The Amendment Killer
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The Amendment Killer

Hardcover – November 1, 2017

Price
$19.73
Format
Hardcover
Pages
570
Publisher
Gander House Publishers
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0982759059
Dimensions
5.98 x 1.44 x 9.02 inches
Weight
1.76 pounds

Description

"THE AMENDMENT KILLER is tense, timely, and terrific!"xa0-Lee Child, #1 New York Times Bestselling author- Lee Child, #1 New York Times Bestselling author of the Jack Reacher novels"Ron Barak's THE AMENDMENT KILLER might well serve as a primer for the commercial legal thriller. The concept is high, the pacing supersonic, the characters well-drawn and sympathetic. The novel should come with a warning: addictive reading ahead. It's as good a legal thriller as I've read this year."- John Lescroart, author of a dozen New York Times bestselling novels"With an unparalleled sense of terror forewarned on the opening page, Ron Barak's THE AMENDMENT KILLER is a high-speed, tense political thriller about one of today's most fundamental issues, the integrity of our Supreme Court."- Andrew Gross, #1 New York Times bestselling author of The One Man"THE AMENDMENT KILLER is a high concept, hybrid blend of a political, psychological and action thriller all rolled into a smooth, savory, and suspenseful mix. Ron Barak manages to channel the best of John Grisham, David Baldacci and even Steve Berry in this amazingly timely tale cast with a Supreme Court backdrop. As prescient as it is thought-provoking and as much fun as itis factual, this is reading entertainment of the highest order. I'd be shocked if this book doesn't become a bestseller."- Jon Land, USA Today bestselling author of Strong Light of Day"Blurring moral and legal lines while gripping every parent by the throat who journeys into THE AMENDMENT KILLER, Ron Barak delivers a captivating, chilling and clever read."- Sandra Brannan, award-winning author of the Liv Bergen Mystery Series"THE AMENDMENT KILLER is a fast-moving, tense, power-charged thriller where the life of a young girl with diabetes and the foundations of American democracy are both at stake. Combining contemporary, timely themes with a classic moral dilemma, this novel entertains and educates."- K.J. Howe, author of The Freedom Broker"From its electrifying opening line to its powerful conclusion, THE AMENDMENTKILLER is a ripped-from-tomorrow's headlines story of law and politics set against the backdrop of the Supreme Court. But more so, it's a story about the lengths we will go for the ones we love. Timely, fast-paced, and heartfelt, you'll mourn the turning of the last page. Ron Barak is a writer to watch."- Anthony Franze, author of The Outsider"A complex and riveting political thriller.xa0The Amendment Killerxa0starts off with a 'killer' hook and then tells the story through multiple points of view that give it great range, especially given Barak's expert characterization of each player in the story. The pacing is solid, as is the quality of the writing. It's a great introduction to the Brooks/Lotello series, and establishes Barak as a solid and exciting writer of thrillers."xa0- Marta Cheng SPR ReviewFrom the vantage point of one who has spent many years in Washington, D.C., I recently had the pleasure of reading an advance copy of Ronald S. Barak's latest political and legal thriller, THE AMENDMENT KILLER, a terrific, timely and remarkably accurate portrayal of modern day political dysfunction centered in our capital. Blurring contemporary reality with his own brand of fiction, Barak cleverly intertwines the kidnapping of the 11-year-old diabetic granddaughter of a Supreme Court justice to control the outcome of Congress' attempt to persuade the Court to invalidate a constitutional amendment criminalizing political abuse and corruption. I have read many of John Grisham's bestselling novels. Barak matches Grisham step for step. He had me turning the pages of THE AMENDMENT KILLER from the first page to the last. I thoroughly enjoyed the ride."- Dennis DeConcini, United States Senator, Ret"Ron Barak's The Amendment Killer is a contemporary political thriller benefitting from heavy research, a chilling villain, and a timely message. The text message that starts this book off is a fantastic hook, and the narrative rapidly rotates between a large cast of characters, resulting in a page-flipping thriller. The Amendment Killer combines a legal thriller with a tense drama where the stability of the government hangs in the balance . It's timely, tense, and a perfect read in these uncertain times."- John M. Murray (Foreword Reviews)xa0"Set among the hallowed chambers of the Supreme Court of the United States, Ron Barak's The Amendment Killer is a high stakes legal thriller easily the best we've read this year. Beautifully staged, Attorney Barak expertly tells the story from alternating points of view. Fresh, fast and furious. And highly recommended."- Best Thrillers MagazineTHE AMENDMENT KILLER is a book with heft that feels like it's flying by, written by someone who appears to know his subject in detail, and uses that knowledge to weave a fantastic tale. It's full on, fluid, and memorable. America is facing a constitutional crisis. "Amendment 28" has been introduced. Congress deem that illegal. It's the job of the Supreme Court to decide if the new Amendment should stand or fall. Barak weaves a complex narrative. The strengths and weaknesses of the lawyers' cases were expansive, and carefully thought out. The multiple perspectives work well, too. As a reader we have just enough to understand the differing angles of each person involved, while the gorgeous twists and turns in other corners keep you charging on.- James Hendicott for IndieReader, IR Approved, Mystery/Thriller

Features & Highlights

  • "THE AMENDMENT KILLER is tense,timely, and terrific!" -Lee Child, #1 New York Times Bestselling author"WE HAVE YOUR GRANDDAUGHTER. HERE'S WHAT YOU NEED TO DO." That's the text message Supreme Court Justice Arnold Hirschfeld receives as hearings commence in the U.S. Supreme Court to determine the fate of the 28th Amendment - enacted to criminalize abuse of power on the part of our political representatives. In court to defend the amendment, retired U.S. District Court Judge Cyrus Brooks observes his old friend and law school classmate Hirschfeld acting strangely and dispatches veteran D.C. homicide detective Frank Lotello to find out why. In the meantime, Hirschfeld's precocious and feisty 11-year-old diabetic granddaughter Cassie, brutally kidnapped to control her grandfather's swing vote upholding or invalidating the amendment, watches her insulin pump running dry and wonders which poses her greatest threat, the kidnappers or the clock. As Brooks is forced to choose between saving our nation or saving the girl.

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If you like inventive storylines...

If you like inventive storylines...this novel is for you. I haven’t read anything this avant-garde since I read Warren Adler’s We are Holding the President Hostage (see my review of 8/17/2017). The author, Ronald S. Barak, brings up some interesting possibilities pertaining to the U.S. Constitution. Article Five of the Constitution can be interpreted to say that it is possible for the governed (in other words: me and you) to propose and pass an amendment without the permission or vote from Congress. At least that’s how the author sees it. Of course Congress sues the group known as the National Organization for Political Integrity (NoPoli), which sets up the next anomaly. But first, let me tell you what the 28th Amendment (the one proposed by NoPoli) is basically about: “Criminalizing abuse of power and corruption on the part of our political representatives”, which seems like a good thing to me. The case will be heard by the Supreme Court and it’s nine justices (first time on live TV). One congressman tells Mr. Esposito, the lead attorney for the Congress side, “You don’t think I hold public office for just the salary and benefits that come with the job, do you? The real money is in what I make behind the scenes. The parties and the lobbyists who pay me are very pleased with my services and are quite willing to pay me for what I do. I’m just like any other broker who brings two parties together. They don’t do that for free. Neither do I. The only difference is that I don’t admit it.” NoPoli’s amendment seems to be right on the money (so to speak).

Okay back to that anomaly I mentioned in the first paragraph. One of the justices, Arnold Hirschfeld, has his eleven year old granddaughter, Cassie, kidnapped just before the trial starts. While Hirschfeld is in court waiting for the suit to start, he is contacted by the kidnapper (who we find out later is Thomas T. Thomas III), “We have your granddaughter. Here’s what you need to do.” Who is we? The government? A rogue congressman? The man known as Thomas lets the judge know that Cassie will die if he can’t convince the other judges to vote against NoPoli. Would the POTUS get involved in this action? Is Thomas working for him? Meanwhile, NBN-TV is televising the live event with Anne Nishimura as the hostess. She is flanked by commentators, Steve Kessler (the CEO of NoPoli) and Christopher Elliot (head of a prestigious D.C. law firm). Nishimura ask Elliot, “Chris, I thought all amendments to the Constitution have to go through Congress. Have I got that wrong?” Did anybody notice that Judge Hirschfeld suddenly seemed very nervous? Chris says, “That’s precisely why we’re here, Anne. Congress brought this lawsuit because it believes NoPoli preempted the constitutionally mandated amendment process. It’s asking the Supreme Court to rule on that very question.” As I was reading this novel, I wondered if there was some truth in NoPoli’s claim that they don’t need Congress’s permission to pass an amendment. Anyway, The third quirk in this novel is a doozy!

Alright, we have an amendment passed by the people that is being challenged by Congress in the Supreme Court, and a kidnapping of one of the Supreme Court judge’s granddaughter in progress. What other oddity does this novel have? Well, if you don’t trust the kidnapper, what do you do? What I mean is: What if the Judge gets the other judges to vote his and the kidnapper’s way, but the kidnapper (Thomas) doesn’t let Cassie go? Will he kill her anyway? So the author came up with a great solution. A kidnapping escrow account! Yes, turn over Cassie to a trusted third party. If Judge Hirschfeld gets the other justices to vote against NoPoli, then the third party gives Cassie back to her parents. If Judge Hirschfeld fails to sway the vote...Cassie goes back to the kidnappers...to be killed? Wow, what a possibility. Has that ever happened? Maybe. When the son of American hero Charles Lindbergh was kidnapped in 1932 by Bruno Hauptmann; a Bronx personality, John Condon, offered $1,000 for the kidnapper to turn the baby over to a catholic priest (a third party). But sadly, the child was killed by Hauptmann before that arrangement could be finalized. Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed Ronald S. Barak’s innovative and completely original novel. Great job!
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Five Stars

One exciting surprise after another.
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Good story, OK writing, horrible editing

I liked the premise, and it was decently written for a first book. But the editing was fan-fiction quality: clumsy phrasing, misplaced punctuation, and more--to the point of being difficult to read in parts. That's not the author's fault: that's what editors are for.

As others have written, the story was perhaps overly complex, with a lot of minor characters. I was reading it on paper and occasionally wished it was Kindle so I could easily search for a name to remind me who some name was. A good editor might have trimmed a bit of this, tightening the story some. There were a number of spots where I said "Meh, this isn't really adding to the story".

Still, nothing to be ashamed of!