Sudden Death: A Novel of Suspense (FBI Trilogy)
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Sudden Death: A Novel of Suspense (FBI Trilogy)

Mass Market Paperback – March 24, 2009

Price
$8.99
Publisher
Ballantine Books
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ISBN-13
978-0345502742
Dimensions
4.19 x 0.94 x 6.74 inches
Weight
7.7 ounces

Description

About the Author Allison Brennan is the New York Times bestselling author of many romantic thrillers, including Kiss Me, Kill Me; Love Me to Death; Sudden Death; and Killing Fear . A five-time RITA finalist and Daphne du Maurier Award winner, Brennan enjoys spending her free time reading, playing games, watching high school sports, and researching her novels. A member of Romance Writers of America, Mystery Writers of America, and International Thriller Writers, Allison Brennan lives in Northern California with her husband, Dan, and their five children. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Chapter One The homeless man’s murder had been ritualistic, brutal, and efficient.Megan Elliott swatted flies that swarmed near the body next to the Dumpster as she squatted beside the victim. It was midmorning and the temperature was already eighty degrees. The bullet had gone in clean, execution style, behind the ear. All signs suggested that he’d been killed right here, in a narrow alley separating a parking garage from the historic Cathedral of the Blessed Sacrament.There didn’t appear to be signs of struggle, but here in the decrepit underside of Sacramento, that was difficult to determine. While the city did a fairly good job at keeping most of the streets clean, on the north side of downtown, away from the Capitol building and closer to the soup kitchen, the grime and unwanted bred. Here, homeless weeded through the garbage off K Street for something edible when the city rolled up the sidewalks; or they slept against brick walls, clutching their meager possessions in a desperate grip.No sign of struggle, and based on the lack of blood spatter, the victim had been prone when shot at close range. But he had the same outward injuries as the other two known victims. His hamstrings had been cut clean through, incapacitating him. His wrists had been duct-taped to something, as evidenced from the chafing and band of missing arm hair. And he was barefoot.“What are you thinking?”Megan stood and, though she was five foot eight, she had to look up at Detective John Black, who had to be close to six and a half feet tall.“All the appearances of an execution, but you’re absolutely right. The M.O. matches the murders on the recent FBI hot sheet.” And to maintain good relations with local law enforcement, she added, “You were right on the money there. Thanks.”“His hamstrings weren’t cut here. Not enough blood. No spray or cast-off.”Megan glanced around, but there was no blood on the brick wall or in the alleyway. Where had he been attacked?Without touching the filthily clad victim, she inspected the deep gash in the back of his legs. She mim?icked a slicing motion with her hand and then said, “I’ll need the coroner’s report, but it appears that the killer sliced right to left, cutting both legs with an even, fluid motion.” She stood and said, “Turn around.”Black did, looking over his shoulder. She said, “You’re much taller than the victim. If the victim was walking, the killer would have had to have walked up behind him and—slice—cut the hamstrings.” She mim-icked the motion against the back of Black’s knees. “It’s the only thing that makes sense. If the vic was lying down, why would the killer slice his legs across?”“It would help if we could locate where he was attacked.”Megan agreed. “If the vic went down on his knees, that should be obvious at the autopsy with bruising or evidence on his pants. But why shoot him here? Why did the killer move him at all after the inital attack?”Wearing latex gloves and plastic booties over her shoes, an attractive, well-dressed woman who may have been thirty on her last birthday approached. “Nice theory, but maybe you should wait for crime scene analysis.”Black’s lips twitched. “Simone, FBI Supervisory Agent Megan Elliott. Agent Elliott, Simone Charles, CSU Supervisor.”Megan nodded. She’d worked with the prickly perfectionist before. “We’ve met. So, what does the evidence show, Simone?”“My team just came off a triple murder in the Pocket. Sorry for being late.” She didn’t sound sorry, but Megan noticed the red eyes and tight expression. She’d heard about the murder-suicide before she’d left FBI headquarters. A man came home early in the morning, drunk, and shot his wife and two kids while they slept, then blew his own brains out.“You’re not late,” Megan said.Simone motioned for one of her team to photograph the scene and the body. “I’ll walk the area and be right back. You have a wide perimeter,” she noted to Detective Black. “Any reason?”“To keep the vultures at bay.” He nodded toward the KCRA-3 van parked at the edge of the crime scene tape.She grinned and walked away, dropping markers at specific spots.Black said, “So was he killed here or not?”Megan clarified. “He was definitely shot right here, small-caliber handgun is my guess, twenty-two caliber, behind the left ear. A twenty-two is very effective at close range.”Megan had seen far too many execution-style murder victims when she was part of the national Evidence Response Team that went to Kosovo ten years ago. Which led to the question of why disable the victim first if only to shoot him?If the evidence held true compared with the first two known victims, Megan already had the answer: between the time the victim’s hamstrings were cut to when he was shot, someone had received sick pleasure from torturing him. Handicapping the victim was to keep him from escaping.“We need to find out where he was attacked and tortured,” Megan said.The two previous victims had no visible marks until their clothing was removed. Then dozens of tiny pinpricks were obvious. “He plays before he kills.”“Excuse me?”Megan had forgotten that she wasn’t alone. The members of Squad Eight—the Violent Crimes/Major Offender Squad that she headed—were used to her talking to herself; she had to remember she was out of her element here, assisting SPD.“Just thinking out loud.”Megan itched to inspect the victim’s feet, but she didn’t want to touch the body until the coroner’s unit arrived.First Austin, Texas, then Las Vegas, Nevada. Now Sacramento, California. The only thing those three places had in common, on the surface, was that they were large cities. The victims were single, male, between the ages of thirty-five and forty-five, tortured and murdered in their homes. While most serial predators stayed within one race, the first victim was black and the second and third were white. The first vic owned his own business and, though divorced, was by all accounts a devoted father. The second vic had never married, had a rap sheet for minor drug charges, and worked as a mechanic. There was some indication that he had a gambling problem, which delayed the local police from reporting the crime to the national database, mistakenly believing it was payback for an uncollected debt. The hot sheet possibly linking the two had only been sent out late last week.As if reading her mind, or simply breathing too deeply, Black got on the radio and said to someone, “This body is cooking and it’s only going to get hotter. ETA of the coroner?”A gender-neutral voice replied, “On scene.”“Great.” Black looked around, frowned, and said to Megan, “I’ll find him.” He stalked off.It wasn’t standard procedure for an FBI agent to go out to crime scenes alone, even aiding the local P.D., but there had been no initial certainty that this homicide was connected to the two other murders. Because her squad was already spread extremely thin, Megan had opted to check the scene herself.But there was no doubt in her mind after viewing the body that the murder of this homeless man was connected somehow to the murders in Texas and Nevada. Why and how were the two big questions other than, of course, who.She would wait to call it in until she had more information.Megan frowned as she visually inspected the body again. Something else struck her as odd. Because the victim was homeless and had been living on the streets long enough to disappear into the backdrop of Sacramento, his age was indeterminate. At first glance, he could be as young as thirty, but the ravages of drugs and alcohol or simply the hard years living on the streets aged him. His clothes hadn’t been washed in weeks or longer, so his hands stood out.They were clean.She looked around for someone from the CSU or SPD, but all she saw were uniforms, and they eyed her apprehensively. Her boss, Bob Richardson, had made great inroads working with local law enforcement, but there were always a few who blamed the “Fibbies” for everything bad that happened on a call.She took out her BlackBerry and snapped a couple photographs. Not SOP, but she didn’t plan to use the photos as evidence. She wanted to remember to ask the CSU about the hands, and this was Megan’s reminder.Were clean hands part of the killer’s ritual? Or was this something new? Or special for this victim? Did this homeless man have some sort of hand-washing compulsion?Or maybe there had been evidence on his hands and the killer had cleaned them. Very little could destroy evidence if the lab and technicians were good enough. But bleach or another caustic cleanser could be a sign that the victim had fought back and the killer had tried to conceal the evidence.She knelt down and sniffed close to the hands.

Features & Highlights

  • Fast, furious and fatal . . . a pair of killers seek brutal revenge.
  • When a homeless veteran is found dead in a squalid Sacramento alley, FBI special agent Megan Elliott vows to find the murdered hero’s killer. Her investigation gets complicated fast, for the victim, a former Delta Force soldier, is just one link in a nationwide spree of torture and murder. Straight off a job rescuing medical missionaries, soldier-for-hire Jack Kincaid returns to his home base in the Texas border town of Hidalgo only to receive the news that one of his closest colleagues–also ex-military–has been brutally murdered. Faced with an inept local police force, Jack takes matters into his own hands. Now, as part of a national task force to stop the sadistic killings, by-the-book Megan and burn-the-book Jack form a tense alliance, sparked with conflict and temptation. But they struggle against more than passion, for a vicious pair of killers has only just begun a rampage of evil . . . and the primary target is much closer than Megan suspects.

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This was labeled romance but there was less romance than I expected. It was ok as mystery suspense (warning: a lot of torture).

REVIEWER'S OPINION:
This was labeled as romantic suspense, and the mislabeling is what bothers me the most. In my opinion, it does not have enough romance or development of a relationship to qualify for that genre. This is mostly mystery suspense with a lot of uncomfortable torture scenes. 95% of the story is about the authorities finding clues and slowly unraveling the mystery about serial killings. The small amount of romance consists of a couple meeting, working together on the case, and getting together at the end. I didn't get the feelings of anticipation or enjoyment that I normally expect from "romance" novels. Once in a while I will enjoy a straight mystery because the characters pull me in, or the dialogue is interesting, or I feel good while reading it. But this book didn't have those effects on me. I think mystery lovers will like this more than I did.

I had a minor problem with the smart good guys doing a couple of stupid or illogical things. Megan was stupid and careless toward the end which caused a major problem. Hans was angry at Megan for reasons I felt did not make sense or fit with his character.

STORY BRIEF:
Megan is a by-the-book FBI agent investigating veterans who had been tortured and killed. Jack is a former veteran and now a soldier-for-hire. He joins with Megan to find the killers after his best friend is killed (one of the victims). We learn early in the story who the killers are (Ethan and Karin) so I'm not giving anything away. Ethan was with a group of soldiers in Afghanistan. He was captured and tortured for three months by the Taliban before being rescued. He is suicidal and loaded with mental problems. Karin wants to learn torture techniques, but Ethan won't teach her. Therefore she convinces Ethan that he needs to capture and torture the veterans who were with him at the time, saying they abandoned him. She plans and helps him capture the vets, and then learns by watching Ethan stick needles into them. The main mystery is finding the killers, but a second mystery is why Karin wants to learn to torture.

DATA:
Story length: 424 pages. Swearing language: strong. Sexual language: moderate. Number of sex scenes: 2. Total number of sex scene pages: 12. Setting: California, Texas, Colorado and Arizona. Copyright: 2009. Genre: mystery suspense.
17 people found this helpful
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Not really romance, more just suspense

I generally love Allison Brennan and while her books are never heavy on the romance, this book held almost no romance. For at least the first 1/3 of the book Jack and Megan don't even have any interactions with each other. When they finally meet it's instant attraction and jumping into headlong into a full blown relationship. I don't have a problem with that sort of quick falling in love, but in this book it seemed like an after thought thrown in there with little development. Even after Jack and Megan meeting and instantly fall in love there isn't enough interactions between the 2 to really draw me into the story.

As a straight novel of suspense, it was good. I gave it 3 stars for a few reasons though:

1. I really was expecting more romance if this was going to be marketed as a romantic suspense
2. The extensive, graphic attention devoted to the torture of the victims and the sexual pleasure the killers get from the torture was disturbing. I don't mind some torture scenes but Brennan described in great detail multiple torture scenes to the point where it finally made me uncomfortable and I started skipping the scenes devoted to the killers.
3. I understand that giving insight into the killers is a great device when telling a good mystery/suspense novel but I felt she gave too much attention to the killers. Some of the scenes felt repetitive and too detailed. Maybe I feel that way because I don't normally read strict suspense novels, but I would have liked it more if there were less pages on the killers and more on the development of Jack and Megan's relationship.
4. The conflict between Hans and Megan seemed forced and could have been developed better I think.

If you go into this novel understanding you're not getting much romance and that there's graphic, at times disturbing scenes of torture, then you'll probably like this book more than I did. I just really wasn't prepared for what I got in this book.
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One of her best so far....

I'm a huge fan of Allison Brennan but her last few books have been a little disappointing. This book was great! I couldn't put it down and read it in one night!!! The plot was exciting and I loved the characters... Finally the mysterious Jack Kincaid gets his story told. Ms. Brennan is back, I hope her next one is just as good.
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Good....BUT....

This was a good read, but not for the faint of heart. I was happy Jack got a story. We have received glimpses of him in previous books - intriguing, mysterious and a complete alpha male. His persona didn't change in this book, but it didn't seem there was enough character development of this strong hero as Ms. Brennan has done with her heroes in previous books. I think if the integration of both investigations was incorporated earlier in the book there wouldn't be the feel that the relationship between Jack and Meg was so "rushed." Overall, it was a very good read, fast paced, disturbing in parts, but suspenseful with plenty of twists and turns.
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Loved It

I have read numerous Allison Brennan books, but this was by far, my favorite. This book kept me guessing as to who the murderer was. Once I started this book, I couldn't put it down.
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Romantic Suspense?

I've come to expect a lot out of this author, so I was very disappointed in this book.

First off, I found it very hard to get into, unlike her other books which normally draw me in from page one. And it seemed to go on forever, much of it being graphic details of torture that I really didn't need to read to that extent.

I also thought the relationship between Megan and Jack was too forced and too quick. They knew each other two days and suddenly Jack is ready to give his life for this woman, which didn't fit with the Jack we've met in other books. And a few days later, most of which is spent with one of the characters in the hospital, they're running off to Jack's family to get married. More development of this relationship and less graphic torture would've made this a much better book.
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Enjoyed it!

Enjoyed reading about the Kincaid family again. The suspense/mystery was great as well. The book could have used some more romance. It almost felt like that author knew she needed a romance and stuck it in there. The ending (meaning the relationship between Megan and Jack) was rushed. Again, the romance portion of the book is what held me back with that 5th star. If the author would have added a bit more romance, I would have totally given it 5 stars. Everything else was great!
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Sudden Death

Great book. Lots of twist and turns. Keeps you up reading. I finished it in one night. Hard to put down.
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Great return to the Kincaid family

After what I thought was a so-so series - the prison break series, this was a great return to the great suspenseful writing of Brennan. I was anxiously waiting for Jack's story and she didn't disappoint. Jack is a great hero and a complex, interesting character. He had great chemistry with Megan.

My only complaint is I had a hard time remembering all the characters from previous books that returned in this one.

I couldn't put this book down.
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Sudden Death - Great Read

This is one of Allison Brennan's best story lines. The relationship between Megan Elliot and Jack Kincaid is well developed. I had to limit myself a certain number of chapters in one reading session. If you have not read Ms. Brennan's books, I would start with this book.
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