Cast in Secret (Chronicles of Elantra, Book 3)
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Cast in Secret (Chronicles of Elantra, Book 3)

Paperback – July 1, 2007

Price
$7.00
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Paperback
Pages
521
Publisher
Luna
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0373802807
Dimensions
5.13 x 0.8 x 8 inches
Weight
14.7 ounces

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From Publishers Weekly In Sagara's lively third romantic fantasy (after 2006's Cast in Courtlight ), scruffy Kaylin Neya, a private in the branch of law enforcement known as the Hawks in the city of Elantris, has a vision of a forlorn little girl while investigating the theft of a strange box from a local mage. As a result, the Hawks get on the trail of a missing child of the secretive, telepathic Tha'alani. Meanwhile, Elantris's Oracles warn that the city will be destroyed in two weeks. Could the mage Donalan Idis, a former inquisitor known for his brutal experiments on Tha'alani, be behind it all? Even before her likeness appears in an Oracle's predictive painting, Kaylin knows she can't avoid getting involved, no matter how much she hates using her powers. The impressively detailed setting and the book's spirited heroine are sure to charm romance readers as well as fantasy fans who like some mystery with their magic. Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved. "A fast-paced police procedural, deadly magics, five very different races and a wickedly dry sense of humor -- well, it doesn't get any better than this!" -- Bestselling author Tanya Huff "Readers will embrace this compelling, strong willed heroine with her often sarcastic voice." -- Publishers Weekly on Cast in Courtlight New York Times bestselling author Michelle Sagara writes as both Michelle Sagara and Michelle West; she is also published as Michelle Sagara West. She lives in Toronto with her long-suffering husband and her two children, and to her regret has no dogs. She can be found @msagara on Twitter or http://msagarawest.wordpress.com Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Private Kaylin Neya studied the duty roster, and given how little she studied anything that wasn't somehow involved with a corpse, this said something. The official roster was like a dartboard, except that people threw pencils at it instead. Sometimes they hit a bull's-eye anyway. Lined up in columns by day, and color-coded for the more moronic—or hungover—by district, it told the various members of the branch of law enforcement known as the Hawks where, exactly, they were meant to either find trouble or stay out of it. Kaylin could easily make out her name, although some clod with lousy aim had managed to make a giant hole in it. If it was true that the roster could never make everyone happy, it was somehow also true that it could make everyone un happy. Sergeant Marcus Kassan, in charge of assigning duties on a monthly basis, had a strong sense of fairness; if someone was going to suffer, everyone might as well keep them company. As the Hawks' only Leontine officer—in fact, the only Leontine to be an officer of the Halls of Law—he presided over the men and women under his command with a hooded set of fangs in a face that was fur, large eyes and peaked ears—in that order. He also boasted a set of claws that made daggers superfluous and did a good job against swords, as well. Kaylin had no pencil with which to puncture the paper, or she'd have thrown more at it than liberal curses. Swearing at one's assignment wasn't unusual in the office; as far as office pastimes went, it was one that most of the Hawks indulged in. Kaylin's partner, Corporal Severn Handred, looked easily over her shoulder, but waited until she turned to raise a dark brow in her general direction. That brow was bisected by a slender, white line, a scar that didn't so much mar his face as hint at secret histories. Secret, at least, to Kaylin; she hadn't seen him take that one. "What will you be missing?" he asked, when her impressive spate of cursing—in four official languages—had died down enough that he could be heard without shouting. Severn rarely raised his voice. "Game," she said curtly. "Ball," she added. "Playing?" She grimaced. "Betting." Which, for Kaylin, was synonymous with watching . "Figures. Who were you betting on?" She shrugged. "Sharks." "So you'll save some money." This caused an entirely different spate of swearing, and she punctuated this by punching his shoulder, which he thoughtfully turned in her direction. "You'd be betting on the Tigers, I suppose?" "Already have," he replied. "Our shift?" He glanced at the window. It told the time. Literally. Mages had been allowed to go mad when they'd been asked to encourage punctuality, and it showed. The urge to tell the window to shut the hell up came and went several times a day. The fact that mages had been allowed to perform the spell or series of spells seemed almost a direct criticism of Kaylin, who wasn't exactly punctual on the best of days. "Private Neya and Corporal Handred, report to the Quartermaster before active duty." Some sweet young voice had been used to capture the words. Kaylin seriously wanted to meet the person behind it. And was pretty sure the person behind it seriously didn't want to meet her. "Quartermaster?" Severn said, with the barest hint of a sympathetic grimace. Kaylin said, "Can I break the window first?" "Won't help. He's probably responsible for having the glass replaced, and you're in enough trouble with him as is." It was true. She had barely managed to crawl up the ladder from thing-scraped-off-the-bottom-of-a-shoe-after-adog-fight in the unspoken ranks the Quartermaster gave the Hawks; she was now merely in the person-I-can't-see category, which was a distinct improvement, although it usually meant she was the last to get kitted out. The Quartermaster was officious enough, however, to make last and late two entirely different domains—if only, in Kaylin's case, by seconds. "It was just a stupid dress," she muttered. " One dress, and I'm in the doghouse." "I doubt it. You know how much he loves those dogs." "Yeah. A lot more than he likes the rest of us." "It was an expensive dress, Kaylin." "I didn't choose it!" "No. But you did give it back with a few bloodstains, a dozen knife tears, and about a pound less fabric." "It's not like it could have been used by anyone else—" "Not in that condition, no. And," he added, lifting a hand, "I'm not the Quartermaster, I didn't have to haggle with the Seamstresses Guild, and I don't really care." "Yeah, but his life doesn't depend on me, so he doesn't have to listen to me whine." Severn chuckled. "No. Your career depends on him, however. Good job, Kaylin." They walked down the long hall that led to Marcus's desk, which just happened to be situated so that it crossed almost any indoor path a Hawk could take in the line of duty. He liked to keep an eye on things. Or a claw across the throat, as the Leontine saying went. As the Hawks' sergeant, assignments came from him, and reports—which involved the paperwork he so hated—went to him. Caitlin, his assistant, and for all purposes, his second in command, was the one who would actually read the submissions, and she wisely chose to pass on only those that she felt were important. The rest, she fudged. And since the Festival season was, as of two days past, officially over, most of those reports involved a lot of cleanup, a lot of official fines—which helped the coffers of the Halls of Law immensely—and a lot of petty bickering, which would be referred to the unofficial courts in the various racial enclaves for mediation. Ceding that bickering to the racial courts, rather than the Imperial Courts, took more paperwork. But the Emperor was short on time and very, very short on patience, so only cases of real import—or those that involved the Elantran nobility—ever went to him directly. Given that he was Immortal, being a dragon and all, this struck Kaylin as unfair. After all, he had forever. "Lord Kaylin," Marcus said, as they approached his desk. The title, granted her by the Lord of the Barrani High Court, caused a round of snickers and an unfortunate echo in the office that set Kaylin's teeth on edge. The deep sarcasm that only a Leontine throat could produce didn't help much. "So good of you to join us." She snapped him a salute—which, given his rank didn't demand it, was only meant to annoy—and stood at attention in front of his desk. Severn's short sigh, she ignored; he offered Marcus neither of these gestures. "There's been a slight change in your beat today." The official roster changed at the blink of an eye. A Leontine eye, with its golden iris. "You're to go to Elani Street," he told them. "What, mage central?" "Or Charlatan central, if you prefer," Marcus snapped back. Elani Street was both. There was the real stuff, if you weren't naive and you knew what to look for, and then there was love potion number nine, and tell your fortune, and meet the right mate, all of which booths—usually with much finer names—saw a steady stream of traffic, day in and day out. Kaylin was always torn between contempt for the people who had such blind dreams and contempt for the people who could exploit them so callously. Elani Street was not her favorite street, mostly because she couldn't decide which of the two she wanted to strangle more. She flipped an invisible coin. It landed, after a moment in the mental ether, on the side of people who made money, rather than people who lost it. "Who's fleecing people this time?" Kaylin muttered. "It's only two days past Festival—you'd think people would be tired enough to give it a rest. Or," she added darkly, "in jail." "Many are both," Marcus replied, and something in his tone made her give up her sullen and almost perfect stance to lean slightly into the desk. Slightly was safe; he still hadn't cleared half the paperwork the Festival produced annually, and knocking any of the less than meticulous piles over was—well, the furrows in the desk didn't get there by magic. "What's happened?" "There's been a disturbance," he replied. "I believe you know the shop. Evanton's. You may have given him some business over the years." She knew the shop; she had had her knives enchanted there so that they left their sheaths without a sound. Teela had been the Hawk who had both introduced her to Evanton and also made clear to Evanton that anything he offered for money had better damn well work. Given that Teela was one of a dozen or so Barrani—also all Hawks—who had made their pledge of allegiance to the Imperial Halls of Law, her word tended to carry weight. After all, she was, like the dragon Emperor and the rest of her kind, immortal—and the Barrani loved nothing better than a grudge, at least judging by the way they held on to the damn things so tightly. Startlingly beautiful to the eye, they were cold as crackling ice to the ear, and their tall, slender bodies radiated that I-can-killyou-before-you-can-blink confidence that was, in fact, no act. Evanton, to his credit, had been neither offended nor frightened. In fact, his first words had been, "Yes, yes, I know the drill, Officer." And his second: "You're on the young side for a Hawk. So take my advice, for what it's worth. You should pay more attention to the company you keep. People will judge you by it, mark my words." He generally had a lot of words he wanted marked. Which had caused Teela to grimace. And Tain, her beat partner, to laugh. As for the enchantment, he'd approved of it. "Most people who come here want something to make them look prettier," he'd said, with obvious contempt. "Or younger. Or smarter. This, this is practical." She had never aske... Read more

Features & Highlights

  • Still avoiding magic whenever possible,Corporal Kaylin Neya relished investigatinga regular theft once again. Until she found outthe mysterious box was taken from Elani Street,where the mages and charlatans mingled, andit was sometimes hard to tell the differencebetween the two. But she was hoping thismight be a mundane case——when in a back room Kaylin saw alost-looking girl in a reflective pool…whocalled out Kaylin's name.Shaken, Kaylin tried to stay focused onthe case at hand. But since the stolen itemwas ancient, without a keyhole, and heldtremendous darkness inside, Kaylin knewunknown forces were again playing withher destiny—and her life….

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Almost ready to get off of this crazy thing...

I bought the first of this series used, since I tried reading Ms. Sagara's stuff back when she was going by Michelle West and had found her Hunter books more than a little flat. Surprisingly I liked Cast in Shadow, always willing to give a writer a second chance, okay not always but most of the time. I bought Cast in Courtlight new and enjoyed that one even more; I had a feeling that Kaylin would finally start pulling her head out of whatever orifice it seemed perpetually shoved into. At least I hoped that was what was going to happen.

So I bought Cast in Secret also new. Oy, look if the main character is so important to everyone then someone feed the woman more than one meal a day, either stop docking her meager pay or put her up in a decent place with some poor soul to look after her and her pitiful belongings.

Walking around saying that you won't learn because your teachers are to dense to teach you is stupid. Likewise the supporting characters in this series have got to stop being so cryptic and `I know what is going on but even though you should know I am not going to tell you' kind of arrogant.

All said, I like the supporting cast a heck of a lot more than I do Kaylin which is a shame since I am all for giving women power and the will to use it. This woman/child character of Ms. Sagara is beginning to wear thin on me. I will more than likely buy the next book, probably used. If things do not improve then I'm going to call it quits. I tried I really really tried, its just a shame that the characters I care about are you going to get thrown out with the one who should be so much more and still isn't.

If I was cryptic I'm sorry I don't like to give out spoilers, but this series is just driving me crazy!!!
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Grow up!

I loved book one and book two in this series. I had high expectations for the third book in this trilogy. Unfortunately, it's not a trilogy, it's a quintet (to quote the author's web site these are "5 linked books - not a pentalogy," although how five books all based around the life and development of one character are not a pentalogy I do not know) and thus this is not the final book in the series, but the middle book. So it suffers the dreaded "middle book syndrome": the characters do not really develop, the plot is not much advanced, and not much happens in any substantive way. (It also the shortest of the books so far.)

Like some of the other reviewers, I really wanted to give the main character a good shake. Behavior that was quirky in the first book, and idiosyncratic in the second, merely came off as bratty in the third. Yes, we know that she failed almost all her courses the first time round, but by now since we all know she is the saviour of the world (in every book) and will eventually go to the Imperial court, her superiors should have taken her off the streets, put her back in the classroom and force fed her some of the knowledge that every one else seems to have except her. The plot device of mysterious markings and power that "no one understands" and yet everyone knows more about than her is wearing thin. People who supposedly don't know much more about the situation than she does, keep giving her tests that presuppose a great deal of knowledge on their part, and then patting her on the head when she passes them. Infuriating!

Don't get me wrong, I actually like Kaylin quite a lot, but I do think that the experiences she had in the last book should have matured her slightly in terms of the way she relates to others.
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Interesting start in this series but the heroine's development seems to have stalled

I read the first book in this series and was interested enough to find and read the second, which I thought was better. So I had high hopes for this book, the third in the series. Well, it wasn't terrible, and the fascinating world-building and many intriguing secondary characters have continued, but there is a central problem: I don't like the heroine. Kaylin is charmlessly bratty, NEVER learns to think twice before speaking, shows no signs of maturity. She actively fights learning anything and sticks to her unloveable, and by this time very boring faults. Yet the heads of several races now accord her great respect, even calling her "Lord," as in nobility because she has managed to blunder through various save-the-world situations despite being an endlessly annoying and ignorant young fool. So OK, if she's so important now to everyone and her safety is so vital to everyone's interests, why is she still living in an unprotected hovel without enough food or sleep or clothing or even personal hygiene? The characters just love her to pieces, but it's not at all clear why. She is thoroughly unlikeable, which makes it a chore to spend so much time hearing about all her feeeeeelings in the narration. The author seems to think that since the heroine likes children, that makes all her glaring and persistent faults forgiveable. Wrong.

I like Severn, her partner from her oh-so-horrible background in the slums (about which I am thoroughly sick of hearing the same stories repeated about how much they suffered), but he is put in the emotional distance somehow in this book even though he is present in many scenes. So is Nightshade, the fascinating outcaste Barrani (like a darkish elf) who clearly desires the heroine (who knows why, I don't). Both characters have been made into extreme strong-silent-types, to the point that it's getting laughable. There is also far too much repetition in plot developments, or rather in their ad hoc "feel." The heroine plunges into a new scene, and it's like a session of Dungeons and Dragons. Ooooh, this door, what's behind it? Now what will she find through THAT door? Everybody just looooves the heroine when she manages to somehow blunder through whatever impossible challenges she faces and saves the world, or at least the race or the city yet again. And despite all this, she is still at the lowest grade of the police force she works in (the Hawks), is practically starving for lack of money, and is regularly left dangerously unprotected despite her seeming importance and vulnerability.

Very frustrating, because there is much to enjoy (other than the heroine) in this series; that's why I'm giving it the three stars. But I'm just about fed up with the whole thing. The heroine is beyond annoying and the series seems to have stalled out in terms of character development and achievement of emotional maturity. I wonder if the author has frozen her relationships with Nightshade and Severn because she's trying to stretch this into as many books as possible. If so, it's backfiring, as far as I'm concerned. I'll watch for the next one and get it from the library. If it's more of the same, then that's it for me.
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The Chronicles of Elantra

I have enjoyed the previous two books in this series and this one is just as good. Each book reveals abit more about Kaylin Neya and her place in this world. I love the world and it's inhabitants and this novel tells us of a different species on this world. The Barrani, the Dragons, Hawks and the rest are joined by the Tha'alani mysterious beings with great mental abilities.

Kaylin is an orphan raised on the streets by Severn Handred and later joins the Hawks. She is also connected to Nightshade, a exiled Barrani Sorceror. She hates magic but somehow always seems to fall into it. Her abilites make her a blessing to the mid-wives and she is called on many time to help with births. She wears a magic braclet from the Dragon Emperor which inhibits her magic use. Her body is covered with glyphs and she has various and unknown magic abilities.

Severn Handred saved Kaylin from the streets and the ferals when she was young. He has always looked out for her even when she did not know he was there. Now he is her partner in the Hawks and always there to help her face the unknown.

This time Kaylin and Severn are facing a great unknown that threatens to demolish their world or at least the city and country they occupy. The world of magic is based on the elementals of fire, water, earth and air. Now Kaylin must match powers with an evil sorceror from the Arcanium. A sorceror who can control the elements and maybe the elementals. Kaylin never one to look before she leaps finds herself in very deep water.

I loved this book and can't wait for the next one. Michelle Sagara has a wonderful immagination and only she knows where we will end up next. Do not miss this one.
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Complex and intriguing as always...

The Cast series is not an easy series to read. The world and themes are extremely complex, as are the characters who populate it. Each book requires careful reading (skimming or a fast read isn't really possible, at least not for me) and a lot of thought about what's happening at any given time. Of course, some things are more straightforward than others. I find that I have to reread each book to catch things that I either missed or didn't understand the first time, but I think the endeavor is worthwhile for the most part, although much continues to puzzle me.

This third entry, [[ASIN:0373802803 Cast In Secret (The Cast Series, Book 3)]], doesn't have as much "action" per se as the previous two books ([[ASIN:0373802544 Cast In Shadow (The Cast Series, Book 1)]], [[ASIN:0373802447 Cast In Courtlight (The Cast Series, Book 2)]]), but it continues to expand on the relationships among the major characters, chiefly Kaylin and Severn, Kaylin and Nightshade, and Kaylin and the dragons. The Barrani do not play a prominent role, but their presence is keenly felt.

We learn some more details about the struggle that was caused by Kaylin's arrival as a young child in the Courts of Law between those who argued for her survival and those who felt she was too dangerous to live. We see some of the workings of the dragon court, and learn much about the Tha'alani as well as the Oracles, each intricately and deftly woven into a fascinating whole.

I may be wrong, but I think the next book will likely deal with both the interaction between Kaylin and Nightshade and Kaylin's appearance in a more formal fashion at the dragon court. I can't wait!
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Almost Perfect

I read the first two books and became instantly hooked, I waited anxiously for almost a year for this third in the series. I had high hopes and was very excited when I purchased my copy. I wont go much into the actual plot since others have done a good job. I thought that the story was well written with a developed plot. I love that Kaylin is always growing not only in power, but in understanding others. It was also very interesting to get a good look into the Thaa'lani world.

My number one critique of this book is that when the last book ended it, I was left with the impression that in the next book, big things would happen between Nightshade and Kaylin. There was no growth in the relationship or any change whatsoever, infact he made maybe 2-3 cameo appearances in the story. It wasn't that he was exactly essential to the plot, but he is just too much a part of Kaylin to be so far behind the scenes. Although I love Severn, I find Lord Nightshade to be the most interesting character in the whole thing. I hope the author puts him firmly back into the limelight in the next go. Also I would like more on Kaylin's interraction with the Barrani court now that she is a lord.

That aside I fully enjoyed the reading and finished it in a day.
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Excellent series...

Great read, I truly enjoyed this 3rd installment of her exciting romantic fantasy.

My only quibble is with how little transition is in this book.

I can't lend Cast in Secret to any friends who aren't willing to first read the first two excellent books in this series. A little added background introducing the characters and previous plots could have made this a strong stand alone novel. When I buy a book -- I want a beginning and an end.

Looking fwd to reading book 4!
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ok

I have to agree with some of the posters here, the constant inner dialogue of how dirty I am and I am hungry and I am tired and I faint and fall down all the time,I am wanted by the rich and powerful yet I live in a pig sty, don't bath and don't eat, and am constantly nauseous. I guess it is some sort of counter to having all this power. But it drags on way toooo much and it repeated way tooooo often, as it is in the first two books. You have to wade through a lot of quagmire to get the ideas of what is happening. Maybe she gets paid by the word? Other wise a good set of books as far as ideas go, just needs a lot of editing.
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Not as good as the other two

I loved the previous two books in this series but this one was a little dissappointing. We did not learn anything more about about Nighshade who is my favorite character. I want more focus on the relationships between Kaylin and Severen and Nightshade. We also need more secrets revealed about the markings on Kaylin's body. This story did not further the overall plot. I hope the next book has more on the Kaylin-Nightshade-Severn triangle and less on extraneous adventures. I would also like to see Kaylin choose either Severn or Nightshade and commit either emotionally or physically to one of them. I hope we do not have an endless wait for the next in the series. The wait between books in these fantasy series is frustrating.
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Ugh.....

Get an editor already. Or at least take a course in punctuation and grammar. I like the fact that you seem to be doing this on your own, however it makes reading these books a major headache. Could Kaylin possibly not be so repetitive and annoying? This author makes sure you know the main characters not eaten, for whatever reason, OFTEN. I mean she is food obsessed or something.... Not to mention the being late thing. What the heck is up with that anyway? These books have the potential to be outstanding if she would take a little of the profits and hire a freaking editor. Overall, this book is an okay read however prepare to notice all of the mistakes and get annoyed with the main character. Kaylin is a contradiction. The only thing left to say is, UGH. UGGGGH. Just stop writing if you wont spring for a darn editor PLEASE.
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