If Crows Know Best (Mage of Merced)
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If Crows Know Best (Mage of Merced)

Paperback – November 11, 2014

Price
$13.80
Format
Paperback
Pages
322
Publisher
Moon Road Press
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0990968108
Dimensions
6 x 0.81 x 9 inches
Weight
1.04 pounds

Description

KIRKUS REVIEW A boy becomes embroiled in politics and magic when his country is conquered in this fantastical tale of war and survival, reminiscent of the works of Raymond Feist.Judian is on the verge of adulthood when his smitten brother Wils marries Annora, a beautiful woman who has a mystical knack with animals. But instead of the couple settling into their new lives, Wils must accompany his father to where soldiers are gathering to fend off an invasion. Da entrusts Judian with a mission: if he and Wils don't return quickly, Judian must take Annora and his young sister Morie up to the caves in the mountains near their home, where they will be safe. Judian embarks on his quest of survival with all the good sense of a farm boy used to managing resources, but he's surprised to find himself gaining animal allies. First crediting the appearance of a huge black dog they call Weiser and a trio of helpful crows to Annora, Judian soon discovers it's his own magic that called them. When Judian and his companions realize that the northwest passage through their mountains, which should be sealed with snow, has been held open by foreign sorcerers to allow troops to invade, they know they have to find a way to get the news to Da and Wils. Judian, an appealing narrator, brooks little nonsense--though some of what he considers ludicrous is a mark of his immaturity. He shows at times overconfidence, but the subtle arrogance of his narration is countered by his admissions of wishing his father would return and fix everything. By far the best developed of the characters, Judian is surrounded by strong women he doesn't always understand but whom he respects, especially as teachers of magic. This debut YA novel's fantasy world and magic system, filtered through a capable child's eyes, are well-designed, with enough clues into the adult power structure to give the impression of complexity beyond what is described. This YA series starter should be a sure hit with adults who favor traditional quest fantasy and younger readers who love the political aspects of Sherwood Smith's novels. Author Aimee L. Gross grew up in the Midwest, where stories captivated her from the instant she learned to read. She often wishes for a time machine to go back and read some of her favorite books again for another "first" time. Since no time machine exists yet, she tries to write the kind of books that others will love so much they will wish for a time machine, too.

Features & Highlights

  • What young boy believes he can protect his family from an invading army? One who is learning magic as fast as he can... In the span of one day, Judian goes from the burden of farm chores to a crushing responsibility for the lives of his family. With his father and brother gone to war, he must keep the others safe and evade the enemy. If only he can trust the guides which appear, seemingly unbidden, he may succeed. Yet, he has so much to learn, and so little time. He struggles to keep to the fringes of the conflict, but the magic he discovers draws him deeper, toward the truth of the war. Mages from a distant land are driving the enemy forces. To what end? Follow Judian as he comes of age in a world of portents and spellcasting. Though life as a farm boy left him longing for more adventure, he must be careful with his wishes during the fateful year he becomes a man.

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I found myself sucked in from the first page

Description: Judian may only be a teanager, but when his father and older brother go off to war he must take on a man’s responsibility—take care of the farm and his family. The distant farmstead finds itself in the center of the war zone and Judian must learn to master the powers budding within him if he’s going to survive.

Overall assessment: I found myself sucked in from the first page. I loved this book.

World-building: The familiar medieval based landscape of fantasy allowed the author to jump into the story and build the rest of the world over time. Ms. Gross did a fantastic job letting the reader know what they needed without paragraphs of explanation. I enjoyed the magic connection with animals—yes, I have a thing for animals. I would have enjoyed more details about how magic worked but that’s because I am a geek. Those details weren’t required for the story nor could they have been added without slowing the pace.

Characters: Judian delighted me as a protagonist. He was resourceful, dedicated, and made smart decisions (I am not a fan of having the protagonist do stupid stuff just to keep a book exciting). I had a hard time keeping in mind he was a male, though. It’s challenging for a female author to write a male POV character and keep it real. Men have the same problem writing women. Overall, Ms. Gross did a really good job, it was just the first couple of pages that took left me confused. Since it was written first person POV, it might have been easier on me if Judian’s gender were introduced right away. Since I didn’t have any problems after the first chapter, it could just be I was slow on the uptake. The supporting characters each had strong personalities and it was easy to keep them straight.

Plot and pacing: I found this to be a page turner. I loved the build-up and the way the plot worked. I get burnt out with coming of age tells but it worked great within the plot. The political background offered a solid element to the plot without taking it over. I thought a few of the problems were resolved too easily but that did not detract from my enjoyment of the story.

Editing: Solid. There are some typos and grammar errors but not many. Within the (admittedly poor) current standards for the publishing industry.

Final thoughts: I recommend this for any reader of fantasy.
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Can't wait for the sequel!

This was a great read -- some cross between Little House on the Prairie and Hilari Bell's Farsala trilogy.
The plotting is meticulous and clever. It has a cast of amazing characters. I read it in a day! The world building is rich and detailed, but doesn't slow down the pacing at all.
I would highly recommend this book and can't wait for the sequel.
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Four Stars

Would love to see what is next! Waiting for other volumes to come out.