Secret Desires of a Gentleman (The Girl-Bachelor Chronicles, 3)
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Secret Desires of a Gentleman (The Girl-Bachelor Chronicles, 3)

Mass Market Paperback – September 30, 2008

Price
$8.99
Publisher
Avon
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ISBN-13
978-0061456824
Dimensions
4.19 x 0.96 x 6.75 inches
Weight
1 pounds

Description

Laura Lee Guhrke spent seven years in advertising, had a successful catering business, and managed a construction company before she decided writing novels was more fun.xa0 A New York Times and USA Today bestselling author, Laura has penned over twenty-five historical romances. Her books have received many award nominations, and she is a two-time recipient of romance fiction’s highest honor: the Romance Writers of America RITA Award. She lives in the Northwest with her husband and two diva cats. Laura loves hearing from readers, and you can contact her via her website: www.lauraleeguhrke.com. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Secret Desires of a Gentleman By Laura Lee Guhrke HarperCollins Publishers, Inc. Copyright © 2008 Laura Lee GuhrkeAll right reserved. ISBN: 9780061456824 Chapter One If there be no bread, let them eat cake.Anonymous London, 1895 This couldn't be right. Maria Martingale came to a halt at the intersection of Piccadilly and Half Moon Streets, staring doubtfully at the shop on the corner. It was in an ideal location, appeared to be in excellent condition, and the sign over the doorway declared the premises had formerly been a tea shop. It was perfect—so perfect in fact that Maria was sure there had to be some sort of mistake. She glanced down at the order to view in her hands, then back up at the engraved brass kick plate of the door to verify the address: 88 Piccadilly. No mistake. She was in the right place. Just come into the market, the agent had told her as he'd given her the order to view. Just what she was looking for. Clean, he'd hastened to add, handing over the keys, and freshly painted, with a thoroughly modern kitchen. Maria had not received these assurances with much enthusiasm. For three months now, she'd been combing through the streets of London, looking for the right place for her pâtisserie , and though she'd had little success in her search, she had learned a great deal about property agents and their descriptions. A modern kitchen often meant nothing more than a closed range and a few gaslights, fresh paint covered a multitude of sins, and "clean" was a relative term. Even in the finest neighborhoods, she'd stepped on so many beetle-infested floors and inhaled the noxious odor of bad drains so often, she'd almost given up the whole venture in despair. But as she studied the building on this particular corner, Maria felt a spark of hope. The location was first rate. It had frontage on Piccadilly, was within the street's most popular shopping area, and the neighborhood surrounding it was prosperous. Wealthy, influential businessmen lived here with their ambitious, social-climbing wives, wives who would willingly pay to provide their busy cooks with the best in ready-made baked goods. And Maria intended to provide the best. What Fortnum & Mason was to the picnic hamper, Martingale's would be to the tea tray and the dessert plate. It was all due to Prudence, of course. If her best friend, Prudence Bosworth, hadn't inherited a fortune and married the Duke of St. Cyres, none of this would have been possible. Maria wouldn't have been able to leave her position as pâtissier to the great chef André Chauvin and strike out on her own. But Prudence had pots of money and had been happy to back her dearest friend in the venture of her dreams. Maria folded the order to view and put it in the pocket of her blue-and-white-striped skirt, then she walked a few steps down Half Moon Street. As she viewed the exterior of the shop, her hopes rose another notch. There were enormous plate-glass windows on both streets, and the entrance, set at an angle to the corner, boasted a door with glass panels. This design would provide plenty of opportunity for those walking past to be tempted by the delightful confections she would have on display. She could see from the window wells set in the concrete of the sidewalk that the kitchen was in the basement. Steps on Half Moon Street led down to it through a tradesmen's entrance door. Eager to see the interior of the shop, Maria hastened back to the corner, opened her handbag again, and extracted the key given to her by the property agent. She walked up the whitened front steps, unlocked the door, and went inside. The front room was large, with enough space for the display cases and tea tables necessary to a pâtisserie . The fresh paint extolled by the property agent, however, would have to be redone, for it was that peculiar shade known as yallery-greenery, quite fashionable nowadays but most unsuitable for a bakery. Maria scrutinized the floor and took several deep breaths. No bad drains, and not a blackbeetle to be seen. Perhaps this time the property agents had got it right. There was only one way to be sure. She tucked her handbag under her arm and crossed the room, the heels of her high button shoes tapping decisively on the black?and-white-tile floor. Upon opening the door to the back rooms of the shop, she found the arrangements typical of a thousand other London establishments. There was an office and storeroom, and one set of stairs led up to sleeping quarters while another led down to the kitchen and scullery. Maria knew she could hardly expect anything below stairs other than the damp, depressing hole that usually passed for a kitchen in London, but when she reached the bottom of the steps, she stopped in her tracks and stared into the most perfect kitchen she had ever seen. There were oak cupboards, two full walls of them, with shelves, drawers and bins of every imaginable shape and size. Iron pot racks hung from the heavy oak beams that crossed the ceiling. Above the cupboards, the windows she'd spied from the sidewalk above not only let in some natural light, but they also opened at the top for ventilation—something that would be most welcome in the heat of summer. Maria moved forward into the room, studying her surroundings in amazement. The concrete walls had been sheathed in a fresh coat of white plaster, and the linoleum floor beneath her feet was a soft, cheery yellow. To her right were four coal-fired ranges, each one fitted with burners, a boiler, and a tap. Above them hung a decorative hood of hammered copper. The back kitchen was equally modern. The scullery had two sinks, a dual water tap, and a long, tin drain board, and the larder was generous, with shelves to the ceiling. There was even an ice room for cold storage. Continues... Excerpted from Secret Desires of a Gentleman by Laura Lee Guhrke Copyright © 2008 by Laura Lee Guhrke. Excerpted by permission. All rights reserved. No part of this excerpt may be reproduced or reprinted without permission in writing from the publisher.Excerpts are provided by Dial-A-Book Inc. solely for the personal use of visitors to this web site.

Features & Highlights

  • Once Upon a Time . . .
  • Maria Martingale was going to elope. But Phillip Hawthorne, Marquess of Kayne, put a stop to those plans when he learned his younger brother intended to marry a cook's daughter. Now, twelve years later, Maria discovers that the man who holds her fate in his hands is none other than the haughty gentleman who sent her packing—and he's as handsome and arrogant as ever.
  • Happily Ever After?
  • Always the proper gentleman, Phillip will do anything to protect his family from scandal, and when Maria dares to move in right next door, he knows scandal will surely follow. She is as tempting as he remembered . . . and the more he sees her, the harder it is for Phillip to keep his own secret desire for her a secret . . .

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Secret Desires of a Gentleman is something of a Cinderella story in that the heroine, Maria Martingale, is a servant, and the hero, Phillip Hawthorne is the Marquess of Kayne. The only thing is the prince in this tale is decidedly uncooperative and adheres to social hierarchy in a most undemocratic fashion. He's a bit stuffy and strict, and practically everyone calls him a snob, but I thought it was realistic of him, in no way a huge character flaw. It was a nice concession to the historical, social circumstances of the book, and nothing that he should have to apologize for (though of course he does eventually have to see the light and recant.) The heroine was likeable, a spunky, fun type of character who is hell bent on setting up her own patisserie. She's independent, intelligent, hardworking, and never backs down from a fight. She also has a career, and her professionalism is admirable and impressive. But she also has a sense of humor, isn't above a little crafty subterfuge, is easy going and playful - the exact opposite of Phillip, the stodgy, virtuous businessman. They complemented each other nicely and were well matched, I thought.

Phillip and Maria already have a history together when the story opens, and I don't want to reveal too much because part of the story is the unfolding of, not only their present relationship, but of their past and the way in which Phillip's younger brother Lawrence fits into the mix. Lawrence and Maria had tried (unsuccessfully) to elope 12 years ago, and Maria hasn't seen either of the two brothers since. All this changes thanks to a coincidence, about as subtle as a ton of bricks, whereby the shop Maria wants to move into for her patisserie is located right next door to where Phillip and Lawrence live. Since Phillip doesn't want Maria anywhere near his brother, he tries to have her evicted from the shop. And Maria certainly isn't to take that lying down. Let the wild rumpus start.

Despite the book's promising beginning, I was disappointed in the love triangle involving these three, because the author clearly took the easy way out and from the start there's never any question which brother Maria really loves, which brother she's loved all along in fact. Love triangles of this sort are always opportunities for a lot angst, forbidden love, divided loyalties, etc. but none of that came up in Secret Desires of a Gentleman. This conflict was never more than a pretense, leaving me to wonder why Guhrke ever bothered with it in the first place. The real more concern lies with the more simplistic angle of how Phillip, it is revealed, has carried a torch for Maria since the beginning - hence the title. The repressed British peer resisting his attraction to a woman for whom he shouldn't feel anything has been done before - even by Guhrke herself, and here it seemed kind of rote, especially in light of all the creative opportunities offered by the aforementioned love triangle, all of which were never taken advantage of. Oh well. Still Phillip and Maria had good chemistry most of the time, and there were some great moments in the story - mostly involving Phillip silently pining after Maria. The book does a good job convincing me of their fundamental friendship through some touching flashbacks. And always Guhrke excels when it comes to the steamier side of their relationship - in particular Phillip's passion for Maria is pretty intense. As for their love - the jury's still out on that one I think.

The book derailed when it came to Phillip's first proposal. Maybe it's just me and I'm reading something into it that's not there, but their whole argument during that scene had strong echoes of Pride and Prejudice - the tone, what is said, the progression of their conversation, its outcome. I felt like the author wrote it right after watching Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle hash it out on screen, and part of me is delighted at those overtones - anything having to do with Pride and Prejudice can't be a bad thing. But then again, the episode didn't really ring true at the same time, as if the characters were being forced into a role that didn't quite fit, and it seemed like a poor imitation of the original (assuming there even was an original - though other reviewers have noted the Pride and Prejudice connection as well.)

Whatever the case, the end result is I started liking the book less and less, particularly when Maria makes a certain decision regarding career vs. marriage. I think the whole girl-bachelor group is a poor representation of pioneering feminists/working girls, and I am not impressed with their little Sunday tea-time ritual of telling whoever the one whose story is at hand that she must be in love, she must marry, etc. They don't seem to care about anything else, and I hate the "advice" they give each other. Prudence especially. I know I'm being picky, and it's not like she shows up for more than a few pages out of the whole book, but still good old Pru really gets on my nerves. All this (but mostly Maria's sacrifice and a very cheesy, clunky final scene) put a major damper on things for me. Even though I mostly enjoyed the book while I was in the midst of it, I can't say that I find Secret Desires of a Gentleman all that memorable.
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Trashy? Yes, of course!

I've recently read a whole bunch of trashy romances, and this one is probably the best of them. Nice writting style, interesting and somewhat plausible story, based on timeles 'boy and girl hate, but dont really hate each other, and then they fall in love'. Few naughty bits sprinkled arround the book - fun! Lovely professional chef heroine, and a very Darcy-like hero. How can a girl go wrong?
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Simply Entertaining!

When I saw this book in a store last week, I thought it looked like a really fun book. Phillip Hawthorne, the supremely stuffy, arrogant marquess and Maria, the lowly daughter of the family's chef. Twelve years ago, she would have married Phillip's brother, Lawrence, if an appalled Phillip hadn't intervened by threatening to cut off his brother's income and paying her to go away.

Now, it so happens, unbeknownst to all of them, Maria rents a bakery right next door to the townhouse occupied by the two brothers, and sets up shop. When the brothers learn of this, Lawrence is ecstatic but Phillip is far from amused. I wondered how LLG could possibly bring Phillip and Maria together, when Phillip was such a truly abominable jerk to her and thought himself so above her, but Maria is a spunky, likeable heroine who knows exactly how to handle the holier-than-thou marquess.

This is my first LLG book and I'm looking forward to reading more. Don't miss this fun, romantic read!
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Not a keeper

Although I enjoyed the other books in this series this one wasn't a keeper for me. As some other reviewers have commented, I had some problems with the "hero" (I thought he was a jerk) and the ending left a lot to be desired. It just wasn't believable. This book is a disappointment compared to other books by this author, many of which I've enjoyed for their light, breezy quality and sweet romantic scenes.
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Quick, Entertaining Read...but needed more

This book was a quick and easy read. However, I agree with many of the other reviewers that the ending left a lot to be desired. There was just too much said in that public declaration. It seemed incredulous and too impulsive for Phillip. Consequently, it did not seem genuine.

Also, throughout the story I would have preferred to see a little more affection between Maria and Phillip. And she was a pastry chef for goodness sakes. That leaves a world of sweets from which to contrive some very romantic moments, but there were none, save the bit of sweet on her mouth in one scene. And if there was so much focus on the dang food, certainly it should have been tied in more to make the story a little more seductive. As it was, it was all just way too predictable.

Finally, I think she should have known about her feelings for him for all those years and not have suddenly discovered that they were for him and not his brother. She would have known it but known that Lawrence was her second choice, right? And I guess I was just never really convinced that she actually had always loved him.

It was an entertaining read for me, but not very memorable.
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A mixed bag

I've said before that I love Laura Lee Guhrke's work so it pains me to give one of her creations anything less than 5 stars. However, if I'm perfectly fair I have to. This book has a lot of good points, but the not so great points seem to overpower them at times.

I thought at first it was going to be another homerun for Ms. Guhrke, but it soon became clear that it had problems. One of which was the attitude of the hero. Yes, he changes his tune in time, but he spends quite a bit of the book pontificating on how he is so much more superior than our lowly pastry chef heroine. And while that is true from society's perspective, considering their history it makes him seem uncaring, snobbish and sometimes downright mean. It would have been nice to see him show a little more appreciation for his 'true north'.

In some ways it was refreshing seeing him come to realize that he had always been in love with Maria, the chef's daughter, but it took just a little too long for him to realize it. For her part, I really liked Maria, except for those 3 or 4 times when she sounded like a card carrying suffragette. The 'you must respect me, I'm an independent woman' routine didn't seem appropriate for the time period and made her seem a little unreasonable. Not that Phillip helped anything with his stark proclamations and demands.

But it was all interesting enough that I might have gotten over all that if the ending hadn't been so rushed. It could have used another chapter or an epilogue at the very least. I was not crazy about the public make-up scene either. Totally out of character for the straightlaced Marquess of Hawthorne. I'm sure that was intentional to show us how much he had changed and how much he loved Maria after all, but it didn't ring true to me.

Not the worst book I've read, but it could have been better.
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"Too Slow"

I was really surprised that the story was so slow. I usually enjoy LLG''S books from beginning to end. But this was a bit boring. Not to mention it only had one sex scene throughout the entire story. Just wasn't hot enough. The herione was too forgiving and stupid. The hero was too self righteous, arrogant and mean. He treated her so beneath him, and was so rude and mean that it was hard to believe he was actually attracted to her. Throughout the story never developed a relationship to fall in love. This is not a keeper.
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Not her best but a solid effort

Overall I enjoyed this book. It's got its share of flaws but is still much better than the last book in the series.

Unlike other posters on this board, I found myself liking Phillip much better tha Maria. He may have seemed like a snob, but all his objections about a union between Maria and him or his brother are valid and in keeping with the times. In comparison, Maria's complete disregard of the social gap or her utter unawareness of it seemed very unreal and conceited. I found it ironic and contradictory that the author chose to write a series about girl-bachelors - independent women in trade whose merit lies not in their birth but in their intelligence and character - and yet still found it necessary to pair them all up with rich aristocrats. And if the author insists on such pairings, why fail to explore the social ramifications? It's a little hard for me to believe the society would have so readily accepted both Prudence's and Emma's matches. This series has so much potential to be so much more complex and richer. It's a pity that the author chose to make it into romance-lite. I would love it if one of the next books in the series featured a boy-next-door hero - someone who's actually worth less than the price of a small island.

As for the story, the biggest flaw is that the central romance wasn't developed enough. We find out early on that Phillip was in love with Maria, and has been for years, but Maria remained clueless and it wasn't until the book is two thirds over that she exhibited any kind of feeling towards him at all. I didn't get the feeling that she thought much about him at all prior to his big declaration, and even afterwards it still felt pretty one-sided.

Still, this was an entertaining and quick read and I would definitely check out other books in the series if given the chance.
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Loved It !

I really enjoyed reading this book so much that I finished it one reading. I couldn't put it down. I know some people did not like the hero but when I read about the ribbon, and when he whispered his reason for separating Maria from Lawrence all those years ago, I just melted. I have a weakness for stories with lost loves from long ago and this one is wonderful.
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I loved this book!!!

This romance doesn't get the due it deserves! The characters are wonderful and the story is very romantic. It reminded me of Pride and Prejudice. Also, it was refreshing to see a female protagonist in a romance novel who is such a feminist. Give this book a chance - you'll be glad you did.
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