Dragon's Bait
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Dragon's Bait

Paperback – April 1, 2003

Price
$13.36
Format
Paperback
Pages
208
Publisher
Clarion Books
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0152166632
Dimensions
5 x 0.53 x 8 inches
Weight
7.2 ounces

Description

"Wicked wit and charm . . . as well as a gutsy heroine and a sexy dragon."-- Booklist "Alys herself is a worthy heroine, with a capricious gift for irony. A thoughtful mainstream fantasy."-- Publishers Weekly "[A] dark, bittersweet romance."-- Kirkus Reviews — Vivian Vande Velde has written many books for teen and middle grade readers, including Heir Apparent , User Unfriendly , All Hallow's Eve: 13 Stories , Three Good Deeds , Now You See It ..., and the Edgar Award–winning Never Trust a Dead Man . She lives in Rochester, New York. Visit her website at www.vivianvandevelde.com. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Chapter 1The day Alys was accused of being a witch started out like any other. She woke to the gray light of dawn and to the sound of her father coughing. Did he sound any better than he had the morning before? Yes, she told herself-just a little bit, but definitely better. And though she'd thought that every morning since late winter when he'd been so sick she'd been afraid he'd die, and though here it was with the wheat already harvested and the leaves beginning to turn, and he still too frail to run the tin shop by himself-that did nothing to lessen her conviction. He definitely sounded better. Of course, it wasn't normal for a girl to help in her father's business. A man without sons was expected to take in apprentices, not teach his trade to a fifteen-year-old daughter. But her father had had no need for an apprentice before he got sick, and now there was nothing extra with which to afford one. Without the goat cheese that Vleeter and his wife had given them and the bread that the widow Margaret had periodically left at their doorstep, they might well have starved during those long, long days when he'd been too sick to work at all. So now he was teaching her how to draw out tin into wire, how to pour it to fashion buttons, how to cut and join. She was slow, just learning, and he was slow, having to rest frequently. Between the two of them they could craft just barely enough tin to keep themselves alive. Until the day Alys was accused of being a witch. It started in the late afternoon, when a man she didn't know came into the shop. Saint-Toby's-by-the-Mountain was small enough that everybody knew everybody, so it wasn't often that she saw a stranger. She put down the shears with which she'd been cutting a sheet of tin and said, because her father had gone into the house to lie down, "Yes? May I help you?" It wasn't fair to judge someone by the way he looked, she knew, but there was something decidedly unpleasant about this man, about the way he didn't seem to fit together properly. The toothy smile didn't go with the cold eyes; the head, shaved in the manner of a man of the Church, didn't go with the long, elegant, beringed fingers; the clothes were much too fine for Saint Toby's-even for someone simply passing through Saint Toby's. "You are Alys, the tinsmith's daughter?" the man asked, though his gaze was roving all over the shop and he must see who she was even if-she could tell-he disapproved. Beyond him, she saw a flitter of movement by the door and recognized their neighbor, the wheelwright Gower. Now what was he doing? His shop had been closed all day, which was unusual, Gower being an ambitious man. He was so ambitious he had even made offers to buy their land so he could expand his own shop. His wife, Una, and their daughter, Etta, had refused to talk to Alys ever since her father had refused to sell. Leave it to Gower to show up at the first sign of trouble. "I'm Alys," she said. "I am Inquisitor Atherton of Griswold," the stranger said, naming the town on the other side of the mountain. Alys's attention leaped back from Gower, but before she could say anything, he continued, "You have been accused of witchcraft, and it is my duty to prove that." The already insincere smile broadened. "Or disprove it, if the evidence so warrants." "Witchcraft?" Alys had no idea what to say. "Who...I mean what...I mean..." "You will come with me," the Inquisitor told her. Alys knew she wasn't a witch and reasoned that she would therefore be proven innocent. Still, fear began to overcome confusion as Inquisitor Atherton took firm hold of her arm. Her voice shook. "But my father's aslee-" The Inquisitor's fingers dug into her arm as he repeated, "You will come with me." That was when she knew, deep in her heart-though she wouldn't admit it-that he would never find her innocent, no matter what. "Father!" she cried. The Inquisitor pulled her out into the street. People were gathering to see what the stranger was up to. But out of all those faces, Inquisitor Atherton picked Gower. "Go fetch the father." "Gower," Alys said, finally realizing. And lest she have any lingering doubts, the Inquisitor was pulling her next door, to the storeroom behind the wheelwright's shop. "This will be our court," the Inquisitor said. "Gather those who would testify." The room filled quickly. "What'd she do?" she heard several of the children ask. But the parents only told them "Hush," and looked at Alys with fear, while the whispered word "witch" played over the crowd so that she could never tell who had spoken it. She had known these people all her fifteen years. Surely they couldn't be afraid of her? But standing there among wheel rims and spokes of various sizes, with Inquisitor Atherton's grip bruising her arm, she couldn't be sure. Her father came rushing in. Alys's heart sank, for she was alarmed by how pale he was. But Atherton wouldn't let her go and he wouldn't let her father approach. "Stand there," the Inquisitor commanded her father. "Let it begin." Let what begin? Alys wanted to ask, but she only had time to draw breath. "I saw her"-Una's loud voice cut through the murmuring of the crowd and everyone turned to face her-"in the street in front of Goodwife Margaret's cottage. I saw her look around to see if anybody was watching, but she didn't see me because I was bending over in my garden. She made a sign, and then she spat on the ground, and the next day Margaret's goat went dry and it's been dry ever since." "I never-," Alys started. "Be silent!" the Inquisitor warned. "I will not," Alys protested. "What she's just said simply isn't true." She took a step toward Una, and Una threw her arms up in an exaggerated gesture as though to protect herself. "Don't let her make the Sign against me!" Una cried, hiding her face. "That's the most ridiculous-" Before Alys could finish, Atherton grabbed her by the arm and dragged her away from Una. "We need a rope to bind her," he said. "And keep the father back." "Don't hurt him!" Alys cried, seeing Gower shove her father, who'd been struggling to get to her. Atherton twisted her arms behind her back, and she felt rope being wrapped around her wrists. Once she was tied, Atherton spun her around to face him. "Another attempt to harm the witnesses will be dealt with severely." "But I didn't, and my father's sick, and-" He put his finger close to her face. "Speak out of turn again, and that will be dealt with severely." Alys jerked away from his finger but didn't dare answer. She looked at her father and tried to tell him with her expression not to worry, but she was too worried herself to be convincing. It was Margaret who stepped forward, though she was almost half Atherton's height and probably twice his age. "Well, if she can't talk, I will," Margaret said. "What Una said is total nonsense." "Has your goat gone dry?" the Inquisitor asked. "Yes, but-" "And it was a good milker before?" "Yes, but-" "Next!" "I seen her," Gower said before Margaret could protest again. Everyone turned to look at him. "I seen her this past Midsummer's Eve. I just come back from fixing Barlow's cart wheel. They had me to supper and I stayed late." He turned to Farmer Barlow. "You remember?" Barlow was watching the Inquisitor and looking nervous about being involved. "I remember you coming." "The moon had risen," Gower continued, "and I seen her plain as day in the meadow beyond Barlow's pasture. What's she doing there? I said to myself. She had her arms out like this and she was just turning round and round, like she was dancing real slow. I stood a moment, just wondering what she was doing. And then..." "Then?" the Inquisitor said. "She took her clothes off." Horrified, Alys protested, "I never-" The Inquisitor raised his hand as though to slap her. "Gag her," he commanded. "No, wait," Alys gasped. "Please. I promise to be quiet." Atherton changed his upraised hand to a gesture of warning. He turned back to Gower. "Then what?" "She danced faster and faster, in a frenzy. A lewd, devilish dance. And then I could hear the sound of pipes playing high and sweet almost beyond hearing. Fairy music, I reckoned. Not something a man who believes in the good word of God should listen to. Nor see, neither." Atherton turned to Farmer Barlow. "And you, have you heard or seen something a man who believes in the good word of God shouldn't?" Barlow's gaze shifted nervously from Atherton to Gower to Alys, back to Atherton, as though searching for the safest answer. "I ain't seen nothing," he said, licking his lips. "But then, that meadow's to the back of the house." "I've seen something," Etta said, "something half the people in Saint Toby's saw and heard." "And what's that, my daughter?" the Inquisitor said, sweet and gentle. "She went to the carpenter's shop, to have a stool made. After it was done, she and apprentice Radley had a big argument about the price. We all heard her. 'That's too much,' she said. 'I could make a better one than that,' she said, 'in fact from now on I will.' Several of us were gathered around the door to see. She pushed past me on the way out, but then I saw her turn back. And the moment she did, the moment she did, Radley's chisel slipped and he gouged his hand something terrible so that he was hardly able to work for almost half the rest of the month." "Is Radley, the carpenter's apprentice, here?" Atherton asked. "Step forward and tell us: Is this how it happened?" Radley shuffled his feet and wouldn't look up, neither at Atherton nor at Alys. Tilden, the master carpenter, stood silent, next to him. "It's true," Radley mumbled. "Who witnessed this argument and the aftermath?" Atherton demanded. Hands raised, some reluctantly, some eagerly. "What else?" Atherton a... Read more

Features & Highlights

  • Fifteen-year-old Alys is not a witch. But that doesn't matter—the villagers think she is and have staked her out on a hillside as a sacrifice to the local dragon. It's late, it's cold, and it's raining, and Alys can think of only one thing—revenge. But first she's got to escape, and even if she does, how can one girl possibly take on an entire town alone? Then the dragon arrives—a dragon that could quite possibly be the perfect ally. . . .

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A fabulous little book!

This was a great book: a nice, easy-to-read page turner that had me hooked from start to finish.

I had no problems in believing any of the characters or settings. In fact, while I read this story, I was totally there! It was so compelling. Vivian Vande Velde is obviously an intelligent, accomplished author, and I look forward to reading more of her books.

The recommended reading age for this book--12 and up--was spot on, but I'd recommend it not just to teens, but to any adults who like a good fantasy read too. I mean, I'm 33 and I thought it was brilliant!
26 people found this helpful
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Hook! Line! Sinker! "Bait" had me hooked!!

Okay, so the title of this review is corny. But the book is wonderful; another of Vande Velde's recent publishings which, in my opinion, ever topple the last one in excellence.
In this book, fifteen year old Alys is learning how to fend for herself; her frail father is barely recovering from the winter's sickness while she must learn his tin-making trade to keep them both alive.
All this comes crashing down upon her ears when she is accused of witchcraft (of which she is innocent) by her scheming neighbors, plotting to take her father's land from her. The clever inquistor from a neighboring village incriminates her before her friends can step in. Soon, Alys finds herself as "Dragon's Bait," left as food for a fearsome dragon that ravages the nearby countryside.
But Alys is in for a suprise. The dragon is capable of many transformations; including that of a human. Instead of adding her to his menu, he spares her life, and inevitably becomes her aly, if not her friend.
Alys is infuriated by the dragon (who speaks with her in his human form; that of a handsome seventeen year old youth) who seems to have no use for her--except that he is willing to help her get her revenge. And as she soon learns, revenge is something that the dragon, Selendrile, is very good at.
But is revenge what Alys really wants? A witty funny novel about revenge and its cost and spoils.
WAIT! DON'T STOP NOW! There is something very important that I would like to tell you about this book. I fear that I have doomed it into being serious; THIS BOOK IS FUNNY! Well, it has dark under-tones, but it is witty, clever, and fast-paced fantasy.
Vande Velde demonstrates her skilled capacity for fantasy in this novel. Her strong heroine and handsome dragon companion make an endearing cast for her novel. THE PROBLEM! This book is like a small chocolate; you savor it for as long as you can, yet you still find yourself craving for more afterward.
So what do you think? Even if you hated everything I had to say, I would say, give it a try! Even the anti-fantasy reader will enjoy this morsel of a novel! If you like Vande Velde, I would reccomend her other books, like Heir Apparent (I wrote a review for that also--check it out!)
So...happy reading!
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Short and Sweet

I've read a few short YA books lately, most of which have been good. This one is the shortest of any of them, and it is also good, but lacks the depth that the other books have. The dragon character doesn't have much of a personality at all, and the girl accused of being a witch is driven only by revenge. I was waiting for the part where the girl realized that revenge doesn't make you feel any better, but I don't think she really got to that point, not truly. I still don't understand why the dragon is drawn to the girl, nor why he decides to help her with her revenge. Since he barely talks and has no feelings, I guess we will never know. Still, the book is enjoyable. It is so short that I had no problem reading it quickly, I finished it and thought it was okay. Nothing special about it at all that would warrant any rating above a three. There is no complexity, no excitement, just go from here to there, plot a bit of revenge, and move on. I know that YA can be deeper and better than this, but oh well. Dragon's Bait is an enjoyable little escape from reality, and to some it may be fun to see a girl reek havoc on her tormentors. To me it just felt shallow.
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but the book wasn't as fun as I remember

Bought it to go back in time, but the book wasn't as fun as I remember. lol May be too old for it now. Doesn't age as well as Harry Potter from a kid to adult.
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Great Story for Young Adults (and Everyone Else)

The story was fast-paced, and the moral of the dangers of seeking revenge was very well illustrated. Also well portrayed was greed and how falsehoods can spread so easily among people--that some people will believe, or allow themselves to be manipulated into believing, just about anything.

The shapeshifting dragon was handled nicely--how Selendrile maintains a stoic demeanor while in Human-form. The transformation that Selendrile makes (and Alys, for that matter) by the end character-wise is clear and believable. I really enjoyed the book.
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Is that it?

The characters were dull and didn't have much of a personality. The dialogue felt awkward---I hoped it was intended that way, but it pretty much continues throughout the entire story so I am forced to conclude it wasn't an intentional thing. I could not believe that Alyss could fall in love with the dragon, nor that she actually was in love with him (was she? I certainly couldn't tell... so she tries to save him from dying, but that doesn't mean she loves him!) The plot itself was unconvincing --- I didn't believe Alyss would go so far to get revenge on people. It made her seem dumb, mean, selfish and thoughtless.

Was there supposed to be a mortal to this story? I felt like there was supposed to be one, but it didn't work on me because I really couldn't sympathize with the characters at all. I really, really disliked the dragon.

The book was also pretty short too---didn't really feel like I had very good value for money, even though I paid just under $4 for it used from Amazon Marketplace. Very forgettable. Utterly no atmosphere, plot, chemistry or tension.
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Alys & Selendrile

I first read this book when I was 12. Years later, the characters and plot are still very alive in my mind. This is something to mention, due to my attention span (not really what you'd associate with a temperament of endurance).

I like books that are fast-paced, and that do not bog the reader down with too many unnecessary details. The way the romance played out in this book was done with much skill and taste. The author engages readers of all ages, which is both admirable and inspiring.

I found myself going back to Dragon's Bait, and many other books by Vivian Vande Velde, throughout my teenage years. That hasn't really changed now that I'm older. Her books lack yawn-worthy pretentious prose which I find all too abundant in many other books for Young Adults, which is of course just in my opinion, but also why I give this delightful book five stars.

--Jess C Scott, Author of EyeLeash: A Blog Novel
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I love this book!

I read this a long time ago and I'm really glad to find it again. The Dragon character Selendrile has stuck with me for years, I can't wait to read it again.
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Witty and charming.

Dragon's Bait is wonderfully hilarious. I only picked this book up because I had some gift cards for the book store. I expected that I'd read it once, and it would simply sit on my bookshelf until the end of the world. It's a good thing I like Vivian Vande Velde and picked this up, because it is fantastic! Yes, it's short, but the story itself more than makes up for it.

Alys is quick on her feet, funny, and notices the irony in her prediciments. Selendrile is intense, and you can't help but find yourself attracted to his character. The relationship between Alys and Selendrile is incredibly amusing to say the least. Each keeps the other on their toes.

The storyline is fast paced, but well thought out. Everything is clearly thought out, and displayed in a way that draws you into the story.

The moment I finished reading Dragon's Bait, I read it again. When I lent it out to a friend, she did the same. I recommend Dragon's Bait to anyone who appreciates humor, fantasy, or any of Vivian Vande Velde's other books. You won't be disappointed.
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Do not buy this paperback version!

I have always love Dragon's Bait. I have tried to acquire a decent hardcover edition with no success.. so I have settled with this paperback version and I suspect what I have received is a poor quality photocopy of the actual book. Look at how blurry the letters are on the cover. Inside is a bit better, but it still lacks that particular crispness printed editions have - it feels just like photocopies local library acquire for out-of-print editions. I don't live in the States so by the time I have received the package from the forwarder it was too late to return it.. off to find a decent used hardcover edition again...:(
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