarding school and is proud of all she is learning from Mme. Marisse's Handbook for Young Ladies, passes away and Meg learns his true identity and the true nature of her past, Meg's world is turned upside down.

Meg's father John Davenport was one of New York's finest criminals. Wanting to spare Meg his life and ensure she was well set up among the echelon of the Fifth Avenue families he robs, he kept his true nature a secret from her in hopes that should he pass, Meg would be supported by a husband and a rich lifestyle. But, Meg's too canny and too spirited to settle for her late father's wishes. In fact, she'd much rather learn more about his past and try her hand at the family business among such hardened ne'er-do-wells as Pubjug and Brewster and others of her father's crew. Her father's protégé, however, the irrepressible Ian Maguire wants to honour John's wishes and keep Meg from the underhanded business she is suddenly so curious about. All of Ian's life he has heard Meg's name praised to the skies by her father and now, with Meg in his path, a beautiful and refined young woman, he cannot imagine entrenching her in the shady lifestyle of her heritage.

When an inadvertent opportunity pairs Ian and Meg together to steal from one of the wealthiest families in New York, their paths cross as adversaries and suddenly as prospective courters. Meg discovers whether or not she has the heart for burglary and Ian begins to wonder if the slight tugging at his conscience comes from a higher place.

Though constant quotations ( seriously, beginning every chapter), took away from the flow of the story and loose ends wrapped up really well (as in as pertly and properly and easily as an episode of White Collar ), this was a fun, fast, energized and extremely well-written novel. Indeed, my first from Maureen Lang whose previous books I now want to seek out.

We all saw the cover and went "ooooo pretty!" when it was first released and the inside is pretty, too! I really enjoyed Lang's attention to slight detail: the offerings of refreshment at an outdoor concert, the place settings and courses at an upper-crust dinner party, the marks and mars of Ian's trade. It is obvious that Lang was suffused with a passion for the time period and its intricate complexities as she wound her way through the writing process. Meg's penchant for flowers was also welcome. While faith of any sort seems rather light in the first half, the second half doles out plenty by way of redemption, mercy and grace, especially as emblemized through a painting of Christ and the two thieves at Golgotha. While this might seem a little too obvious a metaphor, Lang's gentle evocation of the wistful and rueful effect it has on its viewers made it, in short, work as a tie to the Christian message.

I immediately sensed Ian's fascination with Meg and, at first, am certain that it was borne of the duty he felt towards her father. It would have been easy, thus, to assume that the love of he felt for her was one more of idolization. However, the more circumstance threw the two of them together, Lang deftly interwove moments where their chemistry deepened---where Meg saw beyond Ian's exterior as a talented crook and focused on the man he was (confused and hurt from his past ).

Unique, smartly written and featuring characters who drink wine! Imagine! Also, featuring characters not quite black or white: who trust and serve God while performing tasks that maybe don't QUITE inch up to the Ten Commandments.
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Justice, Mercy or Grace?

Meg Davenport always believed her father was a wealthy businessman who had no time for his only child. When he dies, she discovers that he was the leader of a band of thieves: a group now in the middle of a power struggle. Her father's protégée, Ian, is up against an unsavory character called Brewster who appears to have few morals. Looking for excitement and believing she can no longer expect to be married into society, Meg inserts herself into their shady world.

To be honest, I didn't care for Meg. She didn't appear to develop a conscience until toward the end of the story. She was willing to use the Pemberton family for selfish purposes, when they welcomed her so willingly into their home. Time after time, her father's paramour (a new Christian) warns her about the path she's on, but she doesn't listen. It is only when faced with prison that she seems to wake up. In contrast, Ian's coming to Christ felt much more genuine. He is willing to pay the price for his crimes, whatever it may be, and he freely offers his confession. Ian reminded me of Remington Steele, as he has a very similar background to the Pierce Brosnan character from the 1980's TV show.

The Pembertons have regular family problems, but I loved their way of addressing wrongdoings within the family. The perpetrator will receive justice, mercy or grace from the other family members. It is easy to want justice. How easy is it to extend grace? Meg has an opportunity to find out when the youngest Pemberton daughter wrongs her. But can the family extend this grace when they learn of Meg's terrible deceit?

Thank you to Tyndale for my free copy of Bees in the Butterfly Garden, which I received in exchange for an honest review.
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A nice stretch into a new type of story

Where I got the book: pre-ordered on Amazon. Maureen Lang is a friend IRL. And I STILL never 5-starred a review till this one. Read on.

I feel that with this book, Lang has started to stretch herself out of the safer waters of the inspirational romance genre, and I like the result. Let me explain.

Th inspirational aka Christian romances I've read (and I'm not a huge expert on this) tend to follow a bit of a formula. Miss and Mr Wonderful are both really, really good people from Christian homes but at least one of them has become estranged from God in the mildest terms. So I'm not talking they-turned-to-Wicca-and-became-a-high-priest(ess) kind of terms. We're talking about how they stopped going to church/praying/reading the Bible sort of terms. This sad fact is usually dropped into the narrative about page 10.

And one at least of them has a little flaw, often involving trust i.e. they will Never Trust Again Because They Were Hurt. The other half of the prospective duo has a much stronger faith, and takes the lead in guiding his or her consort toward the happy ending.

In other words, these people are good. Almost, but not quite, perfect. For me, this has always created an unreal sort of disconnect because, seriously? I need to be able to imagine myself in the heroine's shoes, and they never fit.

So to the plot of Bees in the Butterfly Garden. Meg has left her exclusive boarding school to attend her father's funeral, only to discover he was a successful thief and the reason he never came to visit her at school was because he wanted her kept strictly away from his lifestyle. Meg is, not surprisingly, pretty mad at her father for a) not telling her the truth b) being absent from her life, but this is also an aha! moment because she sees her own rebelliousness as having good, solid genetic grounds. Realizing that her pedigree is never going to get her the posh husband that she's been trained to expect, Meg decides to become a thief herself and prove her father wrong about not belonging in his life.

She ends up working with Ian, the man her father informally adopted as an apprentice thief and surrogate son, to rob the family of a schoolfriend, Claire. Meg is torn between proving herself a good thief, growing to like Claire and her family, coping with the criminal element, and dealing with the attentions of two very different suitors.

In a way, this is the usual formula flip-flopped. It's the secondary characters who provide the faith element, while the hero and heroine set about breaking the 8th commandment (and probably the ones about coveting and bearing false witness as well). Add to this an extremely light touch with the inspirational elements until you are thoroughly wrapped up in the story, and there's definitely more edge to this novel than the everyday inspirational romance.

And it all made for an absorbing story. I found myself not wanting to break off to go do, y'know, real life things, and that's a very good sign. Lang's writing is always polished and easy, with good editing and packaging adding to the experience, so there was nothing to shake me out of Meg's world. My criticism would be that I'd like more character development in place of setting, but I'm beginning to understand that setting is loved by romance readers and you can't throw out all the rules of the genre at once.

Of course I'm sure there are readers who like the safe approach. But I get excited when I see forward movement, hence the rating.
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Bees in the Butterfly Garden

4.5 Stars

What a fun book this was to read! I loved every page of it. Maureen Lang wrote a great book filled with tension, danger, romance, faith, friendship and suspense. Bees in the Butterfly Garden is book 1 in Marueen's new Gilded Legacy series and I am so excited to see what will come next. I also want to note that the cover for this book is beautiful. I think it would make anyone want to buy the book with out reading the back cover.

In this book, I really loved all the characters and there were so many different types of people that it made the book very fun and interesting to read. It is hard to say much about the different characters without giving the story away, so I won't but I will say that anyone who loves historical romance will want to read this book. This was a book that was well worth taking the time to read, great job Maureen on this excellent book.

* I received this book through the Tyndale Blog Network for the purpose of this review.
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I just finished reading Bees in the Butterfly Garden and I must say it was incredible! I don't think I have read anything by Maureen Lang until now but I like her style.

Meg Davenport has lived at Madame Marisse's school for young ladies in Connecticut since she was nine years old. She's now eighteen and her life has taken a turn--completely upside down. She is told her father has passed away, so she journeys to New York to attend his wake and find out why he never wanted her to live with him. What she finds out serves to steel her resolve to become her father's daughter, a shyster and a cheat. She desires to partner up with Ian Maguire, the man who was her father's partner before he passed away, but Ian knows this isn't the life her father desired for her. He tries everything at his disposal to to disuade Meg, but she is firm in her quest.

Meg chooses not to go back to Madame Marisse's but instead writes to an acquaintance she met there, Claire Pemberton, and offers to come build a butterfly garden for Claire's mother. Claire invites Meg to come and stay the summer not knowing that Meg is there to find out where the Pembertons keep their gold and then feed the information to Ian.

Maureen has written a tightly woven novel that will keep you intrigued until the very last page. It's hard to put down a book that is so well done. I absolutely LOVED it!
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Bees in the Butterfly Garden (Book 1 The Gilded Legacy)
Maureen Lang
Christian Fictional Historical Romance
June 22. 2012
Tyndale Publishing
5 Stars

A bee in the Butterfly Garden is book one in Maureen Lang's series The Gilded Legacy. 1883, Connecticut, Meg Davenport gets a letter at the exclusive boarding school she has been at most of her young life. She learns her father has passed away, a father she has never known and who she feels like has never loved her. Sure he could afford to keep her in the school but isn't family more important? that is until she finally learns the truth about her father and meets up with some of his friends. As the old saying goes once a thief, always a thief. Now that she knows about her father, Meg is determined to become like him even with all his friends trying to talk her out of it. She soon learns that thievery does not always follow family lines and it's not as easy as she thinks.

I have read several of Ms. Lang's books before so I knew that I would not be disappointed. I feel the book started a little slow for me but then it picked up and towards the end I couldn't read fast enough to see what was going to happen. A Christian based book it teaches a lesson without getting overly preachy. I really enjoyed the different characters throughout but Meg at times I wanted to shake some sense into her. She seemed a little spoiled and was going to do things her way no matter what, just to prove she could. If you like a good clean written story with a little touch of suspense and humor and Christian values then I feel you will enjoy this newest series.

I received this complimentary copy from the publisher. A positive review was not required and the opinions expressed in this review are strictly my own.
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