The Prince of Mist
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The Prince of Mist

Hardcover – May 4, 2010

Price
$12.00
Format
Hardcover
Pages
224
Publisher
Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
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ISBN-13
978-0316044776
Dimensions
6 x 1 x 8.5 inches
Weight
11.2 ounces

Description

It's war time, and the Carver family decides to leave the capital where they live and move to a small coastal village where they've recently bought a home. But from the minute they cross the threshold, strange things begin to happen. In that mysterious house still lurks the spirit of Jacob, the previous owners' son, who died by drowning. With the help of their new friend Roland, Max and Alicia Carver begin to explore the strange circumstances of that death and discover the existence of a mysterious being called the Prince of Mist--a diabolical character who has returned from the shadows to collect on a debt from the past. Soon the three friends find themselves caught up in an adventure of sunken ships and an enchanted stone garden--an adventure that will change their lives forever. Amazon Exclusive: Interview with Carlos Ruiz Zafon, Author of The Prince of Mist How did you come to write The Prince of Mist as your debut novel, which was first published in Spanish in 1993? When I wrote The Prince of Mist I was in my mid twenties. I had written a couple of unpublished novels and a number of short stories before, published some pieces in magazines and newspapers, etc. I had been writing since I was a child, but I realized that I had never really written anything that I was completely happy with. Something was missing. I already felt that I was late in the game and that I had been wasting my time doing other things while I should have been focusing more seriously in my writing. I guess that, like many writers, I was just trying to find my own voice. Around that time I was working as a musician, although I knew that my "true" path, at least professionally, was in the writing. At some point I decided to drop everything and start working on this little novel, telling myself that this had to be "the one." Although I had never thought I would write for younger readers, the story seemed to me perfectly suited for that genre and, I suppose, I still hoped to be able to write something that would appeal to readers of all ages. I decided to try to write the book I would have liked to read when I was 12 or 13 years old. I worked quite hard on it, harder than I had worked on anything before. I remember writing at night over the summer of 1992 in Barcelona, from midnight till dawn. It was the summer of the Barcelona Olympics and it was hot and humid as hell. You can say I really sweated this one. I ended up having to buy this portable AC machine that I would point at my face while I was writing. I was fortunate in that the novel won an important literary award and became quite successful. It was the book that allowed me to become a professional writer and to start my career as a novelist, and I’ve always been fond of it. What do you think are the most important differences when writing for adult readers and young adult readers? I don't think there're that many differences, really. You just have to write the best possible story in the most efficient way you are capable of. It is all about the language, the style, the atmosphere, the characters, the plot, the images and textures… If anything, I believe that younger readers are even more demanding and sincere about their feelings about what they're reading, and you have to be honest, never condescending. I don't think younger readers are an ounce less smart than adult ones. I think they are able to understand anything intellectually but perhaps there're emotional elements that they have not experienced in their lives yet, although they will eventually. Because of this, I think it is important to include a perspective in the work that allows them to find an emotional core that they can relate to not just intellectually. Other than that, I think you should work as hard as you can for your audience, respect them and try to bring the best of your craft to the table. My own personal view is that there’s just good writing and bad writing. All other labels are, at least to me, irrelevant. In the novel, there are many references to watches, clocks and the passage of time. For instance, Max Carver, the central character, receives a pocket watch as a birthday gift from his watchmaker father. Its case is engraved with the words "Max's Time Machine." When the Carver family moves to a coastal town and arrives at the train station, Max observes that the train station clock is turning backwards. Why is the theme of time so important in the novel? Time is the thread of our lives, and in this story we see how events in the past, actions in our lives, have consequences later on. In some ways, we are the sum of our actions, our choices, our deeds. Life hands us a number of cards at the beginning of the game. We cannot choose them, but we can choose how we play them. That is an aspect that interests me very much and I try to explore it through the stories I write. I also believe that we are, to a certain extent, what we remember and the novel tries to reflect on these ideas as it jumps back and forth in time exploring the mystery at the heart of the novel. Without revealing too many secrets of your craft, what do you feel are the key ingredients of a spellbinding mystery? I think a good mystery story is just a good story, period. The key ingredients are the same as for any kind of good story: language, style, atmosphere, characterization, structure, imagery, subtext, etc. Good mysteries tend to be based on character rather than just on plot, but at the end of the day it is all in the writing actually. Max, Alicia and Roland are all teenagers, who are confronted with extraordinary and bewildering situations, and yet they don't immediately turn to adults for answers. Why not? Because I think that teenagers want their own answers. They need them. They need to understand the world around, and inside, themselves and they can only do that by finding out themselves the truth. Children rely on adults to tell them what the world is, and they usually get taken for a ride. A teenager knows, feels, the world is something she or he has to figure out. The novel's setting--a coastal town in a time of war—is not very specific. Why not? I guess if you read between the lines you could guess the town is on the south coast of England during World War II. In the original version that was the case, but while I was revising the translation I decided to rewrite and redone certain parts and details and opted for a more generic location. I feel that what is important is that this is a story that happens in a place that we all can remember in our lives, and I wanted to emphasize that. The Prince of Mist was an award winner and a bestseller in Spain, and has only recently reached an English-reading audience. What is the translation process and how were you involved in it? I am very involved in the translation process. I've been very lucky in that I've been working with the extremely talented Lucia Graves on the English translations of my novels. Lucia, who's a very accomplished novelist on her own, grew up in Spain and is completely bilingual. Our goal is to bring the reader a text that is exactly the same as the original in terms of flow, of texture, of pacing, of the music the prose makes. To that end we work very hard with Lucia and I often I'll rewrite sections or retouch things here and there to ensure that what you read in English is almost 100% what you would read in Spanish, without losing anything of the rhythm or the nuances in the flow of the language. I've noticed that sometimes readers, especially readers in English who are not very used to reading translations, tend to mystify the process and think that a translation is a rewrite or a reinvention of the original. It is not. A good translation is invisible and bring you exactly what was in the original, nothing more, nothing less. You divide your time between Barcelona and LA. Are the two cities reflected in your work? I think so. Barcelona is my hometown, the place I was born and grew up in. It is in my blood and I am very much a product of it. On the other hand, I've spent quite some time in California and I believe that a lot of my experiences here find their ways into the books. Writers use what they have at hand to write, what they have inside of them and what they see outside. We write about life, trying to figure it out and, hopefully, come up with something of value and beauty that we can share with the reader along the way. From School Library Journal Starred Review. Grade 5-8 In 1943, Max, 13, and his older sister Alicia are befriended by Roland, the grandson of a reclusive lighthouse keeper, when their family moves to a house on the coast to avoid the war. Max discovers a strange garden of sinister statues and a series of home movies showing that the statues change positions and expressions. Then, when his younger sister is hospitalized after an encounter with a strange presence that precipitates a fall down the stairs, he becomes aware that something sinister is afoot. The mystery deepens as Roland takes Alicia and Max diving to the ruins of an old shipwreck and the story of the ship and its mysterious passengers is revealed by the lighthouse keeper. Max begins to realize that something from beyond the grave is active in their midst and that it has an agenda that nothing on Earth can stop. In the end, someone will have to pay the price for a bargain made with the evil one long ago. The Prince of Mist hooks readers from page one. It is a combination of mystery, suspense, and supernatural thriller. The author keeps readers guessing all the way till the end in a story that's fresh, frightening, and beautifully translated. Awesome. Debra Banna, Sharon Public Library, MA Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved. From Booklist Best-selling adult author Zafón published this first novel in Spain in 1993. Previously unavailable here and now translated seamlessly, this atmospheric tale is set in 1943 in an unspecified seacoast village. On Max Carver’s thirteenth birthday, his father announces that the family is moving to a village for safety. Their new home has a tragic past and a garden filled with sinister statues that begin to haunt the children’s dreams. Then Max and his older sister Alicia strike up a friendship with a local boy, Roland, who takes them diving around a wrecked ship in the harbor. Roland’s grandfather, the town lighthouse keeper and sole survivor of the wreck, reveals the sinister connections between the wreck, the garden, and a relentlessly evil figure, Cain, called the Prince of Mist. Permeated with a delicious sense of looming menace, the story lines converge inexorably in a terrifying climax. Intelligent and eerie, Zafón’s story will create nightmares and admirers. Grades 7-12. --Lynn Rutan *"Zafón is a master storyteller." --VOYA (starred review)*"A melancholy horror tale." -- Publishers Weekly (starred review)*"Awesome." -- School Library Journal (starred review) Carlos Ruiz Zafón is the author of seven novels, including the New York Times bestseller The Prince of Mist and the international phenomena The Shadow of the Wind and The Angel's Game . His work has been published in more than fifty countries and honored with numerous awards. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • A mysterious house harbors an unimaginable secret...
  • It's wartime, and the Carver family decides to leave the capital where they live and move to a small coastal village. But from the minute they cross the threshold of their new home, strange things begin to happen. In that mysterious house still lurks the spirit of Jacob, the previous owners' son, who died by drowning.With the help of their new friend Roland, Max and Alicia Carver begin to explore the strange circumstances of that death and discover the existence of a mysterious being called the Prince of Mist--a diabolical character who has returned from the shadows to collect on a debt from the past. Soon the three friends find themselves caught up in an adventure of sunken ships and an enchanted stone garden--an adventure that will change their lives forever.
  • Book Details:
  • Format: Paperback
  • Format: Paperback
  • Publication Date: 4/12/2011
  • Publication Date: 4/12/2011
  • Pages: 256
  • Pages: 256
  • Reading Level: Age 12 and Up
  • Reading Level: Age 12 and Up

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Review of The Prince of Mist

I'm not a big fan of ghost stories. I spook easily and end up having to sleep at night with my lights on and an eye half open. I am, however, a huge fan of Zafon's writing and The Prince of Mist proved worthy.

Although The Prince of Mist lacked the more poetic writing of The Shadow of the Wind and The Angel's Game, it still captured that gothic, dark feeling that I loved about the books. I could definitely tell this was a book geared more toward a younger audience - it was short, easy to read and drew me in from the very get-go.

Young Max has to move from his childhood home. With him are his two sisters (one older, one younger) and his parents. They move to a house with a history, a house on a beach, and they stumble into a story involving magic, ghosts and some of the creepiest elements of a ghost story that can be used.

There was a little bit of everything in this book. It played on my fear of graveyards, clowns, "The Ring" movie and many more fears. I read the book in an evening, but had to set it down several times because of random noises that had me jumping and looking over my shoulder. It's just a book, I'd remind myself. I'm such a wimp.

This is a fantastic addition to the YA world. The beginning writing is a bit simple, but push through it and you'll find a story that has every element needed to make it interesting, scary, fun, romantic, sad and just plain creepy.
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geared towards YA audience

Being a big fan of The Shadow of the Wind and a fan of the Angel's Game (up until the rather strange and confusing ending) I was pretty happy when I found a new Zafon book being published. I had no idea it was a young adults novel (and his first apparently) until I got my hands on the novel and read the forward.

At its heart, The Prince of Mist is more or less a ghost story. Because of the looming threat of World War II Max's father moves them to a 'town by the sea'. They move into an old shore house that has a rather shady history. As Max tries to fill up his summer days learning the new town and missing his true home he discovers the skeletons that are held within the home's particular closets.

I'm hardly a young adult which is probably why this book didn't appeal to me all that much. I'm not a huge horror fan but I enjoy a creepy ghost story from time to time. While there's elements of creepiness and sinister goings on in this novel as well as a hint of mystery I found myself not at all creeped or surprised at the book's outcome.

I will say that the characters are pretty vivid though, which is one of Zafon's strong suits. Anybody who's read Shadows or Angels can attest to that.

Would I have read the book if I'd known it was intended for younger audiences from the beginning? I'm sure I would have being that I'm a fan of Zafon and I have read and enjoyed some YA novels, although I admit those instances are few and far between.

Not a bad book by any means, it just missed a certain something that normally pulls me into a novel.
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A spooky read

During wartime a father picks up his family to move out of the city and onto the sea coast. Once there, however, strange things start happening to some of them. A cat that shoots daggers with its eyes is adopted by the youngest child, the son notices the hands on the clock moving backwards, and the eldest daughter is simply in a slump. When the son, Max, meets a boy from town named Roland he gets a tour of the town and an invitation to go diving on some old boat wreckage. Max sensing his eldest sister's, Alicia, melancholy invites her along when he goes to visit Roland. When Roland tells of tales relating to the Prince of Mist, Max knows that it has something to do with the statue garden and the tapes he has found. He knows he needs help if he is going to figure out what is going on and stop it before it's too late.

I wish I could read this in it's original text, theoretically I can, and probably will. I feel like there were parts that just didn't translate well, because the story will be going along and then all of a sudden the writing seems a little off. Maybe that is how it was written but, until I read the original I can not be sure. Otherwise this was a very creepy, creepy novel. I made the mistake of reading this before going to bed. Big mistake. This story contains the spooky Prince of Mist, clowns(eek), statues that move only slightly, graveyards and underwater sunken ships. All these things make me stay up all night to finish the book hoping that once it's done I won't have nightmares. If you don't enjoy reading scary stories, and any of the above things creep you out, don't read this book. If you don't mind something a little spooky please pick this up it was a wonderful story. It's set in 1943 so it's got a nice historical fiction feel, without reading like your history book for school. The history lies within the characters actions and the way they use their words. Although some things seem out of place, I can't say for certain since I a.) didn't live in 1943 and b.) am not quite sure where this takes place, but it probably isn't New Hampshire. Also really enjoyable was the unconventional ending, I don't want to ruin it, but I appreciated it fully for not ending like you might expect. I certainly enjoy this novel and will pick up Carlos Ruiz Zafón's other young adult novels, should he write any more. I also look forward to reading this in it's original Spanish. Go out and pick this book up it was well written and a pleasure to read.

First Line:
"Max would never forget that faraway summer when, almost by chance, he discovered magic."

Favorite Line:
"Alicia woke shortly after sunrise to find two amber eyes staring intently at her from the window."

Disclaimer: I was sent this item to review. This does not influence my opinion.
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Plot holes galore

Looking at the Amazon plot summary, this book seems to have all the elements present that would suggest that this would turn out to be exactly the sort of story that I really enjoy. And true enough, it started out well. However, about three-quarters of the way through I began getting a sinking sensation that all the plot elements were not, in fact, going to tie together in the end---and I was correct. I thought the shreds of plot only imperfectly masked one loophole after another. It just didn't make sense.

Still, I held out hope until the final two chapters. Not only did the conclusion make everything that happened before seem kind of pointless, but I have to say---in the strongest possible terms---that I HATED THE WAY THIS STORY ENDED. I think if the final two chapters had been different, I still would have given this a weak recommendation despite my misgivings, but as it stands---nope, not going to happen.

It wasn't a bad book in terms of the skill of the author (though as with any translation, you have to wonder just how much of the author's original voice and vision are getting through). But I thought it had major logical inconsistencies; some real problems with style over substance. And as I said---there's that horrible ending that left me with a very negative feeling about the entire enterprise.
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Disappointing early Zafon

This is Zafon's first novel, just published in English for the first time. It was intended for a young adult audience, though in the preface, Zafon says he hopes that older readers will be open to it. Many of the traits that make "Shadow of the Wind" an enjoyable novel are present--vivid characters and setting, haunting atmosphere--but they are not very well handled in "Prince of the Mist." The opening of the novel is promising, but it tails off badly, and the ending is abrupt and painful. The writing page-to-page is very evocative, but it leads nowhere. Once cannot blame the translation, as the author, whose English seems excellent (he lives in California part of the time), says in the Q and A that follows the novel, that he worked very closely with the translator, and even that, when the Spanish couldn't readily be expressed in English, he wrote English passages to make his meaning perfectly clear.

Only interesting if you have an interest in the development of this author's writing.
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Anyone younger than me is a baby.

Carlos Ruiz Zafon was born in Barcelona in 1964. He is probably best known for "The Shadow of the Wind", while "The Angel's Game" - that book's prequel - became the fastest selling book of all time in Spain. "The Prince of Mist", which won the Edebé Award, was Zafon's first novel and was written for the young adult market.

The book opens in 1943 in the south of England. It's the middle of June and Max Carver has just turned thirteen - when his world is been turned upside down. Max's father, a watchmaker, has decided to move the family away from the city to a small town on the coast. Max is initially devastated, as he's leaving everything he's ever known - and, as they're leaving the following day, he doesn't have long to say his goodbyes.

Max, his two sisters (Irina and Alicia) and their parents travel down to their new home by train. Having been broken-hearted about leaving the city, the trip cheers Max up a great deal though. He falls in love with the sea the instant he sees it and swears always to live on the coast. However, his new life isn't going to start easily - and the omens are there from the second they leave the train. (The station's clock, bizarrely, is moving backwards and Irina is adopted by a foul-smelling, malevolent-looking cat. Max could almost have sworn the creature was waiting on their arrival...) The family's new home, right on the beach, has been lying empty for several years - probably due to its tragic history. The house had been built by a doctor called Richard Fleischmann in 1925. His son, Jacob, was born the following year...but Jacob sadly drowned aged seven, and his father didn't last long afterwards. It didn't take Mrs Fleischmann long to move out and put the house up for sale - though Max's father was the first to pay any interest. There's also a mysterious - and very spooky - Garden of Statues near the house that Max is quick to explore. The statues are circus characters, with an evil-looking clown taking pride of place at the garden's centre. (Oddly, Max suspects the statue may even have moved while he was in the garden). At the clown's base is a strange symbol - a six-pointed star, enclosed in a circle. In time, Max will see that symbol again...

Max soon becomes friendly with Roland, a local boy called who's a few years older than our hero. Roland lives with his adoptive grandfather, Victor - who built and runs the town's lighthouse. Victor, officially, was inspired to build the lighthouse after surviving a shipwreck many years earlier - and Roland himself makes regular dives to his grandfather's old ship. However Victor has his secrets and, from his lighthouse, he's really watching out for a dangerous character known as the Prince of Mist. Unfortunately, Max, his family and Roland aren't safe...

Although it's definitely geared towards the teen market, the gothic spookiness that was present in "The Shadow of the Wind" and "The Angel's Game" is present. A quick, easy and enjoyable read, certainly recommended.
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Huge disappointment

I loved Zafon's earlier novel "Shadow of the Wind", and bought this one with high expectations. Unfortunately, it turned out to be a damp squib. The storyline is weak, the writing insipid, and the plot is riddled with innumerable loopholes. The Prince of Mist is a ghost that, for reasons unexplained, chooses to make his appearance when the protagonist's family appears in the town. And someone is murdered (I don't want to spoil the fun just in case you have made the mistake of purchasing the book) after a lot of (melo)drama when the act could have been accomplished on the fist page. Don't buy it.
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Spooky, but lacking the lyrical beauty of his adult novels

I'm an ardent admirer of Zafon's work, having read and loved both The Shadow of the Wind and The Angel's Game, so I was very eager to read this novel, as soon as I heard about it. While it does have some of the same elements of the other two novels, I found The Prince of Mist lacking in ways that couldn't help but temper my enjoyment of it.

The first and most lamentable difference between this novel and Zafon's other two is in the language. Zafon writes with a lyrical beauty that I frankly covet, and part of what makes this novel inferior is its lack of that quality. I'm not sure if this is due to the fact that this is an earlier novel than the other two I've read, or because it was targeted toward a younger audience. If it is an issue with the targeted audience, then I think they have been done a disservice, because I think that younger readers can enjoy beautiful, flowing language just as much as adult readers can. Either way, I really missed the liquid quality I've come to expect from his prose, and felt that this work was less enjoyable for the lack.

I confess that I also wasn't all that fond of the narrative framework structure of this novel. The lighthouse keeper comes into play too late in the game for him to be a character about whom the reader can really care. Because it's hard to care about him, it's hard to find his story all that compelling. I think it might have done the novel more of a service had it begun with the lighthouse keeper and his story, and then shifted to the story of the Carvers. There were elements of Victor Kray's story that were deliciously creepy, but whose impact was lessened because of the fact that I wasn't emotionally involved with his character.

As with his other novels, Zafon hints at the effects of war in Spain in the forties, but I think it would have had more impact had he been a bit more explicit about just what was going on. This may be a problem with translation because, while I find it certainly conceivable that Spanish children might already have an awareness of the state of the country at that time, I'm not sure young people in the U.S. can really understand its impact. While the war certainly isn't a central feature of this book, I think a few details would have helped to create a better idea of the setting. As I read, it was easy to forget that the book was supposed to take place in the forties, for much of it felt to me like it could have been happening in the nineties.

What Zafon does well in this novel--as with all of his novels--is create a very creepy, spooky atmosphere. While I love Barcelona as the setting for his other books, I also liked that this one was set in a beach town. The change of scenery was nice, and I thought Zafon did a good job of highlighting the duality of the sea, portraying it as beautiful and wonderful at times but also sinister and unforgiving at others. As with his other books, the town was something of a character in and of itself.

Equally appealing to me is the way in which Zafon handles the supernatural elements of this book. I'm not all that fond of horror as a genre, but Zafon has a knack for gothic horror, whose sinister elements I find to have something of an elusive quality. Just what or who is The Prince of Mist? Zafon hints at his true nature, but he doesn't explicitly spell it out for the reader, and I feel that, as with his other works, there are two main interpretations: The Prince of Mist is a supernatural threat who pits the protagonists against him in a battle of good versus evil or The Prince of Mist is a metaphor for the duality of human nature, in which the protagonists are pitted in a battle of their better natures versus their more base natures. This is a literary convention that Zafon does very, very well.
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BEWARE

Like a lot of reviewers here, I was thrilled to see a 'new' novel from this author. But this is juvenile junk. The story is silly and immature. This is not a young adult novel, it is a BAD young adult novel. I'm not sure if it was written FOR young people or written BY a very young, inexperienced person. Sloppy narrative, red herrings leading no where, poor character development and ludicrous action sequences. I am begging to think that "Shadow of the Wind" was a fluke and Zafon is tapped out --- Is the author a one-trick pony?? Maybe, as his follow up to SOTW, Angel's Game, seemed like a retread of the best ideas from SOTW. Sadly, The Prince of Mist seems to have been published to just cash in on his previous success. Stay away from this junk!
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A Disappointment

Being a huge fan of Shadow of the Wind and Angel's Game I was thrilled when I saw that Zafon had a new novel coming out. I even pre-ordered it. I had no idea that it was not new and that it was geared to young adults. Zafon is a gifted writer with a very creative imagination. The book itself is fine for what it is. Being a not so young adult, it was not for me. I've saved it for when my grandchildren are a bit older. I have no problem with the writing or the story. I just wish it had been marketed more accurately. Had I known, I would have chosen to wait for his next novel and passed on this one.
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